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Sumomo & Kotoko
December 28th, 2005, 12:23 AM
I write to many poems and songs that I'm making a thread so I can post all of them in here.
I'll start it off with my latest song, its a slow one so thats why its short.

Unkillable Love

You can take us apart,
You can lock us up.
You can silences our voices,
But no matter what you do,
Our love will always shine through.

You may forbid us from eachother,
You may move far away.
You may do the unthinkable,
But our love is unkillable.

It doesen't matter where we go,
Doesen't matter what we do.
Aslong as you think of me,
I'll always think of you.

You might want something else,
You might have other plans.
You might get what you want,
But we still have what we need.
With our unkillable love.

[COLOR="Navy"]The Day I Died

One day,
My heart stoped beating.
Like I've died in side,
Yet I'm still living.

Other people feel laughter,
Sadness,
Hatered,
Lonelyness.

But I can't feel a thing,
I've been emotionly abused,
Had my heart broken,
And now every thing has come closed in.

I don't feel any thing any more,
I'm numb,
My emotions couldent take it any more.
So they froze them selves.

That day I died,
It was all I could take,
Now I'm left lifeless in side,
And your the one to thank.

{{Lust's Veyron/Raven's Phoenxi}}

Midori Chi
December 28th, 2005, 08:52 AM
*smiles*
This is a great one, like all the others.
I liked just the way you worded it. Very good.

Sumomo & Kotoko
January 3rd, 2006, 12:42 PM
I have another poem to add to the list thingy.

One of my friends IM'ed me with a request, she wanted me to write a poem about her. I (not knowing what to write about) ask her how shes feeling. So she tells me and I came up with this:

The Day I Died

One day,
My heart stoped beating.
Like I've died in side,
Yet I'm still living.

Other people feel laughter,
Sadness,
Hatered,
Lonelyness.

But I can't feel a thing,
I've been emotionly abused,
Had my heart broken,
And now every thing has come closed in.

I don't feel any thing any more,
I'm numb,
My emotions couldent take it any more.
So they froze them selves.

That day I died,
It was all I could take,
Now I'm left lifeless in side,
And your the one to thank.

Midori Chi
January 8th, 2006, 02:58 PM
Intwesting...Nicely worded..

*4.5 out of five*