View Full Version : XiaolinDragon's Set Display

January 7th, 2006, 4:20 PM
Well I just wanted to post them so I can get criticism and how to improve. I just staqrted making Sets with a new style that I was taught. SO it's technically kind of my first but I'm just saying. I'm not trying to persuade anyone of their criticism.

Here is my first set (1-6-06)

Second (1-6-06)

Third (1-6-06)

Fourth (1-7-06)

And fifth I just made like 10 minutes ago

Please post your opinions and I'm not taking requests at the moment. If I do I will make a new thread or do it here.


rpg pokemon
January 8th, 2006, 1:36 AM
you need to add the writing on sharp to take away the blurry. Also some of the sigs have big lines going through it.

January 8th, 2006, 8:23 AM
Looks great so far. :) Just like rpg, I suggest that if you're making one side darker, make the whole thing. And, some of them have scan lines half way through.

January 8th, 2006, 9:34 AM
Ah, ok but are the big lines because it's loading or are they the scanlines?

January 8th, 2006, 9:36 AM
Uh. big lines. It's where the edge of one of the pictures would have been. :/ It's a seperation from the background, and the background of the picture, as if you made it as 2 diff. things. (If that makes sense. XD)

January 8th, 2006, 9:39 AM
Oh yeah, I kinda screwed up on that. It wasn't there until I uploaded it and I freaked out and said oh well.

January 8th, 2006, 11:04 AM
You know... you really shouldn't force people to either choose whether they either like them or don't; I'm kind of in between. I mean, I don't not like anybody's work, that's just impolite, but... I've honestly been tired of how everyone here has been giving themselves self pride or self pity, and no gray area in between.

January 8th, 2006, 11:23 AM
Agreed, I suggest adding some more options, "Good job." "They're good" "Better than I could do" "Looks great" "Could be better" "Half-n-half"

January 8th, 2006, 11:30 AM
Yeah I know but it's just a matter of opinion or you don't have to vote just put your comments in a post.

January 8th, 2006, 12:15 PM
A matter of your premade opinions, if that's what you mean. But most people who do this either want everyone elses pity, or they want everyone elses praise. You should probably try making things for yourself, as art, not for other people to love or hate.

rpg pokemon
January 8th, 2006, 12:28 PM
sawer its his choice. Your not always right. Yes i agree there should be a middle option but the rest are fine.

January 8th, 2006, 12:31 PM
I know it's his choice ^^ It's just a suggestion.

January 8th, 2006, 12:33 PM
sawer its his choice. Your not always right. Yes i agree there should be a middle option but the rest are fine.
THANK YOU! That's exactly what I mean.

January 8th, 2006, 12:40 PM
Meh... the fourth is good but it is far too large. The fifth is good too... =/

January 13th, 2006, 8:33 PM
Thanks, anyways I forgot to show this one that I made last week