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Zerro
December 12th, 2005, 11:29 PM
There once was a day that I thought I saw so clearly,
Everyone, every where was just so cheery.
But now things are differnt,
I just can't make that infernence.
Why must I live this way,
With my eyes blined by your ways.
Life I just can't escape,
and it's all because you.
Yea there once was a time that I thought everything was perfect,
Living in a world not ment for the burnt hearted.
Now I know thats just not true.
You killed the sight that I once called devine,
Now your pouring my soul back in the vine
You gave me what I asked for,
You gave me the truth,
You gave me just the right amount of wine.
Thank you,
For the Sight of the Blind

Sankari
December 13th, 2005, 09:49 AM
There once was a day that I thought I saw so clearly,
Everyone, every where(everywhere) was just so cheery.
But now things are differnt(different),
I just can't make that infernence(inference).
Why must I live this way,
With my eyes blined(blinded) by your ways.(?)
Life I just can't escape,
and it's all because you.
Yea(Yeah,) there once was a time that I thought everything was perfect,
Living in a world not ment(meant) for the burnt hearted(burnt-hearted).
Now I know thats(that's) just not true.
You killed the sight that I once called devine(divine),
Now your(you're or you are) pouring my soul back in the vine(.)
You gave me what I asked for,(.)
You gave me the truth,(.)
You gave me just the right amount of wine.
Thank you,(...[it adds dramatic effect])
For the Sight of the Blind

This poem is very unique. It's not the usual feeling you get from a sad love poem. It's hard to explain.

Anyways, I corrected some errors in the poem. Just being helpful ^^

Zerro
December 13th, 2005, 07:24 PM
lol, thank you, I wrote it in like 5 mins on the spot very late last night. It dosn't help that my grammar and spelling sucks anyway.