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pokejungle
January 15th, 2006, 07:54 AM
Ok, I guess I'll finally post this stupid junk XD It's about Cherry o.o; And his friend Grape o.o; And a virus named n00b o.o;

Yeah~ weird XD Anyways, there's some subtle jokes in it. I hope you're smart enough to get them 8D

#001: http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v338/pokejungle/las_verduras_1.png

Not really funny, my first attempt.

#002: http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v338/pokejungle/las_verduras_2.png

People actually seemed to like this one o.o;

So, I'd like lots of critism, and comments. I need to improve this <<; #003 is coming out today XD Tell me what to do better before I scew up the third one too! ;D

Kurosaki~Dragon
January 15th, 2006, 07:38 PM
"Well if you ask me, you both could be either sex. Opps. I acted nomal for a second. I R NOOB!! PH33R!

lol


grape looks so cute with those humongus eyes :P

pokejungle
January 15th, 2006, 07:42 PM
Yeah, Grape's the crowd favorite XD

Thanks for commenting~ I thought I had killed my own thread XD

IceDrake
January 15th, 2006, 08:30 PM
Cool. I like N00B. He's cool. I can't wait to see more.

Esupio
January 16th, 2006, 09:19 AM
second made my snicker slightly but good art and stuff like that

pokejungle
January 16th, 2006, 09:41 AM
Now I'm going to make a third comic ... today.

I'm trying to make "Olive" but she's not coming out well XD

Esupio
January 16th, 2006, 01:19 PM
if you need any help paul with sprites for the comic or what not. IM me on msn okay.

pokejungle
January 16th, 2006, 06:46 PM
if you need any help paul with sprites for the comic or what not. IM me on msn okay.
I would, but there's no MSN email there for me to IM :3

Miiburd
January 16th, 2006, 09:11 PM
LOL. The second one is random =P
erm..... criticism? You don't want to hear any of that from me, I SUCK at comics XD *dies*
wahahrhrhrhrhharhahr

Esupio
January 19th, 2006, 08:56 AM
I would, but there's no MSN email there for me to IM :3
dude. I'm already on your contacts. if you've forgotten its [email protected]

wheres No. 3? *spazz*

pokejungle
January 19th, 2006, 02:30 PM
<.<;

I'm working on #3 everyone! Hopefully it'll be up tonight/tomorrow.