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Runasutaru
December 23rd, 2005, 11:13 AM
--Removed due to excessive amount of format errors since I posted it.--

QFred
December 26th, 2005, 09:39 AM
Cool, I like it!
I like the relationship of Wakachamo and Runasutaru evolution of the fic!

It could be more developted, though!

Super_Lawliet
December 31st, 2005, 06:57 PM
Vey good. Ienjoyed this very much. The title caught my eye, which gave the impression on an interesting story. Funny AND intersting. Just a tiny bit of development is need, not alot. All in all a 10/10. Hoping to see more fics from you in the future.

Runasutaru
January 1st, 2006, 06:45 AM
Thanks for your review Mort Rainey!

I was improving it a bit already, QFred gave me some advice over MSN, but Ive been a little occupied lately, and not in the mood to write really. ^_^;

Ill try to write a new chapter and improve these two chapters soon, its just because I am now hatching for a Shiny Torchic, and that IS time consuming. XP