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Demon_Slayer
December 7th, 2005, 11:00 AM
character info:
Name: Jeremiah
Hair color : Gold/blonde
Body weight : 90pounds
age: 13
Eye color : blue
hair length : medium/ long

The Wars Between Heaven and Hell

Chapter 1 : The Accident

Dec.24, 5:00 pm, 2004

I was running around when I bent down to make a snowball, Bam I was hit. My girlfriend laughed at me and said, "you cant get me !" . She ran across the road, And a driver lost control of her car, the car hit my girlfriend. Tears filled my eyes, and dripped slowly down my cold cheeks as I ran to her side. She spoke " I love you Jeremiah" and she gripped my hand the driver ran over to me and my girlfriend. " I'll call 911" the driver said, while the snow fell onto her beanie cap , about 2 or 3 minutes later the paramedics and cops arrived, They put Dia onto the stretcher and carried her into the back of the paramedic van and I got in. Tears still rushing out, my parents ran up to the Van telling me they'll meet me at the hospital, I held Dia's hand she was still mubbling "I love you Jeremiah" as her breath started to get fainter, I got close to her, And spoke "I love you to Dia" she looked at me and smiled she said, "dont let go of my hand". I answered ,"ok Dia I wont until you tell me to" she closed her eyes, still breathing. The Van pulled up to the hospital and I got out, my parents drove up and escorted me into the hospital, The Paramedics rolled Dia into the hospital and immediatley escorted her to her Room on the 3rd floor. I followed and waited until the doctor came out, He had bad news "Are you Jeremiah ? " the doctor asked, "yes" I replied, "come with me". He walked me down the hall , and said, "she isnt going to make it" the doctor said holding my shoulder. "what?" I asked and tears filled my eyes. "She only has a little time left do you want to see her? " the doctor asked, "Yes" I replied, and me and the doctor walked into her room, she was hooked on to IVs and some other tubes, I walked up to her bed and kneeled down, "D..Di...Dia" I said, she turned her head and said " Jeremiah hold on to me until I fall asleep". " ok Dia i'll hold on" I said and grabbed her hand, " I love you Jeremiah" she said, and she closed her eyes for the last time.

"Noooooooo! Dont leave me yet, I love you" I yelled, and the doctor walked me out of the room, my mom ran over to me, and Hugged me "Jeremiah, she is in a better place now" she said, while I cried. I turned only to see them wheeling her out of the room, I cried even more and cried even harder, she was my first love and she was gone. A doctor walked up to me an kneeled down, So he could speak with me face to face, and said "you got alot of will for a 12 year old, I am sorry you had to go through this". "I loved her" I said with tears dripping down my eyes, " I know you did, but she probably wants you to move on and have a happy life" The doctor said.

Me and my parents drove home and I ran inside to my room, I grabbed Dia's picture off my desk and hugged it, I said "I love you Dia and I will forever" Tears dripped from my eyes as I hugged her picture, my mom walked in, and said " I got something to tell you". "what is it" I said, still crying,
"it's about your real father" She said, And I looked over to my mom and said " ok". "your father was an angel not like a nice person but an angel a real angel, we met when he came down on a misson, me and you real father fell in love but Your father didnt think it was possible to love a earth women let alone marry her, so he Kept it secret, and after a few months of knowing each other, he had to leave, not knowing that his earth love was pregnant with you". "so he left without knowing you were pregnant ?". "yes" my mom said, "and since he was and angel and i was human that make you part angel part human, you have the power to do many things" my mom said. "think hard about happiness and good will think about Dia and how you loved her dont think of death" my mom said, "I will" I said, and she grasped my shoulder "now think and you'll discover what you have" she said. and I thought about the first time me and Dia met, and something happened, I was changing, My skin was changing into a pure white color. Wings sprouted out of my back, and my whole body was pure white.

