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Saboten
December 4th, 2005, 08:53 PM
" When the 1000 years comes. when the victim comes, book opens, and the light is white... Do they find themselves in a evil times... And they must find their purpose..."

It's a 17th century in a planet called Xile, a planet where pokemon exists... An evil king rules this world... He despises pokemons and uses them for slavery, fighting and attcking the people who are against him... There are people who agrees with king, but nobody knows who they are...

But in this hard times, people lives with it, and one wizard found this out. He then, made a many copy of the same book and send it to planet known as Risen, hoping that trainers there, would find the books and change the future of the planet.
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It's now year 2600 in planet Risen, there are high techs, robots and pokemon and trainers lives in harmony.

You, as a trainer find a mysterious book, as soon as you open it, you are sucked into the 17th century of Planet X. Nothing are high techs, and people and pokemons are suffering, under the rules of the evil King, Amu.

You and your pokemons meets with the other trainers who are sucked into the world, and you and the other trainers must live in the 17th Century and must find the way to stop the king. But while people are friendly, some may come to work for the king... And that sure isn't a good news... Can you stop him?

FORMS:

Name:
Age: (under 20)
Gender:
Appearence:
Personality:
History: (optional)
Pokemons:
Other: (optional)
RPG Samples: (I won't accept bad spellings, puntuations or with no efforts)

Utter Disaster
December 6th, 2005, 09:36 PM
I'll give it a shot.

Name: Ranson
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Appearence: brown spiked hair, red bandana, blue eyes, white tee shirt, blue jeans, white shoes, diamond necklace
Personality: Ranson is very cautious in the surroundings he's in. Sometimes, he can be a little reckless, and his recklessness usually gets him in trouble. In a battle, he is always focused and determined to win. He tries to get rid of his opponents as quickly as possible.
History: N/A
Pokemon: Swampert, Absol, Mawile, Quilava
Other: N/A
RPG Sample:

It was dark and foggy near Route 120 on Monday night. It was so foggy you couldn't see anything around you, not even your finger if put it close to your eye. This was obviously trouble for drivers. A girl in a pick-up truck was driving along the road in an area near 120. Her name was Joan. She was just coming back from an inaugeration for a School Council. The road was bumpy and uncomfortable to drive on, but it was the quickest way back home. Shortcuts have always helped Joan out, usually in tough situations. She decided to take this route so she could just go home and rest. It was a long day, and boy she needed the rest. As she continued on the road a slight fog started to roll in. Joan was getting worried but she continued on. The fog started getting thicker and thicker as Joan drove on. It was very thick, but Joan was just able to see the road. Fortree wasn't two far now. With a mile more to go, the fog completely surrounded the truck blocking the front view. Joan was very freaked out now. She stopped the truck and got out. Everything was covered in a dense fog. Not even a shadow was seen. The a light came from behind Joan. She turned her head towards the light and there were actually two lights coming towards her. It must have been another car! Joan felt a bit more confortable now. As the car came closer, it didn't seem to be slowing down. Joan looked at her truck; she turned it off, so the car wouldn't be able to see it. Joan didn't know what to do now. She jumped in front of her car and began waving her arms and screaming for the car to stop, but it was no use. The car was too close. It must have been ten feet away when Joan leaped to her left to avoid the collision, yet she didn't know where she jumped. She found herself rolling down a steep hill. She went faster and faster hitting sharp rocks on the way. As she rolled down the hill she heard the crash of the cars and what she thought was fire. She rolled for at least two minutes and at least 65 miles per hour, then she hit the ground. The first thing she felt was a sharp pain in her arm since that's where she landed. An object landed right next to her head, It was a piece of the roof of her truck. She lay there for a few minutes before she had enough strength to move. A sharp pain came in her arm again. She looked at it. Her arm was completely motionless. It must have been broken. Joan looked around her. It was still very foggy and cold, and her sweater got torn on one of the rocks. It was her worst nightmare come true. She was all alone..and useless.

Fateful
December 9th, 2005, 07:42 AM
How's this?

Name: Terra

Age: 16

Gender: Female

Apperence: Light brown hair that goes down ot her waist, deepsea blue eyes, jeans ripped and torn (now look like shorts), black shirt sleeves torn off with the words Manin! Wryrda! Hugin! (You will find out the meaning later), a spphire belt with her pokemon on it, black tennis shoes, a necklace shaped like an Espeon that she tries to keep hidden, the word yawe on her right shoulder, on her left shoulder the word otho, and the words Helgrind with Du Sundavar Freohr under it on her back.(If you ask Terra after you she has gained your trust she will tell you what the words mean and why she has some on her like tatoos depending on what you ask that is)

Personality: Shy, mysterious, adventurous, caring, cautious about her surroundings and the people around her, in a battle she won't give up no matter what the cost even if it means hurting herself she has to win (except she does care about her pokemon fainting because that means trouble), uses a clever tactic to defeat her apponent as quikly as possible, charming, and she hides all of her emotions behind an unreadable face.

