Mail Jeevas
December 28th, 2005, 07:58 AM
Hey this is MulteonDX and I'm making this Fan-fic, but it's not about any anime, it's based on the summer vacation I'm having right now, but wth altered things and names...
please, any suggestion/critic is accepted (but no swears please)
Characters:
Matt
Age: 16
Hair style & color: Brown and crispy
Personality: Very shy and lonely, but when he gets to know someone, it will be funny, joking and caring. He tends to care about the others more than for himself. He also do a lot of favors without expecting anything from anyone. He plays the guitar and the piano (It's not irrelevant in the story)
Rina
Age: 14
Hair style & color: Black and shoulder lenght, but she tends to use a pony tail
Personality: She's very shy too but it's more sociable than Matt. He knew him in her friend's house (Who is Matt's cousin). She likes to walk, and to go out. She will trust someone if she thinks he deserves it.
Marian
Age 14
Hair style & color: Brownish and curly (shoulder lenghted)
Personality: She has a bad experience with the boys she likes, but she is a very good matchmaker. She knows her cousin is in love with Rina, but she doesn't know if Rina feels the same. She only trust people after a long time of knowing them.
Vicky
Age 14
Hair style & color: Golden and curly (like golden-locks but a tad bit longer)
Personality: She's not shy, she's cute and very sociable, but she speaks a lot. She is one of the best friend of Marian and knows about Matt's dirty little secret (lol). She can make friends in matter of seconds.
Sam
Age 16
Hair style & color: Black and long(Waist lenghted)
Personality: She's Matt's other cousin (there are 3 of 'em). She's very sweet when she wants something, but when she can get anything from you will treat you "normally". She changes moods very fast.
Caroline
Age 18
Hair style & color: Black and medium lenghted
Personality: She's Matt's third cousin. She always ask advice to Matt, whether she takes it or not. Matt believes she's the only one that loves him really (As a cousin can love another cousin, obviusly, like platonically), but she says that Sam and Marian have different ways to show their feelings.
Chapter 1 - The day of the arrival:
Matt traveled from his city (In Buenos Aires, Argentina) to a city near the beach called "Mar del Plata". This is where his cousin's house is. Matt arrieved at the evening, hoping that someone would help him with the things he had brought. Unfortunatly for him, no one was there waiting, instead he had to take a cab to get to his cousin's house. When he arrieved, Marian helped him with a handbag while Matt was carrying a Bag, a suitcase, his guitar and his coat (Poor Matt...). After he set everything in his room, Matt went off to talk to Marian.
"Hey Marian, how long has been?" He asked "1 year? That's too much waiting to come back to see my favourite cousins!" he said as Marian laughed "Stop liying!" she said joking. "So... how's... you know..." Said Matt with a semi-whispering voice.
"You mean how's Rina?" She replied "Oh, she's inside the studio using the computer" She said
"WHAT?!" Matt said scared. He didn't want Rina to find out that he felt something very strong for her. "Why you didn't told me?" Asked Matt
"You never asked!" Said Marian while going towards the studio "Hey Rina, looks who's here" she said to Rina, who was using the computer and didn't even heard what Matt said.
"Oh!" Said Rina while getting on her feets "Hi Matt!" She said as she aproached to Matt "It's been a while" Matt said. She tried to kiss him but Matt was very distracted and was looking towards the computer, so he "accidently" kissed Rina on her lips.
"Oh sorry!" Said Matt "It was not on purpose"
"It's alright" said Rina. She was blushed, same as Matt
After saying hi to everyone in the house, Matt went upstairs to make arrenge some final things. When he was done with that, he went to the music room to play the guitar a bit.
He was then alone, playing a song by Green Day (give me novacaine).
While he was playing he heard some noises. It was Caroline. "You sing very well, Matt" She said. "Well thanks!" Said Matt with a giant smile on his face. "Do you happen to know who likes that song too?" She asked. "I dunno" He said.
"Rina loves that song" Answered Caroline
"Really?" Said Matt "So then I'll have to play it more often..." he said.
after a few hours playing with the videogames, Matt, Rina and his cousins were absolutely tired. They all went to sleep each on in his one bed and Caroline in her room.
