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Demon_Slayer
January 31st, 2006, 10:38 AM
I look for you
By : Demon_Slayer

I look for you, everywhere I go, but I just want you to know, your the perfect girl for me, Love is what I need. Satisfaction, and love, pleasure and affection, but until I find you you are in my heart. I dont know you, I have never seen you, but I know your out there, somewhere. Every girl I date isnt you, which is what I hate, I want to know who you are, but until then I'm going to let God lead the way for me. One day I will travel far, and all I can hope is I meet you on my way, I see you in my dreams, but I cant tell who you are, my dreams are blurry,my dreams are thick, and they are long, but no name can come from our perfect song, I know it will be along time till I meet you, but I know you are out there, my perfect love.

Yuka
January 31st, 2006, 05:20 PM
*Smiles*This poem is really nice,but it needs to be fixed a little.Great job,keep up the good work.^^

Demon_Slayer
January 31st, 2006, 07:07 PM
thanks...I'll work on it when I have the chance