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code zerro the deluge
December 9th, 2005, 09:38 AM
cheer is the reason
and winter is the season
for all of of us out there

people bringing
presnts and it seems perfect in the air
what a time we are in
and then again with are friends
we can smile
and laugh a while

forever and ever
Christmas is just something that makes us glad
even when you are sad or mad
so put a smile on you face
and go walk in your place
couse it ain't no cheer without every one

it ain't the games
it ain't the toys
it is the feeling when we laugh and make noise
couse christmas is that day
to smile always
so tell your family i love you
tell them that you do

couse it is the feeling of all
it is the best of aaaaaaaaallllllllllll!

tell the truth it isn't that good

Rai
December 9th, 2005, 11:32 AM
Well....I thought it was cute ^.^ I like the way it rhymes. And what it is saying is very ture. =3

code zerro the deluge
December 9th, 2005, 11:38 AM
thank you very much i thought it wasn't to good

phantom_zangetsu
December 9th, 2005, 11:16 PM
sigh many poets here are starting to get the x-mas spirit...i wonder when will i start geting one? well the poem rhymes wickedly....a few incorrected spellings but yeah, its good nice!!! i give it a 89/100