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buster_wolf
January 15th, 2006, 07:39 PM
Well, I should be updating daily on my thread instead of creating new ones.

Here you go, Kurumi Momose from Pani Poni Dash dressed as a Negima Student.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v135/thefinalfrontier/mahorakurumi.jpg

And here's ever omega kawaii Rebecca Miyamoto as a doctor. =P

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v135/thefinalfrontier/miyamotoishasensei.jpg

Cookie luvs Green
January 15th, 2006, 11:56 PM
Wow! Nice pictures you got there! =D You do have a pretty steady hand to line them. I love how you drew the faces on both of them =D

My only critic really is that the leg position looks a bit awkward and stiff. Try making their legs a bit.. Err.. How should I say it? Spread out a bit? XDD

The 2nd one has some light blue sketches showing. You probably rushed on cleaning up but it's not bad at all =)

I also like how you made the pics look simple yet it's still good and cute XD
Great job on them! <33 You should post a few more :3

IceDrake
January 16th, 2006, 08:45 AM
Y'know, Cookie, you somment, but you don't update your own. Yes, I like the pictures. I think the leg position is a bit stiff... but normal. Geez, I should watch more tv.

Have you ever tried doing guys before? I think these pics are awesome, and i want to see more.

Geez, I suck.

Forest Grovyle
January 16th, 2006, 08:59 AM
Very nice pics here, especially the first one! :D I agree with what people before have said - the legs on the second one look a little off, (perhaps a little bit thin?) but the first one looks great! ^_^

I like your use of coloured lineart, too! :D

Keep it up! *hugs!*

--FG

Syousuke
January 16th, 2006, 06:09 PM
They are all great. But I suggest you should put some more method into it, buster_wolf D;. The characters' poses are ordinary, and when you think contrary to the bottom line; its boring looks like 'ya have no taste. 8.5/10. Good job, I hope to see more. ;) And both of them need tidying up ><
Spend more time on your lineart too!

Miiburd
January 16th, 2006, 07:58 PM
Those looks very nice ^__^
I like the little bit of sketchyness on the second image.

My critique stuff would just be to perhaps put more detailing on the lines, some varied thickness so it doesn't all look the same. That only comes from personal preference though ^^

Keep it up!

buster_wolf
January 16th, 2006, 10:06 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v135/thefinalfrontier/died.jpg

An idea for a story I was working on. It's just a sketchy idea when I'm working on something, but yeah.

Warning PG-13 because it's a death scene. It's pretty violent in a way.

Oh yes, thanks for the criticisms. It does help to improve me in some ways.

Miiburd
January 16th, 2006, 11:07 PM
OW >___< !!
That looks awesome! ^__^ The anatomy and such, like the arms.... very nice ^^
I have to work on anatomy stuffs.

kohei
January 18th, 2006, 12:59 AM
Yay. I've been waiting for another art thread by you.

Anyhow, Becky is always giga kawaii.

buster_wolf
January 20th, 2006, 10:20 PM
Okay, and now, the guy who died whom I decided to call Swordmaster.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v135/thefinalfrontier/swordmaster.jpg

Enjoy when I get some really good pictures that won't hurt the public.