Pok�mon: Destiny Arrived

[Domin-8]

Hi folks! This is my first comic so be as harsh as you need be.
Will be more descriprive when i get the chance to write more.
My creidt page is attached. It will grow bigger as time goes.

Rule for this thread , IF YOU LOOK AT MY COMIC THEN POST!!!
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Characters
http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d170/coreystranick/Trainers/untitled4.png
Kinsley- The main character. Will play a big role in what is to come. Is now deciding on which Pok骯n team to pick, after meeting with Brandon and Ash. Wants to defeat every trainer for his mom( and for the fact he is 16 and jsut now getting his first Pok骯n) Now that a fight is coming, he may not have a chance to run away.
http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d170/coreystranick/Not%20mine/untitled2.png
Ash- A famous trianer that Kinsley meets. May play a major role in what is about to come.
http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d170/coreystranick/Not%20mine/1T3.png
Brandon- A famous trianer that Kinsley meets. May play a major role in what is about to come
http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d170/coreystranick/Not%20mine/1T2.png
Alyssa- Came from Lavender Town. Her only family is Gandpa. Well she is very jolly and sort of emotional sometimes.She used to hate Pokemon but when she was given one she found out their importance and became a vey good trainer.
http://i1.tinypic.com/n4gpy9.png
Zigfreid- German, so not many people understand him. Not much else is known.
http://i1.tinypic.com/n4gso7.png
Agent 47- A ruthless assasian. Has many outfits to change his guise.

http://i1.tinypic.com/nmxg0i.png
Mace- Mace is a great triner he lives in saffron and in mauville. He has a strange likeing of electric pokemon and won't let anyone get in his way to become the world's great electric pokemon trainer!

http://i1.tinypic.com/nmxg90.png
Dash- Dash was abandoned when he was very young. His parents were taken by the rockets, he fended for himself untill he was 12 when he found out that his parents were rocket deserters. Cowards. Abandoners. He has refrained from all contact with them ever since. Nowadays he trains the Electric mouse type Pok骯n. He has over 200 Pikachu at his ranch and many other electric mice.
http://i1.tinypic.com/nn35f9.png
Evil Omega Latios- Wants to control this dimension by all means nessecary.
http://i1.tinypic.com/nn35o3.png
Omegal Latios- From the same dimension as E.OL but wants to stop him at all costs.
Secondary Characters
Prof. Cherry- Prof. In this comic. Is a male. The twin brother of Birch. But got hsi name changed to Cherry. Helped in gene splicing
Mom- MAin Characters mom
Shirlena- cahnnel 6 reporter. Noone likes her. You will eventually see why.
Grandpa- Alyssa's only family
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Comics
SEASON 1: Born to help.
Episode 1: Meeting Hero (http://tinypic.com/view/?pic=n1p1g4)
Episode 2: About to Choose (http://tinypic.com/view/?pic=n1p5vo)
Episode 3: Alyssa's birth (http://tinypic.com/view/?pic=n36fyh)
Episode 4: Predator and Prey show (http://tinypic.com/view/?pic=n4golg)
Episode 5: First Battle P.1 (http://www.tinypic.com/view/?pic=nbcdpj) || First Battle P.2 (http://tinypic.com/view/?pic=nl5w02)
Episode 6: Dash's Arrival (http://tinypic.com/view/?pic=nmxczo)
Episode 7: Evil Omega Latios' Plans (http://www.tinypic.com/view/?pic=nn007o)
Episode 8: Alyssa's 3 years (http://www.tinypic.com/view/?pic=nn3zao)
Episode 9: People Divide (http://www.tinypic.com/view/?pic=nn5dhd)
Episode 10: Battle for Status (http://www.tinypic.com/view/?pic=nnl0jr)
Episode 11: Fated Battle? (http://www.tinypic.com/view/?pic=nno6dc)
Episode 12: Tied Down (http://tinypic.com/view/?pic=noipn9)
Episode 13: Traitor in the Ranks? (http://tinypic.com/view/?pic=nq9swk)

Season 2: Ready for anything
Episode 1: Recap (http://tinypic.com/view/?pic=or1h6f)

Special Comics
Season 1
Phone Call (http://tinypic.com/view/?pic=nyg0sw)

Fan Comics
TPH #1: Goku waits (http://i1.tinypic.com/nn5jmd.png)

Holiday Comics
#1 V-Day (http://tinypic.com/view/?pic=nv604k)
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Requests for Reserve
Sprites:
Name:
Story:
Team: Good(Omega Latios)-NO SPOTS LEFT!! Bad ( Evil Omega Latios)- only three spots
Pokemon:
ANything else you wanna add to help me:
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Credit
Attachment and soem will be here

Badassbill for Oldman sprites
http://raichu.s41.xrea.com/poke/charset/trainer.html for various sprites
Omega Latios for sprites and �ƒ€�ƒƒ�‚��ƒ� for Dash sprites 9with help of Avatar)

[Decepticon]

nice start, I like the font you chose. very neat XD
theres some spelling mistakes but nothing major.
keep up the good work. that was funny: "there is ash and brandon OMG they are hot" XD

[Popwar Bunny]

i like it too. but, my eailer post got deleted.

[Domin-8]

Yeah, did you liek where Shirlena faked to getting captured by Team Rocket. I did that because i could find celadon mansion maps.
Also i have a poll here for you guys. I know i messed up on words but hey almost everyone does.

WHAT SHOULD THE THREE GROUPS BE?
Choice one
An original Fire Pok�mon w/ a fire/flying fusion and fire/ground fusion
An original Water Pok�mon w/ water/psychic and a water/shadow
An original Grass Pok�mon w/ grass/rock and grass/normal

or Choice 2
Origian Shadow(includes eveelutions) shadow/flying and shadow fire
Original Light( eveelotuions included) light/ground and light water
Original psychic w/ psychic/grass and psychic/ice

[Decepticon]

Even though you messed up on the words its nothing that makes the comic not make sense so its ok.

and I dont understand that fusion thingie o_o

[Domin-8]

Ohh you mean my coices?
It means that the other tow pokemo nmon will be a fire and another flying type fusins. Like arcanine and pigeot. that help?

