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Random Plushie
December 8th, 2005, 12:35 PM
Theres something amiss in that house over there..
That old run-down house,
With windows that glare.


Theres something amiss in that house over there..
For hours on end,
Ill sit down and stare.

Im very sure of myself-
For deep in my heart, I see,
That theres something amiss in that house over there..
'Tis very clear to me.




Last night I saw a monster..
In the window of that house.
The very windows that glare at me,
Just like an arguing spouse.


Mother says its my imagination,
That what I say aint true.
But I know there was a figure there,
Real as the deep sea blue.



One by one,
A mystery is spun,
From within that old weird pad.


I know youre just as baffled..

I know youre just as rad.


You know you are, so will you..
Just go to that house with me, please?


The weird old house is inviting..
The other kids wont tease.


So come on, neighbor, come with me-
You know it needs to be.
Come on, neighbor, come with me-

And unravel the mystery.






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Yeah, I felt like writing a poem at random again.

Pete
December 8th, 2005, 01:41 PM
OMFG!!!
PLUSHIE POEM!!!!

Anyway down to rating...

It's very good, though the lines are a bit abrupt and random in places. But hey, this is Plushie.

GRADE-A4

Ibuberu
December 8th, 2005, 04:15 PM
Tis another great poem Plushie!
Dude,the descriptions and feelings you used were so,right!

And,the randomness just makes it better,well,for me anyway.XD