History:she will tell the friends that are closest to her her past at the right time.

Pokemon: Espeon(Aiedail), Houndoom (Knurlnien), Umbreon (Shadow), Lapras (Adurna), Sneasel (Blackfire), and Fearow (Zar'roc)

Other: She sometimes uses an ancient language and has a tight bond with her pokemon. So tight that she can understand them and read their thoughts. She can also communicate with them through their thoughts.

RPG Sample:


Terra lay on her back on her Fearow Zar'roc "Just a little farther Zar'roc it says we are almost to the Dragon's Den." Terra sat up suddenly "I heard that." Zar'roc looked slightly amused Terra gasped "Look down there where the fog is it's fire it looks like two cars crashed in the fog, but I don't see anyone. Mabey we should go somewhere else it's to close to the dragons den." Fearow swiftly turned around and headed towards the Ruins of Alph when they got there they went inside and rested by a statue of an ancient pokemon.

Before she went to sleep she returned Zar'roc to his pokeball and brought out her Umbreon Shadow. Shadow gave her a look and said something to her with his mind "Alright, but just once ok." Shadow nodded in approvel. Terra closed her eyes and started to sing "Wishing on a dream that seems far off hoping it will come today. Into the starlet night foolish dreamers turn their gaze waiting on a shooting star, but what if that star is not to come will their dreams fade to nothing. When the horizon darkens most. We all need to believe there is hope. Is an angel watching closely over me. Can there be a guiding light I've yet to see. I know my heart should guide me, but there's a hole whitin my soul. What will fill this emtiness inside of me. Am I to be satitisfied without knowing. I wish then for a chance to see. Now all I need <desperatly> Is my star to come." As Terra finished Shadow fell asleep at the sound of her beutiful voice that filled the ruins and could sooth any wild beast.

"Good night Shadow tomorrow we are on the move again."

Saboten
December 12th, 2005, 05:50 PM
Both of you are disaccepted. Utter Disaster, I need you to seperate it into paragraphs and MariaJet, try to seperate the paragraphs and try to put a new line every new speaker, other than that, it's alright.

Fateful
December 12th, 2005, 05:56 PM
I only put one paragragh though and what do you mean by lines for every new speaker only Terra is talking in it and don't forget she can here her pokemon's thoughts.

Utter Disaster
December 12th, 2005, 09:33 PM
It was dark and foggy near Route 120 on Monday night. It was so foggy you couldn't see anything around you, not even your finger if put it close to your eye. This was obviously trouble for drivers.

A girl in a pick-up truck was driving along the road in an area near 120. Her name was Joan. She was just coming back from an inaugeration for a School Council. The road was bumpy and uncomfortable to drive on, but it was the quickest way back home. Shortcuts have always helped Joan out, usually in tough situations. She decided to take this route so she could just go home and rest. It was a long day, and boy she needed the rest.

As she continued on the road a slight fog started to roll in. Joan was getting worried but she continued on. The fog started getting thicker and thicker as Joan drove on. It was very thick, but Joan was just able to see the road. Fortree wasn't two far now. With a mile more to go, the fog completely surrounded the truck blocking the front view. Joan was very freaked out now. She stopped the truck and got out.

Everything was covered in a dense fog. Not even a shadow was seen. The a light came from behind Joan. She turned her head towards the light and there were actually two lights coming towards her. It must have been another car! Joan felt a bit more confortable now. As the car came closer, it didn't seem to be slowing down. Joan looked at her truck; she turned it off, so the car wouldn't be able to see it. Joan didn't know what to do now. She jumped in front of her car and began waving her arms and screaming for the car to stop, but it was no use. The car was too close.

It must have been ten feet away when Joan leaped to her left to avoid the collision, yet she didn't know where she jumped. She found herself rolling down a steep hill. She went faster and faster hitting sharp rocks on the way. As she rolled down the hill she heard the crash of the cars and what she thought was fire. She rolled for at least two minutes and at least 65 miles per hour, then she hit the ground.

The first thing she felt was a sharp pain in her arm since that's where she landed. An object landed right next to her head, It was a piece of the roof of her truck. She lay there for a few minutes before she had enough strength to move. A sharp pain came in her arm again. She looked at it. Her arm was completely motionless. It must have been broken. Joan looked around her. It was still very foggy and cold, and her sweater got torn on one of the rocks. It was her worst nightmare come true. She was all alone..and useless.

There, ya happy?

Fateful
December 12th, 2005, 09:35 PM
I edited how is it now Soboten?