[Decepticon]

Ohh you mean my coices?
It means that the other tow pokemo nmon will be a fire and another flying type fusins. Like arcanine and pigeot. that help?
yeah that helps. i like choice 1 better

[Domin-8]

ALright..i neeed foru more people to answer before i start to make my next comic.

So right now it is
choice 1 -1
Choice 2 -0

Hey decepticon you think you could get some people here to see my comic

[Popwar Bunny]

choice two for mey. it;s like better for some reason. im gunna change my name in here probably.

[Domin-8]

Alright

choice 1 -1
choice 2- 1

i need at least two more people and in the cse of a tie a fifth. If you visit this thread and atleast look at the comics PLEASE POST

[Matt Silver]

This is a good comic overall. What text do u use?
I wont join so dont bug me pls.

[Domin-8]

verenda i think, also i don't care if you don't wanna join,i won't bug you. Also what do you think of the choices?

Choice 1 or 2?

[Matt Silver]

verenda i think, also i don't care if you don't wanna join,i won't bug you. Also what do you think of the choices?

Choice 1 or 2?

Choice 1 i think will be cool.

[Domin-8]

Alright.. I decided to let others vote. If you care to take the vote come one and vote

[dragon 122]

um do you now the carvanha fused with the 3 dogs
can i join *** that pkmn it can talk
carvanhadog
thanks

[Domin-8]

Carvahna Dragon. PM me your overworlds and sprites. Also do you mean you pokemon will be the carvahan dog and it can talk? Explain that in the PM

New comic should be out today, but i am not sure becaue i have to go do a lacrosse thing. I'll get ti out as soon as i can

[Milosh]

AAk! The typos the typos..! aAAgh!

Okay aside from the typos i likey.
"there is ash and brandon OMG they are hot" <=== I love this line...!

Wooo hooo choice #1
personally i would of gone with #2 >>
But that's just me... heh Yeah! Keep it up!

[Domin-8]

YOu know, i did say that i needed altelst four poepl. Hmm... anyone else care to vote, i havn't made the comic yet. But that is because i jsut saw my freind get into a caraccident and she is in critical condition.........
yeah
Anyway i know there are typos. I'll proof read the next comics

[The Dash]

Ooh i like this comic he he,
you should focus a bit on spelling however it makes the comic look alot neater if you spell correctly. And as for the choices ermmmm.... id choose choice 1.
Also id like to join if you dont mind he he...
Bio:

Name: Dash
Occupation: Electric Mouse Trainer
Sprites: http://dasheo.com/images/dashss.PNG
Bio: Dash was abandoned when he was very young. His parents were taken by the rockets, he fended for himself untill he was 12 when he found out that his parents were rocket deserters. Cowards. Abandoners. He has refrained from all contact with them ever since. Nowadays he trains the Electric mouse type Pok�mon. He has over 200 Pikachu at his ranch and many other electric mice. (I can make some sprites of his ranch if you would like me to)
Credit: Avatar: The base sprites for the Dash overworlds
(I cant remember who made the back sprite if the person who made it reads this please contact me XD)

Well thats about it i hope you can put me in :)

[Domin-8]

I'll put you in, yeah i wa srushing also.
Gusy i wont make anycomics this week, my freind jsut died in a caracciden. And i saw it happen. Sorry if this disapoints soem of you

[Popwar Bunny]

im sorry. get well, dont you worry, i wuld think nobody would be dumb enough to be mad at you for that.

[Jedite1000]

can i join i was gonna put tihs character in my comic but i lost my will 2 continue so i like this guy
name:zigfried
natio: german so let him speak germen (not fully german only a few words
(example)i think this is good and i love it (becomes) i zink das ist gud und i love it

oh yeh he is a bad guy
http://img336.imageshack.us/img336/8572/zigg9cz.png

if u have trouble with bit of the translation go here
http://translation2.paralink.com/

[Flaming Quilava]

Nice comic! I might join later in the comic.

[Decepticon]

sorry about that coreystranick :(
i hope you feel better soon...

[Domin-8]

Yeah, I am making a comic now to introduce a character. Umm....I'll make te next one intorducing Dash, then TPH you will be in the once after that and i'll introduce you in that one also jedite

[Jedite1000]

oh kool thanx alot i cant wait

[Decepticon]

can i join i was gonna put tihs character in my comic but i lost my will 2 continue so i like this guy
name:zigfried
natio: german so let him speak germen (not fully german only a few words
(example)i think this is good and i love it (becomes) i zink das ist gud und i love it

oh yeh he is a bad guy
http://img336.imageshack.us/img336/8572/zigg9cz.png
your not making your comic anymore? :(

[Domin-8]

I think after i make this comic i may try a new text type. Would you gusy mibnd?

[Decepticon]

I think after i make this comic i may try a new text type. Would you gusy mibnd?
I used to use Tahoma but i switched 2 verdana. i like the text u use right now.

[Domin-8]

Well, i was also gonna implament speech bubbles or something like that or a text box at the bottom of the thing. I don't know. I'll try it on the comic i intoduce dash

[Jedite1000]

at the start i was gonna continue but i gave up cause people didnt like it much and stopped going 2 it, i lost the will 2 continue(peoples replies gives me strength)

[Domin-8]

Here is a new update
http://tinypic.com/view/?pic=n36fyh

[Popwar Bunny]

good work, you didnt hve to do this.
you should have taken the night off, but, good update, my friend.

[Domin-8]

I had already started it. It got my mind off of thinking about her death, if you noticed i named the character after her

[The Dash]

I'll put you in, yeah i wa srushing also.
Gusy i wont make anycomics this week, my freind jsut died in a caracciden. And i saw it happen. Sorry if this disapoints soem of you

Aww im so sorry :(
Take your time man.