"now you know Jeremiah do you want to see Dia?" My mom said, "Yes I want to tell her I love her" I said, "then say Destination, Heaven" my mom said, " Destination Heaven" I spoke, and a Beam of light surrounded me and zapped me up to Heaven. I walked around, and there before me, stood a building, I ran forward and into the building. "Welcome to the new arrival building, are you Jeremiah? " asked a strange man in white, "Yes but i'm not dead of course i'm alive but only i'm an angel" I replied, "Yes I know and you wish to see GOD?" the man asked, "Yes" I said. "then I will take you to him" the man said and walked my into a white door, there stood a throne where GOD sat upon," Jeremiah, I known about you for sometime, you are a half breed, and your father was Chris right? " said GOD "Yes" I replied,"Your girlfriend just died, and you wish to see her" GOD said, "Yes I do wish to see her" I replied, "then i'll have someone escort you to her, she is in fact a new arrival" GOD said. A women approached me and grabbed my hand, and walked me to Dia. "Jeremiah?" said Dia, who was happy as I was, "Dia !" I ran forward and kissed her, "I wanted to tell you I love you" I said. " And I wanted to tell you it was ok to move on" she said,"Dia i'll always love you in my heart, and i'll never forget you, i'll visit you, and if i do find someone else, i'll never ever forget you." I said, "Live a long life Jeremiah, I will always love you but it is time for you to move on."

Demon_Slayer
December 7th, 2005, 08:39 PM
Chapter 2 : A love found
Jan.23,Jeremiah's Birthday,2005

Summer was near, and I had just visited Dia, When I got back from Heaven immmediatly I had to go to school. Just another day of Algebra, Physical sience, LSS,Reading,Writing, and the most boring subject of all, History. When I was walking down the hall, a girl Walked right by me, She was the hottest girl in school and she believed in GOD, She glanced at me and smiled as I walked by. I turned and asked her if she'd like to go out some time, she Replied "sure popuri's pizza palace? at 6:00 pm?", I replied "Ok cool" we walked away from one another, My friend said "Reith said yes ? wow your a lucky guy dude both christian and hott you are so lucky". "Yeah I hope Dia isnt mad that I am going out with Reith," I replied.Thoughts of Dia still remained, but I knew she wanted me to move on.
After school, I went home And my mom was waiting for me, A package had come from the angel Alliance, an Elite army of angels who fight demons. I opened it,
Only to see a watch,and a note that read:

" Dear Jeremiah,
This watch is for you, keep in mind this is no normal watch,
It is an attack alarm watch, keep it with you at all times.
If it goes off, it means you are needed in Heaven, and further more,
You should come prepared, I urge you to think about weapons you could use
if an emergency were to come up. I must go now, maybe one day you'll be a leader in one of our armies.

Sincerely,
Scott White a.k.a Mr. White "

I fitted the watch onto my wrist, and it said, "Attacker alarm watch activated". I went up to my room , and I took out some stuff his father had left him. It was weapon supplies, including a secret to a special bullet that in one shot, could kill a demon. He also read notes for theguns that were needed to harness these bullets, the 357.magnum nick named "handcannon" it was the strongest Magnum in the magnum family. Quickly I got to work. Reith came by my house at 5:30 She came up to my room, And sat down next to me while I made the guns. "what are those for?" she asked, "I'm just making them for fun" I said. She sat next to me and leaned of and she gave me a nice kiss on the lips.I sat the astonished and with quick reaction, I pulled her torwards me and started kissing her. When wewe done kissing, she just sat there in beside me Looking at me as if she just wanted to kiss some more "Jeremiah, I'll love you till the day I die" she said to me. I blushed and looked at my guns, there they layed finished, "I'm finished making my guns now" I said to Reit while nearly drooling over her, "Can I kiss you now?" she asked, "yes" I replied, and started kissing her again. Me and her were truly in love as if we were together ever since the beginning of time.

We continued kissing,me mom walked in, and left real quick after seeing us kissing. I ignored it and Kept kissing Reith, but My Attack alarm watch went off. I had to tell her now. "Reith there is something I have to tell you" I said,While kissing her, "It can hold on" she said. I put her face against mine and whispered into her ear my deepest secret.She was astonished, I said, "you cant tell anyone" and she replied " I'll never tell anyone I promise." . I turned into angel form and got out of there as fast as possible. "glad you could make it" said mr. white, "Its time I gave you this, your father's sword he made it himself." Mr.White said. " you can go now" He said, and I turned and walked out the door. When I got back, Reith was waiting for me, I turned back to normal and walked forward. I started to kiss her, When a news bulletin came on the TV " We bring you important news, A war has been announced the next world war, it is believed that this war is already under way,People who live in California Please do not panic take cover in bomb shelters near you." The announcer said."Go now Reith to the bomb shelter at our school take cover I have some business to take care of." I said and ran out the door. Reith ran out after me, and drove with my family and her's to the bomb shelter, it was time, I geared up and headed out torwards the middle of the war but before I left my street I walk back into my house, only to see the announcer on TV again. " It has been announced, All enemy armies seem to be preparing nuclear weapons, Please anyone who is watching this Find a safe place." the announcer said. "oh no!" I said, and ran out the door I turned angel and flew out to the middle of it all and the Nuclear warheads launched, I stayed floating in the air. Power was starting to over whelm me, I out stretched my arms, I closed my eyes and whispered "stop it". I opened my eyes And yelled "STOP IT!" and time froze, I used all my power to stop the bombs . After it was all over I fell to the ground Powerless and unconcious.

