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December 4th, 2005, 7:20 AM
ok then i have openend a rpg!(please join)
its a pokemon school:
2 Latias Fan
its a boarding school.but not justANY school there wild pokemon,the movies,cafes,and more!
we start off at the airport waving goodbye and getting on the plane.when we are on the plane we eat and act like maniacs.
then we arrive and get our first pokemon.then we stride off to our first class,breeding.
December 4th, 2005, 7:32 AM
Dude, no is going ot join this...One you need a plot. Two you can't even spell acadamy right. Go to hte RP lounge. On one of the stickies there is a thread called the Drawing Board. It is an idea disscussion. Go there and seek help. This should be closed so I am calling a mod.
December 4th, 2005, 7:40 AM
December 4th, 2005, 7:40 AM
ill be a teacher and a student. ill have charmander lets start!
December 4th, 2005, 7:49 AM
DO you think I joined? I mean come on! I was being nice in the first post and then that. What the heck? I didn't join your stupid RP. IT DOESN'T EVEN HAVE A PLOT FOR CHRIST SAKES. I am not joining htsi and would never join this and it needs to be closed.
December 4th, 2005, 7:51 AM
i mean latias fan and her post disapeared.
December 4th, 2005, 7:54 AM
Ehh...although his tone was a tad on the crude side I believe Randall-Kun was quite correct. No-one in their right mind would waste time on something that lacks both plot and setting. I don't know how many times I've told you this but;
Read the rules (http://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=48899)
And once again I would like to highlight (Bolding done by me);
Three main things are needed in a plot:
Originality: Which will draw members to the RPG, the last thing you want to do is a have a plot about a bunch of trainers going on a journey as you would see in the Pokemon Anime, no, you want a good story with a few plot twists. We are not stopping you from starting a Trainer RP, but it would be an idea to add a few plot twists and some adventure, this is what draws members to your RPG.
Detail: Description, History and emotions all come into the detail of a Plot; with out detail the plot will have no feel and therefore not attract members. Were not saying it has to be a 14 page essay, but make it more than 4 lines and add some description into it to allow members to have the idea of what the plot is about.
Interest: Originality and Detail all come into the interest of the plot. You want to draw members to the RPG so make it interesting by adding a few plot twists and furthermore, just making up your own story.
But quite frankly, I don't know why I'm even wasting my time on you. Heck, I don't know why Randall-Kun is wasting his time on you either. Odds are you aren't understanding, or even reading, a word of what we're telling you. Look, we all try to be nice to the newbies, but we expect them to listen and learn, and you have done neither. Either shape up or get out, because as it is you are just wasting time and space. <_<
December 4th, 2005, 7:58 AM
Sorry.Just saw that post and withdrawed because I don't want to get in trouble.Sorry.
December 4th, 2005, 8:00 AM
THANK YOU ALTER EGO! case closed!
December 4th, 2005, 8:04 AM
Yeah....now this should be closed...so we'll just wait for a mod to get here...
December 4th, 2005, 8:07 AM
well im SORRY>i just a stupid loser.
ill just go sob in my profile.
December 4th, 2005, 8:09 AM
beaking even more rules now. YOu just triple posted. if you dont know what that is its 3 post one after the other. Stop all this is, is spam. I am reporting this.
December 4th, 2005, 8:11 AM
well SORRY. i dont have MUCH friends.im sorry all right .close this.
December 4th, 2005, 8:18 AM
Use constructive criticism, people =/
But since technically this does have rule violations, and I was asked to close this (thanks CharMz XD But do remember I don't RP so I don't know the rules, had to read them first after your PM XP), and the owner itself asked that this be closed, I'll do it.