[Domin-8]

Well, i have had some couseling form my school so i am feeling better. I am makng the next comic as we speek

[The Dash]

Awesome, im working on the Dashs Ranch set aswell. Just so you know its situated on Route 8

[Domin-8]

ALright, just PM me when you finish it

[Houndoom1]

Very good comic! ICan I join?

http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d35/houndoom1/ElectricLance.png

Name: Mace
Pokemon: Electabuzz,Manetric, and Ampahros
Profile: Mace is a great triner he lives in saffron and in mauville. He has a strange likeing of electric pokemon and won't let anyone get in his way to become the world's great electric pokemon trainer!

[The Dash]

Erm you should probably get some walking sprites man...

[Domin-8]

No more characater request for Volume 1, and yes you can join as mace, jsut get some walking sprites

Moday- is my friends veiwing
Tuesday- Funeral/Burail

don't expect anything, but i might psot to ease my mind

[Popwar Bunny]

Yup yup, good comic, i like where it's goin.

[Domin-8]

New comic!!!
http://tinypic.com/view/?pic=n4golg
Hope you like it

[Popwar Bunny]

good work, I liked my guy :P

[Jedite1000]

yeh i like mine 2 im glad u put it on thanx

[Domin-8]

did i get the voice you wanted? also can you getsomeone to give you a backshot so he can go into battles

[Jedite1000]

im not good at drawing backsprites so ill leave it up 2 u k

and yep u got ze voice right und it perfect

[Domin-8]

Hmmm, i'lll try it then. Maybe i can get a back sprtie

[The Dash]

Take your time with the comics man your freind is much more important right now.
Loved the last comic and ill have Dashs Ranch done by tomorrow

[Popwar Bunny]

You might want to delete that last post Dash, I doubt you did that on purpose.
Well, keep up the work, Corey. I'm going to be off for the rest of the day.
Thanks for putting me in your comic. :P

(Uns de voice. Utz zould be liek dis.)

[Silon]

Hey, that looks great! :) Keep up the good work. The Battle System, the text should be more readable. ;;

[Domin-8]

YEah i saw that, and i am not good on making a transloarted voice, so if anyone wants to help i'll PM you his script so you can translate it.
Sorry about the battel text. I'll fix it on the next version

[Ryu-Chan]

I love it.It awsome.I liked dis one the most.

http://tinypic.com/view/?pic=n4golg

[Domin-8]

thanks, i am going to make another now

[The Dash]

You might want to delete that last post Dash, I doubt you did that on purpose.
Well, keep up the work, Corey. I'm going to be off for the rest of the day.
Thanks for putting me in your comic. :P

(Uns de voice. Utz zould be liek dis.)
Omg i never notice i doubled. Thanks for teling me

[Domin-8]

How close are you to finishing. I can't show you til that is done. Also the next comics will be out tonight. Doing a battle screen takes F-O-R-E-V-E-R

[Matt Silver]

Great updates Coreystrainck (I dont get that name)

Agent 47 is cool. Did u make him?

[Domin-8]

No TPH did , and my name is my name, I want to change it but it can't be changed till next month

[The Dash]

How close are you to finishing. I can't show you til that is done. Also the next comics will be out tonight. Doing a battle screen takes F-O-R-E-V-E-R
Um are you talking about my Ranch corey?

[Domin-8]

yes i am sorry i didnt clarify

[The Dash]

Well im pretty much there really. I want to get the interior done.
I don't think its very good though so dont get your hopes up :(

[Domin-8]

i don't care. Also the next tow comics will be split into a two part. The battle is gonna be a big one since it is the very first one w/ kinsley ( just to give ya a hint)

[The Dash]

Ok I have the exterior done:
http://dasheo.com/Pokecom/dashsranch.PNG
What do you think of it?

[Domin-8]

awsome. Now i can atleast try and do the layout of what your character introduction comic is going to be like. Tell me when you are done the inside. No rush

[The Dash]

Heh thanks. Theres quite a few pixil errors in there but they dont blow out into your face XD As I said ill do the exterior tomorrow so ill have it done by then

[Domin-8]

What are you talking about pixel errors? I can't see them. they must be minor

[The Dash]

Well for example: Some bits of the top of the rock are cut off, bits of grass arnt full,some of the water dosent link with the other bits

[Domin-8]

I see now. Well imma gonna get off. Finishing comic

[The Dash]

Im off to bed then lol night.
Ill get to work on the interior when i get on the computer tomorrow.

[Domin-8]

NEW COMIC!!!!
Part 1 in this one. Due to long battel. The battle will coem when i can get all the battle animations
http://www.tinypic.com/view/?pic=nbcdpj

[shadow909]

hey i rad your comics not bad, there good, great

[Domin-8]

Thanks man. I'll try and get teh battle up but it will be hard. It takes time to get the animations, if anyone knows where to to get them,like a site, than please tell me.

[Decepticon]

Thanks man. I'll try and get teh battle up but it will be hard. It takes time to get the animations, if anyone knows where to to get them,like a site, than please tell me.
http://www.serebii.net/attackdex/
I get mine from here, it shows screenshots of every attack but somtimes
there not very good ones and you have to do alot of editing (like editing out
the pokemon in the screenshots) but thats what i use...

btw, nice updates keep it up, i cant wait to see more

[Domin-8]

thanks decpticon. Hopefully thise makes the next issue come out faster

[Decepticon]

thanks decpticon. Hopefully thise makes the next issue come out faster
np, and I hope so! its the only site i know of that has battle animations...

[Popwar Bunny]

keep up the good work, hope you're feeling better!

[Domin-8]

i jsut camback from the veiwing, tomorrow i will be going to the funeral. well, i am working as hard as i can on the battle spisode. man it is so **** hard

[Psychopathic Canine]

Great work on the comic the story line is great!....sorry to hear about ur friend.....I hope u feel better now.....

