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Furea-chan
December 10th, 2005, 01:09 PM
I'm crying alone in the dark.
Laying mesrablily in the corner.
Listening to you two arguing outside
my door.
Please stop I can't take much more.

Because I amke one little mistake.
Is that all it's gonna take?
Just one little mistake cause thing to go wild
And cause you to scream and curse at your
own child.

Well I think that you've finally stopped,
Cause' all can here is the sound of the clock.
It's going tick tock tick tock
I finally pull up some courage
and come out of my room.
Your sitting on the couch and looking like a goon.
I heard a door slam and I could tell Dad was pissed
I couldn't belive how much I had missed

Cause of one little mistake
One little mistake
I couldn't take it any longer.
And now Ma pissed at my father.

Just one little mistake will make you go wild
and make you sware at your own daughter

Fin.

Breezy-Chan
December 10th, 2005, 01:24 PM
So this is what you've been sitting in the corner working on for the past 3 days isant it.Well it sure was worth it I think it's awersome.

Caroline
December 10th, 2005, 08:03 PM
This is pretty impressive.
It reminds me of Lindsay Lohan's new song, Confessions Of a Broken Heart. I also like how you wrote about parents arguing. It something that a lot of children have to go through.
Also - it's good how you reflected on how the daughter was feeling.
You have done a fantastic job! ^_^

Furea-chan
December 11th, 2005, 08:36 AM
Thank you Bree and Caroline.My parents got in a big arguement the other day and this is the way I can relive myself of my pain and sorrow.