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Pokemon EX
January 14th, 2006, 01:13 PM
Chapter 1:Petalburg city and the unknown!
Ray was a young trainer who was going to pick a water pokemon when he was ten, he had blue hair and a red Bandana with two poke balls facing each other on it.
Jack was already a trainer, he had conquered both the Johto and Kanto regions, he caught Sweecoon, Ntei and Raikui, but one day he tried to use them, and they rebelled on him, they ran away and merged their energy, And the result was why Kanto and Johto had been nearly destroyed, what was the pokemon?
The legendary pokemon Deoxys secretly merged his powers too, and the ultimate pokemon formed, Deono, Jack wanted to catch it, his ultimate goal.
He has red and orange spiked hair like flames, and A top saying, losing is for losers, winning is for winners, but power comes to only champs.
Mark was Jacks identical twin, but has blue hair
He tried to catch Jirachi, Celibi, and Deoxys, but they too rebelled and So Apparently, Lugia was destroyed, Nature failed, but Team Extreme found shadow Lugia and purified him, saving the world.
Sam was the youngest, but both he and Ray were going to get pokemon tomorrow
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GO NTEI!
Came Jacks voice, he must have been training his pokemon; it woke Sam and Ray, who both leaped out of bed and grinded down the stair rails.
Jack, what are you doing? said Ray, yawning and then he noticed it was only 2:00 in the morning
Come out side!
Ray and Sam went out
Is that
Deono, yup, Hes quite weak LV.40, Sweecoons Lv.160
But well, the rarest pokemon there is, and well, guess what now!
What? Replied Ray
I completed my Pokedex
Jack was an awesome trainer that knew how to catch a pokemon, He still wanted to be stronger, Jack didnt have every pokemon, he traded loads, he has 200 and his best was his Ntei (LV. 200)
Jack?
Ray?
When I get a pokemon can you help me train him?
A look of sadness leaked into his eye, Ray always asked this question, he wished the disease would go, but it wouldnt
Jack had pokerus, which had been passed onto him from his Swablu (Lv. 87)
Meaning he had a feeling like a electrocution if he tried to help anyone but Mark, who too had Pokerus
Im sorry bro, you already know this- he looked up- I cant
Sorry
Said his brother
but, I can give you a pokemon, Go Unknown M, I, S, C, H, E, I, F, Ray when you have all 7 you can use the mischief attack and they with form that word, they will activate ultimate power, I can give you the rarest one to catch, the others are either un common, common, or slightly rare, Here take H!
He threw a pokeball, then he basically opened his pokeball and another H zoomed in it
At 10:00 Ray and Sam rushed to get their pokemon
Take a pick Birch said, and Ray took Mudkip, Sam Treeko
So the 2 went back home, they got Jack and Mark, a equally skilled trainer as jack.
Then something phenomenal happened, a swarm of Unknown appeared, millions of mischiefs formed
Something aint right, NTEI!
The blue pokemon leaped out
Attack, Hydro pump!
But the unknowns flew out of the way, and A enormous ball hit Ntei
SWEECOON, RAIKOU, DEONO!
Four Legendary dogs began firing Psychic, Fire, Lightning and water at the unknown.
Which basically danced while dodging, A bigger ball hit the four, and Then the unknown swirled around jack, and they sang
[I][I]Mischief, mischief a world of mischief black and purple and red and green
Mischief, mischief a world of mischief, a world of which you have never seen
A place with sorrow
A place with fright
A place with death
A place without light
Mischief, mischief a world of mischief Black and purple and red and green
Mischief, mischief a world of mischief, a place of which you have never seen
Staring at the walls
Never knowing, your life is heads or tails
Flip the coin of your life
No matter what theres trouble and strife
Mischief, mischief a world of mischief Black and purple and red and green
Mischief, mischief a world of mischief, a place of which you have never seen
Spinning as we twirl
We make people hurl
We spell out your destiny
Well capture you, not set you free!
Mischief, mischief a world of mischief Black and purple and red and green
Mischief, mischief a world of mischief, a place of which you have never seen
Mischief, mischief a world of mischief Black and purple and red and green
Mischief, mischief a world of mischief, a place of which you have never seen
Mischief, mischief a world of mischief Black and purple and red and green
Mischief, mischief a world of mischief, a place of which you have never seen
Mischief, mischief a world of mischief Black and purple and red and green
Mischief, mischief a world of mischief, a place of which you have never seen
Jack stopped spinning levitated in mid air, and Was thrown Into the trees
The song once again began, and The other 3 were spinning
Mischief, mischief a world of mischief black and purple and red and green
Mischief, mischief a world of mischief, a world of which you have never seen
A place with sorrow
A place with fright
A place with death
A place without light
Mischief, mischief a world of mischief Black and purple and red and green
Mischief, mischief a world of mischief, a place of which you have never seen
Staring at the walls
Never knowing, your life is heads or tails
Flip the coin of your life
No matter what theres trouble and strife
Mischief, mischief a world of mischief Black and purple and red and green
Mischief, mischief a world of mischief, a place of which you have never seen
Spinning as we twirl
We make people hurl
We spell out your destiny
Well capture you, not set you free!
Mischief, mischief a world of mischief Black and purple and red and green
Mischief, mischief a world of mischief, a place of which you have never seen
Worlds end
Apocalypse
Solar moon
Solar eclipse
The sun is burning at every turn, Look at us now, live and learn!
Mischief, mischief a world of mischief Black and purple and red and green
Mischief, mischief a world of mischief, a place of which you have never seen
Prepare to die, live or scream
A world of which youve never seen
And the other kids were hurled in the same direction as Jack.
Into Petalburg city

oni flygon
January 14th, 2006, 02:06 PM
It's creative but there's still a huge room for improvement. Maybe you can check the stickied threads in the Writer's Lounge. They'll help. =D