I woke up a few hours later, to see that it had worked I stopped the apocalypse, it was all over the bombs were destroyed, And I everyone was alive. I turned angel and with barely any power left I flew to heaven." Jeremiah ! are you ok? " said Mr. White, he helped me over to a seat which was in GOD's office."I see you stopped it Jeremiah, You saved millions of people's lives. And used all of the power you had to stop the bombs, I think you will be able to lead one of the angellic armies now. and You want to get you power back yes?" God said, "I want to get back to earth and yes with my power back" I said.GOD replenished my power and I went back to earth.
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still more of chapter 2 to come

Demon_Slayer
December 10th, 2005, 08:14 AM
Chapter 3: The battle of NecroFear

Feb.1st, 2005

I woke up on a saturday, And my watch went off...It was the call the call that would send me into battle. I went to heaven immediatly running through the big doors to the office of GOD. "Jeremiah it is time the battle of Necrofear is about to begin, I will sen notification to your mom and Girlfriend, now go fight along side you army of angels" said GOD. I walked out the doors to the base camp there stood before me, my army I walked forward giving them instructions and data on the upcoming war. "now as you may know Necrofear is making a come back, it is time that we defeat them forever! now my army we will begin the battle." I said, opening the portal to Necrofear. Me and my army were now on enemy soil, there before me and my army stood a army of demons, I took out my sword and aimed it forward."Charge!" I yelled out while running forward, my army followed and started to attack when, another army of demons showed up to my left and another to the right we were out numbered. "out numbered? well this should be interesting" i said to myself, I ran up to the army's co leader and Swung my sword, he blocked it, And jump behind me, I swung around and swung left and right for a while, and jumped in the air, came down and sliced him in two.

I battled along side my army, killing demons left and right, but they wouldnt stop coming , it was like they had a never ending supply. I looked up into the top story of Necrofear castle, and saw the leader of the demon armies.I aimed my sword at him "you shall die" I yelled out as demons surrounded me, I fought, swinging my sword left to right, up and down enemies from all sides surrounded me while my army was off battling. I put away my sword and took out my Guns, "now perish!" I yelled out shooting demons left and right the leader watched as I slaughtered his evil army.after I was finished, I walked into the castle taking out my sword, I slowly walked up the stairs.I opened the doors and pointed my sword at the demon leader," now you shall die" I yelled at the demon. I aimed my sword at him, " lets begin shall we" I said to the demon leader. He swung his sword at me left, right, I dodged, Jumped into the air coming down with a slash, he dodged it. He hit me and I slammed him up against a wall. "now feel this!" I said, and impaled him with my sword. I pulled my sword out of his stomach and he attacked, I dodged and attacked him from the back, with an upward slash, He fell to his knees and tried to attack my legs,I jumped and dodged his attack. I jumped and fell with a downward slash killing him.

His ashes blew away, and the demon army stopped respawning, I jumped out of the top window and down to the ground, landing on my feet, I put away my sword and started unloading my guns on the demon army, while using my sword to help save ammo.I shot some more demons left and right, I could see my army through the black soot, all my soldiers were still fighting.He ran forward to be stopped by the demon army's Biggest demon and ruler of Necrofear. I took out my sword and aimed it at the giant beast "Bring it on fat boy" I yelled out to it. It swung its big fist at me, Knocking me clear across the field , I ran up to him and jumped of his back slowly climbing up, I took out my sword and stabbed it in the shoulder, it grabbed me and through me to the ground while roaring like godzilla, I stabbed him in the foot. He fell down and I jump into the air getting ready to stab it in the heart but, I was hit higher up in the air. I came down, And stabbed him in the heart, his ashes blew away and I walked across the field to my army. I killed the remaining demons with my sword and opened the portal back to heaven, I jumped in and so did my army.