[AngieKit]

Well...sorry to hear about all of that. I hope you get better, eh?

But back to what needs to be pointed out about this comic. I'm not saying it is bad or anything...

The pictures themselves are great! But...the dialog(what the characters are saying) could really use some help. It would be a lot smoother if you used the actual English print...and not things like 'w/me' and such. Among other things, but I don't want to make you feel any worse than you are now about your friend.

But sometimes you need proper criticism, and not just' hey, u are good!' 'OMG!' sort of thing...it is criticism that will make you better, instead of operating on mostly false appreciation. A lot of people may not be able to see your mistakes, for they make the same ones and think nothing of it. But I notice them, because, well--I'm a writer, and that it just the way I am. ^^'

I suggest you have someone to read through and help you improve your writing for this comic. That includes grammar, spelling, punctuation, ect. You don't have to, but it would make your comics all the funner to read and such. It's not just the images that makes a comic shine, but the words that are spoken to back up that picture. If that is at all understandable...

Anyways...I think I am done for now. Sorry to do this to you, but it needs to happen some time. But really, you are doing quite well so far. ^^

[Domin-8]

Ohh..no problem. I like crit. Anyway, whilei am making thsi batle screen i will try and post special comics that inroduce people. If i have time, if i don't go visit ,my other thread
Google: Rise of team Sentret

[Domin-8]

AGHHH!! I am so pissed. My comp messed up when iwas making the battle screen and now the whole bottom half of the comic is messd up. I am sorry guys but it is going to take alittle longer,maybe i shouldn't have done this :(

EDIT: YES AN UPDATE!!! here ya are finally the battle. Sorry it took so long, it is shorter than i watned it to be

http://tinypic.com/view/?pic=nl5w02

[Matt Silver]

THerea ya go. Good update. Nice battle. all good.

[Popwar Bunny]

good job corey! i liked the battle.

((corey, could you go on AIM?))

[Domin-8]

Thanks man, i'll try and get another up soon

[Phoenixx]

Nice comic, but just a pointer Kinsley's hair color bugs me.

[Domin-8]

Yeah, i have to change it so it is a darker color,I'll do it for the mext battle

[Houndoom1]

I liked the battle it was good! Can't wait to see more!

[Domin-8]

thanks Houndoom1, i'll try and get another up this weekend where we will meet Omega Latios

[Domin-8]

I Need to know if the guys who is doing Dah's ranch has finihsed his interior yet!!!

[Jedite1000]

i like ur comic so far but wen would zigfried appear again?

[Domin-8]

The comic i am doing now i short, so I will produce two short comic tonight, one wit hyour guy

[Domin-8]

Here is my UPdate guys. Producing anothe as we speak
http://tinypic.com/view/?pic=nmxczo
sorry it is kinda short

[pokexproduction]

hey bro^^nice job on the comics^^

[Domin-8]

Thanks sis, Jedite will be in the next one along with TPh and Alyssa. Maybe this wont be a short comic.
Sis want to join my comic? I am decideding to let two more people in.

[pokexproduction]

sure bro,thanks^^

Name: Danielle
Age: 14 1/2
Personality: Outgoing,fun,adventurous,clumbsy,anxious,caring,can be mean sometimes
Background: She lived in Little Root,but ran away too get away from her boring life.She stole a pokemon from the lab(her eevee)
Pokemon: eevee,vibrava,vulpix,lapras, bulbasaur, pikachu
Looks:http://i1.tinypic.com/n6p3ww.png
thnks feraligatr master for the overworld sprites

[Decepticon]

hey cool update. I wonder what UL needs help with :\

anyway keep it up, I hope the next one comes out soon

[Domin-8]

you'll find out why he said that

[Decepticon]

you'll find out why he said that
ok. so can we expect the next update tonight? since you said you were working on it right now?

[Domin-8]

Yeah, i am. Hint' You'll see Latios again, along with the evil counter part. I jsut have to right up the story quick.
Crap, i lost Celebii22's sprites, ok si your in this instead of her. I have to get Celebii's sprites again

[pokexproduction]

ok

and I can't wait till the next one too^^

[Decepticon]

I have her sprites... (I hope she doesnt mind me posting them)

http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f256/Decepticon89/Celebi22.png

[pokexproduction]

i have to get a backsprite...

[Domin-8]

Thanks you Decep. Well i geuss ican show her now also, and sis , don't worry abbout it yet. But you may need one. I am not sure yet

[pokexproduction]

ok,I'm still getting it just in case

[Domin-8]

Hey Decep. You got TPH's Agent 47 sprites? I lost eh mtoo. It seems i lost a couple files on my comp. Taht heppend once already when i treid todint the battle screen. I had to reset my comp, opened paint agina and my fiel wasn't there

[Sunflorazumarill]

I got another character you can put in the comic!

http://img24.exs.cx/img24/1504/sunflora_azumarill_fusion01.gif

Her name is Sunflorazumarill. She can use any attack that either Sunflora or Azumarill can know. She also has the power to split into a regular Sunflora and Azumarill; like this:

http://www.pokeschool.com/videogames/rubysapphire/sprites/337.gifhttp://www.pokeschool.com/videogames/rubysapphire/sprites/056.gif

You should have a comic where she does that.

http://tinypic.com/bhzhwp.png

And here's her overworld and backsprites.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v236/dragonzlair2/Sunflorazumarill.png

Here's a set of Sunflorazumarill overworlds amydamuffinlady did.

http://tinypic.com/b8l0i

Here's an alternate Sunkarill (Sunflorazumarill's prevolution) sprite. Also, you can have Sunflorazumarill be a character or a Trainer's Pokémon.

