Cursed
January 3rd, 2006, 02:34 AM
This is my second fanfic, but I want your honest opinion on its quality. It takes place fifteen years from today, in all four regions (Orre, Kanto, Johto, Hoenn).
Happy reading!
Epilogue:
The sky was a vicious red. An army of pokemon stood, menacingly, guarding a stone relic of an ancient being, considered a “pokegod.” They knew that a day would come when they would be needed there, but that day never came for them. People in neighboring areas came every day to see the amazing sight of so many pokemon near one shrine. The shrine is said to contain a small, octagonal slot on the great being’s forehead. The one slot is always waiting for something, and one day the slot will be filled, and the great being will perform its sacrifice ritual, casting the world into chaos.
One man was determined to prove this legend true, so he told his colleagues of his grand scheme to bring this great being to life using the GS ball, the red orb, and the blue orb. His colleagues laughed at this idea, considering him mad. He once tried this idea, but it didn’t work because right when he was about to carry out this plan, Teams Aqua and Magma stole the orbs, leaving him with no leads. One day, though, he stumbled upon a secret library underneath the ruins of Alph. There he discovered that the key was little shards buried within Regions known as Kanto, Johto, and Hoenn.
Wielding this knowledge, he set out on a journey to find these shards of the key. He himself didn’t find any, so he decided to offer evolution stones to trainers in exchange for these gems. No trainer knew what power these gems could release, and they didn’t have any use for them themselves, so they gave them to this odd man.
Happy reading!
Epilogue:
The sky was a vicious red. An army of pokemon stood, menacingly, guarding a stone relic of an ancient being, considered a “pokegod.” They knew that a day would come when they would be needed there, but that day never came for them. People in neighboring areas came every day to see the amazing sight of so many pokemon near one shrine. The shrine is said to contain a small, octagonal slot on the great being’s forehead. The one slot is always waiting for something, and one day the slot will be filled, and the great being will perform its sacrifice ritual, casting the world into chaos.
One man was determined to prove this legend true, so he told his colleagues of his grand scheme to bring this great being to life using the GS ball, the red orb, and the blue orb. His colleagues laughed at this idea, considering him mad. He once tried this idea, but it didn’t work because right when he was about to carry out this plan, Teams Aqua and Magma stole the orbs, leaving him with no leads. One day, though, he stumbled upon a secret library underneath the ruins of Alph. There he discovered that the key was little shards buried within Regions known as Kanto, Johto, and Hoenn.
Wielding this knowledge, he set out on a journey to find these shards of the key. He himself didn’t find any, so he decided to offer evolution stones to trainers in exchange for these gems. No trainer knew what power these gems could release, and they didn’t have any use for them themselves, so they gave them to this odd man.