"you did well Jeremiah" said GOD, "heh no problem it was just too easy," I said, and walked out the doors at the other end. I went back to earth, and my girlfriend was waiting for me in my room, I fell onto my bed, while Reith stared at me, "so whats up" I said to Reith," Nothing much just missed you" Reith said, and started kissing me. My mom walked in, while me and Reith were kissing, and walked out saying "I'll leave you two alone." . She went home at 9:00 p.m. I walked her out to my car and opened the door for her, and she went in and I went in after her. We drove Her home and drove back to my house. where I ran up stairs and fell asleep after my battle at Necrofear.

Demon_Slayer
December 11th, 2005, 07:44 AM
Chapter 4 : War between good and evil...

Feb. 10th, 2005 to feb. 12, 2005

I woke up and went down stairs to eat some breakfast but, before I reached the last step, My watch went off. "oh no not again" I said and ran upstairs. I wrote a quick not to Reith and telported to heaven I walked through the doors and into GOD's office. "Jeremiah a war has started, and this time, demons are on their way to earth you better go now with your army" he said. I ran out the doors and got together my army, I opened the portal and went down to the battle field where thousands of angels were fighting. "fight !" I yelled out to my army.I ran forward seeing a building I thought maybe it could mean the ruler is in there, I ran inside but the entrance was sealed.I focused my energy and blew the wall into pieces. I walked in taking outmy sword, and saw a strange demon gaurded by High rank demons, I speed kicked the first one and stabbed the other and jumped and telported to the next demon and stabbed him and jumped from that demon to the next and slashed him in half and I speed attacked the strange looking demon that was once gaurded. But he made a shield, blocking me.I focused my power and broke through the shield and and attacked him with my sword. He pulled out his sword and blocked me, I speed attacked him from behind, and speed attacked him in the front, and got attacked. I fel to the gorund as the demon tried to kill me, I dodged his atack and impaled him with my sword. " you think you are soo good dont you Jeremiah?" said the demon. "how do you know my name" I said. "there is a reason to why that car lost control" the demon said. " what? you killed Dia?" I said. "you better bet it, and next is Reith.." said the demon. "I think not!" I yelled. And cut him in half, anger was surging through the demon reformed it self, and attacked me. I took out my gun, evading all of his attacks, and BANG ! I shot the demon in the head blowing it all the way off and to make sure it was dead, I took out my holy bombs, that were made out of pure holy water. I through it on his ashes and walked out, demons were still coming at my army. I ran out and into the battle with my sword drawn, I waited for demons to surround me, and I jumped into the air and backdown to the earth below me and spun in a circle killing multiple demons. The earth shook as a Giant demon came up behind me, it grabbed me and through me into the ground. I got up, and another giant demon walked up behind me. "this will be fun" I said. The moster tried to hit me, but I jumped up and her missed and hit the other demon across the head, I came down and stabbed the other demon in the head, and speed attacked the other demon and stabbed it in the back, I jumped off of it, and it turned trying to hit me, but i Jumped and dodged it, and when I dodged it, the giant demon hit another demon killing it. "that was funny" I said and laughed."hey, I got an idea." I said looking for demons.

"ok dude follow me" I said. The monster chased me as I ran out into the center of of the battle field, demons by the thousands surrounded me and, my old friend the Giant walked in at the right time."come get me sissy" I yelled out to the giant demon as a demon attacked from behind me. The monster swung its fist at me and I jumped, the hit from the giant demon killed at least 10 demons. I laughed and dodged each attack, while the demon slaughtered it's own army. I hoped on several demons as I evaded the monster while it killed it's army. But one of the andgels in my army was in front of me, I jumped backwards and onto the beasts head. I stabbed the beast in the head and it fell backwards onto a couple of demons."now that was a good plan" I said to myself.

My Idea had worked out at least a quarter of the demon armies was dead for the little rampage the demon went on."for such a big head they have such little brains" I said to myself. I felt a horrible pain, and fell to my knee, I was hurting badly. "AHHHH" I screamed. My body started glowing, I was still moaning in pain, Demons surrounded me by the thousands, I was having strange pains in my back. And every part of my body was aching, the demons attacked my while I was down, but before their swords could peirce me, something happened to me, four wings popped out of my back, and my eyes were glowing. I yelled out in pain as my body was undergoing a transformation of some sort.