[Decepticon]

here ya go! sorry for the wait Im busy making another episode on paint :P

http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f256/Decepticon89/Agent47.png

[Domin-8]

Thanks Decep. After i put this Decep. my next comic is done. It will be one of the final episodes in season 1. I will have like 10-12 each season

I'll try and add your Sunflorazumarill, Sunflorazumarill....umm ok

[Domin-8]

Wooo I am done
http://www.tinypic.com/view/?pic=nn007o

[Decepticon]

Wooo I am done
http://www.tinypic.com/view/?pic=nn007o
nice update! Zigfriend is so funny XD

[Domin-8]

Thanks, i am trying to make it so that47 doesn't kill him off for a while. Hopefully.

[pokexproduction]

Wooo I am done
http://www.tinypic.com/view/?pic=nn007o


yeah zigfried is funny lol

[Domin-8]

HOw did you liek your characeter? Even though she didn't get much time

[pokexproduction]

she's cool^^can't wait till another one comes

[Domin-8]

I might start one. I am not sure. If i do it would be out tonight. I am not sure though. Kinda tired. Is there noly like three 7 people that look at this.
Sis
decep
Matt Silver
TPH
Legend(once)
Pheonixx(once)
Jedite
Guy who made dash 9i don't know howto do his name but heneeds to finish the insides to that ranch or he is dead next comic

Sorry that was 8

[Popwar Bunny]

good job! keep up the work!!!

[Domin-8]

YEAHHHH NEW UPDATE!!!!!
http://www.tinypic.com/view/?pic=nn3zao

[Popwar Bunny]

woah, nice riachu.....is that custom?

[Domin-8]

No i wish it was, it came from this site
http://raichu.s41.xrea.com/poke/charset/poke_01.html
If you vist just hit CHarsets at top and there are a bunch of thing you can click, some for all pokemon some for trainers

[pokexproduction]

YEAHHHH NEW UPDATE!!!!!
http://www.tinypic.com/view/?pic=nn3zao


cool another update!!^^

((and I just found out how to make comics easier,but I'm not making anything yet XD))

[Domin-8]

I am starting to make another update now, i can't sleep so while watching Boondocks i am making this update. Think it will be a continuation of the episode 5, jsut to show what happened after the battle

[Decepticon]

nice update! keep it up. im so tired now though so im goin to bed.
happy updating and watching of the boondocks >.>

[Domin-8]

I amusing some made up towns using chipsets from the site with the raichu overworld. It has night and day stuff which is cool. I jsut need to figure out how to darken my character

[pokexproduction]

I am starting to make another update now, i can't sleep so while watching Boondocks i am making this update. Think it will be a continuation of the episode 5, jsut to show what happened after the battle


yay can't wait^^I can't go to sleep,so I geuss I'll stay up^^

[Domin-8]

Hey sis your chacter is getting a special Pokemon, which one of yours do you want to get rid of?

[pokexproduction]

cool^^get rid of....bulbasaur

[Domin-8]

ALright, this pokemon will actually be a good choiceto remove for the one you are getting. Notto get your hopes up, it isn't a legendary. Those are being given out yet

[pokexproduction]

ALright, this pokemon will actually be a good choiceto remove for the one you are getting. Notto get your hopes up, it isn't a legendary. Those are being given out yet


it's ok^^I wasn't thinking about a legendary.Just surprise me^^

[Omega Latios]

Whee ^^ I'm In This Comic ^^ Can't Wait To See More. ^^

[Domin-8]

Yur in the next update. Stay tuned. it shall be done when i get back from the BR

[pokexproduction]

Yur in the next update. Stay tuned. it shall be done when i get back from the BR


well I'm gonna go to sleep.Talk to ya tomorrow bro!^^

also can't wait to see the next udate! ~_^

[Domin-8]

UPDATE!!!!!!
http://www.tinypic.com/view/?pic=nn5dhd
makinga notehr as we you guys look, a specail one may come later

[Shijuukara]

Heh, nice update Corey. A good comic it is

http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d113/XiaolinDraginis/Animations/Angel-Of-Darkness.gif

[Domin-8]

There might be another this moringin (at my house it is 3:37 in the morining)

[Omega Latios]

Interesting... Can't Wait To See More...

[Popwar Bunny]

good work corey!!!! ^_^
its turning out nice.

[Domin-8]

Now that i am in the mood the story is coming easier.
On second thought i will leave the next update for later. I ahve to finish some requests in my shop

[Popwar Bunny]

HA! I didn't forget you Corey.
http://i1.tinypic.com/nn5jmd.png

[Domin-8]

That is hirarious,i love it man

[Popwar Bunny]

for an evil twin, i sure am nice, huh?

i gtg,ttyl, night.

[Domin-8]

It is jsut eh goodness of me ctaching on...know what i didn't notive but in this comic you are my rival and you are my evil twin on PC, well night, or good morning for me

[pokexproduction]

UPDATE!!!!!!
http://www.tinypic.com/view/?pic=nn5dhd
makinga notehr as we you guys look, a specail one may come later


cool!another update^^

Your getting more updates up faster bro^^


I wonder what's going to happen next^^,and I wonder what pokemon my characters going to get

[Domin-8]

You'll find out int the 10 or 11th comic not sure

[pokexproduction]

ok^^I'm trying to make better sprites of danielle

[Domin-8]

no need, but if you want go ahead. Jsut a hint, if you want cvan you get more mature sprites( for mext season)

[pokexproduction]

ok,I'm just getting ones cause,I'm still bored XD

[Domin-8]

alright, well new update!
Tell me if you liek the way the battle is set up.
http://www.tinypic.com/view/?pic=nnl0jr

[pokexproduction]

alright, well new update!
Tell me if you liek the way the battle is set up.
http://www.tinypic.com/view/?pic=nnl0jr


I like the way the battle is set up.Scince Kinsley likes Danielle,and their battling together,I wonder what's goingto happen^^

[Domin-8]

Yeah, that is wwhy it is set up liek that. the way the battle goes is two figt you have a winenr and loser. Then otehr two fight. Now the losers of those two will fight to see who stays in. You will get your Pokemon after your battle thatyou win. I am not telling you which one you win though

[pokexproduction]