When asleep, Matt had a strange feeling, like if he had something on his lips, when he oponed his eyes, he saw Rina kissing him. She continued kissing him even knowing that he was awake. When she finished, Matt asked her: "Why?" and she didn't not response...
end of chapter 1
please, any suggestion/critic is accepted (but no swears please)
Characters:
Matt
Age: 16
Hair style & color: Brown and crispy
Personality: Very shy and lonely, but when he gets to know someone, it will be funny, joking and caring. He tends to care about the others more than for himself. He also do a lot of favors without expecting anything from anyone. He plays the guitar and the piano (It's not irrelevant in the story)
Rina
Age: 14
Hair style & color: Black and shoulder lenght, but she tends to use a pony tail
Personality: She's very shy too but it's more sociable than Matt. He knew him in her friend's house (Who is Matt's cousin). She likes to walk, and to go out. She will trust someone if she thinks he deserves it.
Marian
Age 14
Hair style & color: Brownish and curly (shoulder lenghted)
Personality: She has a bad experience with the boys she likes, but she is a very good matchmaker. She knows her cousin is in love with Rina, but she doesn't know if Rina feels the same. She only trust people after a long time of knowing them.
Vicky
Age 14
Hair style & color: Golden and curly (like golden-locks but a tad bit longer)
Personality: She's not shy, she's cute and very sociable, but she speaks a lot. She is one of the best friend of Marian and knows about Matt's dirty little secret (lol). She can make friends in matter of seconds.
Sam
Age 16
Hair style & color: Black and long(Waist lenghted)
Personality: She's Matt's other cousin (there are 3 of 'em). She's very sweet when she wants something, but when she can get anything from you will treat you "normally". She changes moods very fast.
Caroline
Age 18
Hair style & color: Black and medium lenghted
Personality: She's Matt's third cousin. She always ask advice to Matt, whether she takes it or not. Matt believes she's the only one that loves him really (As a cousin can love another cousin, obviusly, like platonically), but she says that Sam and Marian have different ways to show their feelings.
Chapter 1 - The day of the arrival:
Matt traveled from his city (In Buenos Aires, Argentina) to a city near the beach called "Mar del Plata". This is where his cousin's house is. Matt arrieved at the evening, hoping that someone would help him with the things he had brought. Unfortunatly for him, no one was there waiting, instead he had to take a cab to get to his cousin's house. When he arrieved, Marian helped him with a handbag while Matt was carrying a Bag, a suitcase, his guitar and his coat (Poor Matt...). After he set everything in his room, Matt went off to talk to Marian.
"Hey Marian, how long has been?" He asked "1 year? That's too much waiting to come back to see my favourite cousins!" he said as Marian laughed "Stop liying!" she said joking. "So... how's... you know..." Said Matt with a semi-whispering voice.
"You mean how's Rina?" She replied "Oh, she's inside the studio using the computer" She said
"WHAT?!" Matt said scared. He didn't want Rina to find out that he felt something very strong for her. "Why you didn't told me?" Asked Matt
"You never asked!" Said Marian while going towards the studio "Hey Rina, looks who's here" she said to Rina, who was using the computer and didn't even heard what Matt said.
"Oh!" Said Rina while getting on her feets "Hi Matt!" She said as she aproached to Matt "It's been a while" Matt said. She tried to kiss him but Matt was very distracted and was looking towards the computer, so he "accidently" kissed Rina on her lips.
"Oh sorry!" Said Matt "It was not on purpose"
"It's alright" said Rina. She was blushed, same as Matt
After saying hi to everyone in the house, Matt went upstairs to make arrenge some final things. When he was done with that, he went to the music room to play the guitar a bit.
He was then alone, playing a song by Green Day (give me novacaine).
While he was playing he heard some noises. It was Caroline. "You sing very well, Matt" She said. "Well thanks!" Said Matt with a giant smile on his face. "Do you happen to know who likes that song too?" She asked. "I dunno" He said.
"Rina loves that song" Answered Caroline
"Really?" Said Matt "So then I'll have to play it more often..." he said.
after a few hours playing with the videogames, Matt, Rina and his cousins were absolutely tired. They all went to sleep each on in his one bed and Caroline in her room.
When asleep, Matt had a strange feeling, like if he had something on his lips, when he oponed his eyes, he saw Rina kissing him. She continued kissing him even knowing that he was awake. When she finished, Matt asked her: "Why?" and she didn't not response...
end of chapter 1