A angel from my army helped gaurd me from the demons, My skin turned white, pure white, and I felt stronger. "dude are you alright?" said my fellow comrade. "yeah I'll be fine you can go now and help the others I can handle this" I said to the angel who ran off and started killing demons. I took out my sword, and cut 3 demons in half with one slash, I jumped into the air and saw another giant demon coming torwards me.With blinding power, it struck me into the ground, But I grabbed it's giant hand and through it across the feild where the giant demon landed on at least 20 demons. 2 more came at me, but I wasnt going to put up with them any longer, I grabbed one's hand and swung the giant demon around and it hit the other, I let go, and jumped into the air and came down, killing the demon. I turned around and slashed up some more demons, but before I could finish one off, another giant demon walked up behind me.It hit me, but I grabbed its hand before itcould pull away and swung it around killing multiple demons, and I through across the field where it, and 30 other demons died. I started getting pains again,but after they were gone I was back to my original angel form, I grabbed my sword, and killed some demons.

Feb. 11, 2005 12a.m. to 12 a.m.
The demons were staring to go away, but it seemed the more they went away the more giant demons came in. I came up with a plan, earlier one of my troops took out a demon who was using a cannon,and it stood up on the hill 20 feet away from me. I took out my sword and Ran threw multiple crowds of demons to get to the awaiting cannon. I took out bullets from my gun,and cut them open and emptied them into a giant shell and I aimed into the middle of thousands of demons. BOOOOM! the shell flew across the field and hit the ground, exploding and killing at least 500 demons. I sat and watched as they turned to dust, after watching them perish I jumped down the hill and into the battle field, at least half of the demon army was destroyed.The day light showed, and the demons disappeared, me and my army got together."ok half of the armies are gone, so we have to destroy the other half before they can start Respawning. So I want one angel over at that cannon to the left, one on the right, and 2 in the center, we are goin to kill those demons in no time" I said. I grabbed my guns and sword and laid down to sleep.

I woke up and the sun was just going down, I readied my sword and my army got into position.The demons returned, and my army started to attack. The demons werent prepared for the doom they were about to face. But my worst fear came true, their army was larger, and had more giant demons than ever, I ran out into the battle field with most of my army. A shell blew up near me killing 2 giant demons next to me, along with 30 other demons, I fell to the ground after being injured by the blast, I looked at my arm only to see a huge burn mark.
"Ahhh! my arm" I yelled,and became very angry. I got up I pointed my sword torwards the castle where below it, were thousands of unexpecting demons. "Shoot the castle!" I yelled out. The shells fired through the air and it blew the castle apart, pieces fell everywhere killing demons left and right, and one big part fell that nearly crushed me. "Good work" I yelled out to my troops who were shooting cannons.The demon count was already down to 50, I could smell the victory but before I could get to killing them, more started to come from all corners of the battle field."hmmm more?" I said to myself and turned around. "get Jeremiah!" yelled out the demon I thought I had killed earlier. "Not today sissy" I said transforming into my stronger form. I flew up and into the arena where the demon stood. "lets finish this!"I yelled out. "fine lets see what you got put down your sword and fight like a man" he said, dropping his sword. I dropped my sword and jump kicked him, but he dodged it and pushed me up against the wall, empaling me with the sword he had dropped."too quick for you slick" said the demon. "no" I said. I was starting to bleed when he kept pushing deeper and deeper, Pain, anger,frustration, and determination filled my mind, I held my hand up and called my sword, it came to me, and I chopped off the demon's head. I pulled the sword out of my stomach and fell to the ground, I was still bleeding, I managed to pick myself up but I was too weak to attack, I fell to the ground.

Feb.12,2005, 12:00 a.m

I turned back to my normal self and I picked up my guns barely standing, I stumbled over to the corpse of the demon, And pointed my gun at his heart."Now die" I said. I blew him to pieces and fell to the ground, I was starting to feel strange again like when I first turned into my stronger form, My stomach started to heal itself, and my body was turned to normal, about a minute later I was healed, but I was still feeling weird, I turned into my angel form and flew out into the battle field. on my way into battle I fell out of the sky, and to the ground 12 feet below me. I got up and I was in the middle of the battlefield, a cannon fired and blew up right next to me, again. Killing the rest of the demons, I got up with my arm still burnt, and ran out into the open. "Lets go home guys!" I yelled to my troops. The lined up behind me ."are you ok?" asked a troop. "yeah I'll be fine" I said.I opened up the portal and went home, and all the angels in my army went to their squadrants.