Yeah, that is wwhy it is set up liek that. the way the battle goes is two figt you have a winenr and loser. Then otehr two fight. Now the losers of those two will fight to see who stays in. You will get your Pokemon after your battle thatyou win. I am not telling you which one you win though


oh ok^^ can't wait till' the next update^^

[Domin-8]

I am doing it as we speak, it'll be out soon. It'll show the start and end(maybe) of your fight

[pokexproduction]

ok cool^^ I'm currently doing Danielle's sprites right now

[Domin-8]

Alright...postwhen you are done ^^

[pokexproduction]

ok,it's still in progress but it looks ok right now^^

EDIT: hey I finished her sprites:

http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f35/rocafellaxshawty/danielleoverworldsprites.png

and I made others:

Magma:

http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f35/rocafellaxshawty/daniellepkmtrainermagma.png


Rocket:

http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f35/rocafellaxshawty/daniellepkmtrainerteamrocket.png

[Decepticon]

ok,it's still in progress but it looks ok right now^^

EDIT: hey I finished her sprites:

http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f35/rocafellaxshawty/danielleoverworldsprites.png

and I made others:

Magma:

http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f35/rocafellaxshawty/daniellepkmtrainermagma.png


Rocket:

http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f35/rocafellaxshawty/daniellepkmtrainerteamrocket.png
Are these the new Danielle sprites? can I use these ones instead of the other ones u gave me? ^^;

btw nice update Coreystranick ;)

[Domin-8]

That is cool sis. She may beomce a Rocket later...who knows........ anyway m yupdate is very close

[pokexproduction]

Are these the new Danielle sprites? can I use these ones instead of the other ones u gave me? ^^;

btw nice update Coreystranick ;)


yeah sure^^

That is cool sis. She may beomce a Rocket later...who knows........ anyway m yupdate is very close


and thanks bro,can't wait to see the update^^

[Decepticon]

yeah sure^^

and thanks bro^^
yay XD

good thing I havnt added you in yet then, cause thats a big change in sprites :P

[pokexproduction]

yay XD

good thing I havnt added you in yet then, cause thats a big change in sprites :P

yeah it is^^ can't wait to see the next update in yours too Deception^^

[Decepticon]

yeah it is^^ can't wait to see the next update in yours too Deception^^
thanks! I'll start it after i read coreystranicks next update XD

so its up 2 him when I start? >.>;

[pokexproduction]

thanks! I'll start it after i read coreystranicks next update XD

so its up 2 him when I start? >.>;

oh ok

and I had to fix something in one of the sprites on the sprite sheet:

http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f35/rocafellaxshawty/6e50e7bd.png

[Domin-8]

EDIT: WOOPS WRONG ONE!!! This was the unfinshed one i'll go ge the other. sorry guys

[pokexproduction]

well since you are waiting her ya go
http://tinypic.com/view/?pic=nnnwc2


yay!Another update!:classic:

[Domin-8]

Don't read it that was the unfinshed one.

[pokexproduction]

Don't read it that was the unfinshed one.


oh ok,I noticed scince danielle and kinsley weren't showned :P

[Decepticon]

wow they r lyke invisible o_o;

ok, i'll wait for the finished one XD

[pokexproduction]

wow they r lyke invisible o_o;

ok, i'll wait for the finished one XD


lol,that's what I was thinking XD

[Domin-8]

Sorry gusy, i had uploaded the wrong file. Here is the real one
http://www.tinypic.com/view/?pic=nno6dc

[pokexproduction]

Sorry gusy, i had uploaded the wrong file. Here is the real one
http://www.tinypic.com/view/?pic=nno6dc


oh ok^^yay,for the real one:classic:


EDIT:cool!I get a sunflorazumuril!!(whoah that's a long name :P)

[Decepticon]

nice update. I wonder who's goin to win...
-cheers for sunflorazumarill- XD

[pokexproduction]

nice update. I wonder who's goin to win...
-cheers for sunflorazumarill- XD


me too ~_^ and cool^^umbreon vs. eevee

[Shijuukara]

Nice update corey. I can't wait to see more.

http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d113/XiaolinDraginis/Animations/Angel-Of-Darkness.gif

[pokexproduction]

Also I made another sprite for danielle:

http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f35/rocafellaxshawty/daniellebigsprite.png

[Houndoom1]

Mwhahahaha! Mace is going to be Evil! I think.....

The comic is going great keep it up!

[Domin-8]

As far as you know everyone on E.OL's team is evil and everyon on OL's team is good...next update maybe today

[mini34]

Very nice, I like your comic's. (Is that how you spell it?!)

[Houndoom1]

Oh if you need my guy to have a backsprite I just added it in to my sprite sheet:
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d35/houndoom1/ElectricLance1.png

[Domin-8]

you know i am not sure if i will. If i keep doing battles like this i wont need it. But thanks,also mini comics...you said comic's asin the comic has possesion of something. Also hey if you want to join get some sprites and I'll add ya to the next season. SEAON ONE IS ALMOST OVER!!!!. Five more comic for season one. then i will make a spacial(maybe)

[Houndoom1]

5 more till seson 2? wow!

So when the the last comic for season one is out something major will happen?

[pokexproduction]

you know i am not sure if i will. If i keep doing battles like this i wont need it. But thanks,also mini comics...you said comic's asin the comic has possesion of something. Also hey if you want to join get some sprites and I'll add ya to the next season. SEAON ONE IS ALMOST OVER!!!!. Five more comic for season one. then i will make a spacial(maybe)

oh awesome^^i'm anxious to see the rest of it^^

[Domin-8]

Anyone who as in this comic, if it is possible could you get alitlle more mature sprites, season tow is set 10 years into the furutre

[Popwar Bunny]

47 doesnt need any. i think.

[Domin-8]

yeah, it really wouldnt matter. But i know my characer is getting revamped. i a talking about........wait nevermind....they are all fine. But if you ahve any cahnges to your sprites foor example, longer hair, change in hair color. Clothing etc.

