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Random Plushie
December 5th, 2005, 09:20 PM
This is just some random thing I wrote for English..

..And I felt like sharing it with y'all. ^o^



Present




There is a present..
Sitting under the tree

There is a present..
Oh yay, it's for me!

There is a present..
Wrapped up with care

There is a present..
Try not to stare


I tear into it quickly
The gift inside revealed



..It's not what I wanted
My disappointment is not easily concealed


There is a present..
I don't want it anymore

There is a present..
To be forgotten forevermore

Kurono
December 5th, 2005, 09:24 PM
I didn't know Plushie wrote poetry! And its simply full of joy as you usually are. Well from the start anyway...then it seeps into disappointment....truly nice RanPlu..

Random Plushie
December 5th, 2005, 09:29 PM
Ooh, hi hi Cha-cha! Didn't say 'hi' to you properly yet. XD

Anyways, yah.. I felt like writing about how most people just throw away their presents if they don't want them, even though the person who gave it to them gave it out of love.. o.o

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Kurono
December 5th, 2005, 09:40 PM
Neh, its true actually...people and material objects...some people are just too ignorant to see through that...yeah..I was reminded of that by teh poem...XD

Random Plushie
December 5th, 2005, 09:41 PM
And we have the first person who understands.. XD

Ibuberu
December 5th, 2005, 09:42 PM
Another great poem Plushie!
Looks like you've a knack for writing!^^

Yeah,the meaning's there,about people forgetting presents.
So true Plushie,so true.*wipes away tear from eye*

Random Plushie
December 5th, 2005, 09:46 PM
Thankies, Yibber. ^^

Awesome. I totally made ya cry.

Grr, I have to stop replying after every single post.. I'm being too hyper. o.o

Kurono
December 5th, 2005, 09:48 PM
You'd be able to do that easily if you could turn this into your own poetry thread thing..XD And ask someone to change the name or something..

Bleh..I'm more tired than a dead monkey high on crack...So I'll go ta bed...see y'all..XD

Caroline
December 5th, 2005, 10:45 PM
It's a very nice poem.
Those emotions are quite true also. When we get a present we get excited by it and unwrap it pretty fast, then we realize that it's something we don't like, so we pretend we like it and then it's just forgotten and never touched again.

Well done. I really did enjoy reading this poem!

Alter Ego
December 6th, 2005, 02:22 AM
Why Plushie, I didn't know you were a poet. ^^ Well, okay, actually I did kind of know after I read a certain other poem of yours, but anyhow; this is a very nice piece I think, and I like the way you bring out the whole emotional process of getting a bad gift. The building excitement before its opening, the dissapointment, and the forgetting. It's kind of a sad truth really, but itt's not really just the thought that counts, despite what people say. -_-

Anyways, I still enjoyed reading it. ^^

Random Plushie
December 6th, 2005, 07:39 AM
Aw, thankies guys.. ^^

Perhaps I'll post another poem from English sometime soon. Meh.

Smarties-chan
December 6th, 2005, 09:22 AM
Since when has teh Random Plushie been writing poetry? It flows great and gave me a christmasy feeling ^_^