Kaiju Death Matches. Rated PG-16 for violence.

[~\"Metal Sonic"/~]

Every few weeks or so, I pick 2 SI-Fi monsters, and they fight! You can request a match if you want...
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THIS WEEKS MATCH:

Gorosaurus (Showa) http://www.tohokingdom.com/web_pages/kajiu_bios/gorosaurus.htm
vs.
Orga (Millennium) http://www.tohokingdom.com/web_pages/kajiu_bios/orga.htm#orga

Arena: Boston.


Monters....
FIGHT!
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It was a normal day in Boston. Kids were playing. Adults were working. Everything was fine... until a large mouth burst out of the ground. It consumed many people, and destroyed a nearby car. That mouth belonged to Gorosaurus, a gargantuan beast from Japan's monster island. Goro roared, claiming his terratory. However, at that exact moment, a spaceship crashed down, and opened up, revealing Orga, the feared space beast. Orga roared at Gorosaurus. Orga wanted Boston just as much as Goro, and the only way to settle it was to fight.
Orga lunged at Gorosaurus and barged into him with his rediculusly large sholder. The impact sent Goro into the John Hancock building, destoying it. However, Gorosaurus wasn't a monster that would let the opponent win. He lunged at Orga, taking a bite of his long arm. Orga screeched in pain as blood spilt out of his arm. Goro cackled loudly. Orga took this chance to grab Gorosaurus and throw him on the ground. Orga then continued to bash Gorosaurus with his fist, until Gorosaurus started to bleed. Goro got up on his tail and kicked Orga square in the chest, knocking him over. Goro then opened his jaw 180, and took a huge bite out of Orga's waste. Orga roared in absolte dismay and pain, as he was thrown to the ground like a rag doll.
Orga had had enough. A sickening crack was heared as Orga unhinged his jawbone, and a red webbing covered his jaw. He then bit on Goro and proceded to consume him whole. Goro struggled to get free, but couldn't. His tiny arms couldn't get him free, and kicking Orga would just get him caught in Orga's mouth even more. Goro's mouth couldn't get a good grip on Orga, so he knew he was doomed.

So, at the end of the day, a Thing that looked exactly like Gorosaurus, but wasn't, stood victorious in Boston. His belly was twice the size he was, and it made sudden bubbling sounds. Orga-saurus walked over to a nice, flat piece of land as his stomach sagged on the ground and jiggled. The gargantuan Dino clone layed down and took a nap, knowing that hw would conqor more cities after this day, as the origonal dinosaur rested forever in the belly of the beast, being digested.
The end
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See 'ya next time!
~YtU, onwer of Orga-saurus.

[Super_Lawliet]

It was alright, but a few things:

It was a normal day in Boston. Kids were playing. Adults were working. Everything was fine... until a large mouth burst out of the ground. It consumed many people, and destroyed a nearby car. That mouth belonged to Gorosaurus, a gargantuan beast from Japan's monster island. Goro roared, claiming his terratory. However, at that exact moment, a spaceship crashed down, and opened up, revealing Orga, the feared space beast. Orga roared at Gorosaurus. Orga wanted Boston just as much as Goro, and the only way to settle it was to fight.

You can change it around. Sort of spice it up. Something like this:

It was a normal day in Boston; kids were playing and adults were working. Everything was fine, that is until a large mouth burst forth from the ground, consuming many people and a nearby car. This mouth belonged to Gorosaurus, the gargantuan beast from Japan's Monster Island. Goro roared a victory claiming his territory, but was cut short as a spaceship crashed down and slowly opened. Coming forth from the ship's innards was Orga, the feared space beast, Orga roared at Gorosaurus, clearly want Boston as much as Gorosaurus. The only clear way to settle this matter, was a fight to the death.

Somewhat like that. Oh, one more thing...

So, at the end of the day, a Thing that looked exactly like Gorosaurus, but wasn't, stood victorious in Boston.

You can mix this p to create something like this:

At the end of the day, a creature that looked identical to Gorosaurus but was not, stood victorious upon the arena that was Boston.

All in all, a clean 7/10. You just need a little more development.