[pokexproduction]

yeah, it really wouldnt matter. But i know my characer is getting revamped. i a talking about........wait nevermind....they are all fine. But if you ahve any cahnges to your sprites foor example, longer hair, change in hair color. Clothing etc.


do I have to revamp mine??

[Domin-8]

ummm....no yours looks fine. If you want to you can. Make a differnt sprite and everything. AGAIN ONLY IF YOU WANT TO!

[pokexproduction]

ummm....no yours looks fine. If you want to you can. Make a differnt sprite and everything. AGAIN ONLY IF YOU WANT TO!


ok,I don't feel like it,but I might make a different look for her later on

[Domin-8]

that id ok. Eppy 12 shoudl be up in the near future

[pokexproduction]

that id ok. Eppy 12 shoudl be up in the near future

cool bro^^can't wait to see what happens during the battle:classic:

[Domin-8]

New eppy up and runniong:
http://tinypic.com/view/?pic=noipn9

[pokexproduction]

New eppy up and runniong:
http://tinypic.com/view/?pic=noipn9


cool^^I wonder what Dash was up to;)

[Domin-8]

That is what the the next Episode is going to be about.. If i have time i'll make it.

[pokexproduction]

That is what the the next Episode is going to be about.. If i have time i'll make it.


cool^^

and I got bored and made 3 different versions of Danielle,2 look a little bit alike,and one of them is different:

http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f35/rocafellaxshawty/danielleversions1.png

[Domin-8]

Those are awsome I might actually use the first one.

[pokexproduction]

Those are awsome I might actually use the first one.

cool^^should I make some overworld sprites??

[Shijuukara]

Nice update Corey, can't wait for more

[Houndoom1]

I'll try to get and older looking version of Mace if you need him to look older that is.

[Domin-8]

Umm.. mace looks fine, but for the second season i am going to need walking sprites

[Houndoom1]

I'll try to get some ASAP.

[Decepticon]

I'll try to get some ASAP.
I hope so, because its hard to put you in the comic for long because you have none, and I dont want to have to kill you off :)

[pokexproduction]

Umm.. mace looks fine, but for the second season i am going to need walking sprites


OK I'll make some pretty soon

[Domin-8]

Yeah man...also If i can comic 13 will be up....... and maybe a specail to see why Dash did when he "went to heal his POk�mon".

[pokexproduction]

Yeah man...also If i can comic 13 will be up....... and maybe a specail to see why Dash did when he "went to heal his POk�mon".


oh cool^^I really want to see what he did.Maybe he betrayed them or something XD

[Toga]

HI! I am a new trainer here ,but on pokemon saphire I rule.

[Toga]

Hey is anyone listening?I could beat you and show you my true power.

[pokexproduction]

HI! I am a new trainer here ,but on pokemon saphire I rule.
yes nice to know that,but your going off topic


Hey is anyone listening?I could beat you and show you my true power.


don't double post please -_-it's against the rules.be patient,when waiting to reply

[Toga]

Well I think that the Togepis are cuter.

[Domin-8]

GET OUT OF MY THREAD! Geez your are doulpe posting and spamming. Going way wya off topic. Please don't come here unless you talk about my thread, and want to join. If you don't i will report you

[Decepticon]

GET OUT OF MY THREAD! Geez your are doulpe posting and spamming. Going way wya off topic. Please don't come here unless you talk about my thread, and want to join. If you don't i will report you
seriously XD
when i saw her first post i was like "wtf" then she kept goin on >_>

[Domin-8]

I wasn't being harsh was I, i don't want the mods to ge mad at me for that?

[Decepticon]

I wasn't being harsh was I, i don't want the mods to ge mad at me for that?
nah, she was breaking the rules and going way off topic... not your fault.

[pokexproduction]

nah, she was breaking the rules and going way off topic... not your fault.


yeah she was going way off topic,and spamming

[Domin-8]

Well, guys i am working on my Feburary contest entry. I thought making a couple pokemon with hearts and stuff, LIke wings, would be fun, It is hard and making it look good is hard. Hopefully this will be liked better than my santa groudon.

I said that to say this. Eppy 13 will be short, ans so will 14 they will depict what E.OL's team is doing, Buit before i do 14 i will make that special comic.
The end of the season will be sometime this week. As soon as i get epyy 14 done.

So if anyone wants to join Season 2 post your sprites. I am only taking 7 people. So please join.

[pokexproduction]

Well, guys i am working on my Feburary contest entry. I thought making a couple pokemon with hearts and stuff, LIke wings, would be fun, It is hard and making it look good is hard. Hopefully this will be liked better than my santa groudon.

I said that to say this. Eppy 13 will be short, ans so will 14 they will depict what E.OL's team is doing, Buit before i do 14 i will make that special comic.
The end of the season will be sometime this week. As soon as i get epyy 14 done.

So if anyone wants to join Season 2 post your sprites. I am only taking 7 people. So please join.

okay cool^^I'm gonna make those othe over world sprites soon

[Domin-8]

Alroght sis, just PM them to me....
here is the request form for the seond season
Sprites:
Name:
Story:
Team: Good(Omega Latios)-Only four spots Bad ( Evil Omega Latios)- only three spots
Pokemon:
ANything else you wanna add to help me:

[pokexproduction]

Alroght sis, just PM them to me....
here is the request form for the seond season
Sprites:
Name:
Story:
Team: Good(Omega Latios)-Only four spots Bad ( Evil Omega Latios)- only three spots
Pokemon:
ANything else you wanna add to help me:


alright,sure, bro^^working on them now

[Jedite1000]

sweet i like the fan comic with goku and chi chi where did u get the sprites from?

[Domin-8]

TPH found them. I'd ask him.

