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code zerro the deluge
January 21st, 2006, 03:47 PM
I need a girl for this song. Any vollenters you can tell me at [email protected]
pm or here on this topic. here is the song.
(chorus)
These cold tears I wander why.
i got out of bed at all.
The morning raindrops on my window and I can see it all.
And even if i could it will al be great put your picture on my wall.
It reminds me that is't not so bad it's not so bad.
(verse)
Dear Ash.
I miss you.
what up what have you been thru.
in your life of hard work and struglles.
I must say i still love you.
Even though these letters may bug you.
I can't help but care.
I sware my mind is racing through my hair.
I miss you girl so please wright back.
I am out in a war this seperated thing is driving me wack

Lady Akita
January 21st, 2006, 03:48 PM
Oh, I'll volunteer, if you tell me what I'm supposed to do. ^^

code zerro the deluge
January 21st, 2006, 03:52 PM
thanx I wan't to hear what you would say in your verse for this song.

Lady Akita
January 21st, 2006, 04:04 PM
Um.

Sometimes I think I see you outside
When I'm parched on the windowsill
The rain coming down like teardrops
Staining the ground below
Sometime, someone,
Whoever you love the most
I wonder if you love them back
Will you come to know..

code zerro the deluge
January 21st, 2006, 04:28 PM
good that was preety good.
make it a little longer though.

Lady Akita
January 21st, 2006, 04:34 PM
I think it's fine the way it is. I mean, I don't got any more to add. XP Sorry! ^^

code zerro the deluge
January 23rd, 2006, 08:37 AM
ummm. ok. well anybody else.

Amy-chan
January 23rd, 2006, 12:22 PM
Hello, my name is Thorns, formerly Pika-mew. I will gladly help; let me just think about it for a while. XD I thought Lady Akita's verse was okay, though...

code zerro the deluge
January 23rd, 2006, 12:53 PM
that was good. 10 10 bravo.

but let me see you with this song.

Amy-chan
January 23rd, 2006, 01:03 PM
Um...

That is my signature, and it wasn't made by me. ^^; I am working on a verse for the song, though. Just give me a while...

code zerro the deluge
January 23rd, 2006, 01:07 PM
ohhh oops well good job to who ever maid it.

no rush

Amy-chan
January 23rd, 2006, 01:17 PM
How's this?

(chorus)
I think of you and shed a tear
Tears like raindrops, tears like ice
I miss you and I wonder how
A simple letter could suffice
And yet, although I weep,
I know our love is deep
And though distance is between us
It's not so bad, it's not so bad...
(verse)
Dear Ash
I miss you
What's up what have you been through
In your life of hard work and struggles
I must say I still love you
Even though these letters may bug you
Why must I still care?
This stress is pulling out my hair
I miss you, Ash, so please write back
This worrying and wondering is driving me whack.

code zerro the deluge
January 23rd, 2006, 01:20 PM
what do you mean.

you do now that is my verse right?
it is you making the verse

Amy-chan
January 23rd, 2006, 01:22 PM
Sorry, I don't understand. :confused:

code zerro the deluge
January 23rd, 2006, 01:22 PM
you are making a verse to the song not me.

why does it say you are offline?

Amy-chan
January 23rd, 2006, 01:23 PM
Because I'm invisible. Never mind, I guess I can't do it after all. Sorry. ;.;

code zerro the deluge
January 23rd, 2006, 01:24 PM
you can make a verse comon you changed the song to a good rythem just do what you did before only for you.