[pokexproduction]

ok this is what I have on the danielle's other sprites so far:

http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f35/rocafellaxshawty/daniellematuresprite.png:http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f35/rocafellaxshawty/daniellematureoverworldsprites.png

[Domin-8]

Awsome. How do you do that? that is so cool. Hey I have to talk to you so i am going to PM you

[pokexproduction]

Awsome. How do you do that? that is so cool. Hey I have to talk to you so i am going to PM you

ok^^and thanks^^can't wait for the next update

[Domin-8]

Ok guys, 13 is goin to be really short. I'll edit this post(maybe) when i finihsed it)

[Popwar Bunny]

i will make it easier for you.
now you dont have to edit!
^_^

[pokexproduction]

Ok guys, 13 is goin to be really short. I'll edit this post(maybe) when i finihsed it)


can't wait for the next one,and the second season^^

I want to see all of the new sprites^^

[Domin-8]

Eppy 13 is here
http://tinypic.com/view/?pic=nq9swk
if you are confused, wait until the special to come out

[pokexproduction]

Eppy 13 is here
http://tinypic.com/view/?pic=nq7pxj
if you are confused, wait until the special to come out


what happened to Alyssa in the last 2 boxes??

[Domin-8]

..............i am soo tired. i'll fix it tomorrow. As far as you know i forgot to put her in. Sorry guys rough day

[pokexproduction]

..............i am soo tired. i'll fix it tomorrow. As far as you know i forgot to put her in. Sorry guys rough day

nah it's alright,you must be tired after doing the updates and sprite request,you don't have to add her in yet:)

[pokemon_gal1993]

Hey Pokexproduction((pc sista,lol^^))

Sprites:**Makin It**
Name: Jasmine
Story: Jasmine lived in Lilycove,and was always attactched to the ocean.
Personality: She would always pull pranks on people she was annoyed by.She is nice to the people she likes,and her friends.She stands for what she believes in,and gets cocky sometimes.She hates it when people make fun of her.
Team: good/omega latios's team
Pokemon: umbreon,espeon,dragonite,ninetails

[Domin-8]

great your i. jsut give me the sprites when you can

[Celebi22]

Eppy 13 is here
http://tinypic.com/view/?pic=nq9swk
if you are confused, wait until the special to come out
--------------------BIG SPOILER-------------------------
============================================
Wait Let me guess the informant is Dash? Cuz he is the one who deals with mice (Pikachu,Raichu,Pichu,Plusle and Minun) and he is like Mace because Mace also owns Electric Pokemon and so does Dash...Woo Hoo I rock...
---------------------------------------------------------
============================================

Well Yeah great Eppys Coreystranick! Can't wait to see more!

[Domin-8]

Yup! Good one, yeah i was tired and couldn't hink

[Houndoom1]

I'mtrying my best to get Mace some walking sprites since the lance sprtie dosen't have some so It may take a while loger to get some.

[カクンネコ]

Like the others said, you have a couple of mistakes like when it went to show what was on TV, it said something like "show hat was on TV" and when it should have said she in one part, it said "hse"... And also where it said BROWN HAIRED TRAINER talking, both trainers had brown hair...
Aside from the mistakes, it was good; I don't care to much for the length, but I make short comics, not a series, so that's just me.

I'd be happy to make some sprites for you, just PM me what you're looking for in the sprites.

[Domin-8]

Yeah, i was stupid whne imade those. Now i check for errors, i still make them but not as many

[Shattered Moon]

I think you are doing great..KougaWolf basically covered your mistakes. I'm really tiered now..I had such a bad day..

If you look in my signature..I make sprites too..but I only started making them yesterday..so you might think they stink..

[Domin-8]

they are all good, i like the blue trainer with a skirt. (second one from teh left)

[Shattered Moon]

Thanks, that is my favorite too. Tell me if you make another one..I'd like to be in it if you would like.

[カクンネコ]

I don't mind you using my sprites, here are 3 females:

*http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a168/kougawolf/Cs.jpg I call her Jess, but you can call her anything;;
*http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a168/kougawolf/ff910556.jpg Never named her;;
*http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a168/kougawolf/3fd87f17.gif My favorite female sprite;;

[Shattered Moon]

You are very talented KougaWolf. I like them all, especially the third one.

[Domin-8]

I like them all, a V-day comic might be out today.
If i decide to make it. ALso shattered moon you cn join season two if you lke. go to the front page to get eh form

[Shattered Moon]

I might have to do that tomarrow, I'm getting off in a minute. It was nice talking to you guys. :)

[Domin-8]

YAY! EVen though it is almost over... a v-day comic
http://tinypic.com/view/?pic=nv604k

[pokemon_gal1993]

ok thanks^^still making her

[Domin-8]

that is alright. Just get them to me when you can

[pokexproduction]

yay ,kiis is in the comic now^^

[Domin-8]

yes, did you read the v-day comic? I think i did bad, it is stupid. you am yfind it funny

[pokexproduction]

yes, did you read the v-day comic? I think i did bad, it is stupid. you am yfind it funny


yeah it was funny XD but in the beging I was like wondering what it was about

[Domin-8]

yeah,i knew that would happen

[Shattered Moon]

Sprite: http://i1.tinypic.com/nv2mhd.jpg http://i1.tinypic.com/nwap1d.jpg
Name: Serenity
Story: Serenity was constantly abused by her father when she was young. After her ninth birthday she ran away. She took care of herself for a while, sometimes she was attacked by pokemon..but not often. After a while, she learned to catch pokemon. Her first pokemon was a Feebas (sp?) and after it evolved, she wanted to catch more pokemon. A couple years after, Serenity found out that she had been depending too much on her own pokemon. To this day she has been very fragile and doesn't talk so much to people..only to her pokemon.
Pokemon: Molotic, Gardevoir, Vaporeon, Seadra, Dragonair
Team: Good
Personality: Hardly has any expression on her face. In battle, she doesn't give up even if she is clearly defeated. Serenity cares for people though, mostly people who are younger than her,she doesn't believe anyone her age could care for her.

[Domin-8]

sweet, i like this character
2 spots left on OL's team
3 left on E.OL's team

is anyone gonna join that dark side?