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Ryu-Chan
February 4th, 2006, 07:00 PM
Ok here is a new PC comic! Ill make charecter profiles later.

Ok comic 1

http://img387.imageshack.us/img387/7067/gfjhtjtuik7bh.png

comic 2
http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/2503/hmhgk5ph.png

im working on the other comics!

adwajr
February 4th, 2006, 07:23 PM
Thstyst it?
Good going but you might wanna put a box around the words and draw a line directley.

Ryu-Chan
February 4th, 2006, 07:24 PM
I might do that i that just how i started out.But its hard.Anybody can be in comiic.

Omega Latios
February 4th, 2006, 07:32 PM
Boring Comic... And You Should Do Speech Bubbles.And They Just Say. "Hi!" Or Something... You Should Really Improve... 6/10

Smarties-chan
February 4th, 2006, 07:38 PM
Boring Comic... And You Should Do Speech Bubbles.And They Just Say. "Hi!" Or Something... You Should Really Improve... 6/10
Look who's talking -_- I don't see many intelligent conversations in your comics either.

Anyway... This comic is rather boring. But all comics of this kind are, so that doesn't tell much. I suggest you make speech bubbles and try to come up with a more original plot. If I see another comic with spammers attacking PC I'm going to puke >.> You should really make more comics before you open a thread though, atleast enough so everyone knows what the plot is about. For now though... 2/10 I'm not a big fan of these kinds of comics, and the characters don't talk much either -_- Anyway... keep going and if you make an original plot I might actually give your comic a higher rating. Just keep at it and remember, originality is the key to a good comic.

Ryu-Chan
February 4th, 2006, 07:40 PM
I might as whell join!http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e293/KygoreTrainer/kt3xq5cy.gif just delete the overworlds
u can join!anybody can!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Omega Latios
February 4th, 2006, 07:41 PM
By The Way, You Copied My Team Rocket Idea.

Ryu-Chan
February 4th, 2006, 07:42 PM
So i couldnet come up with anythng else.
Anyway comic 3
http://img387.imageshack.us/img387/4605/hfkloiul7ew.png

Kyogre Trainer
February 4th, 2006, 07:57 PM
ok i change my mind i might join when you get speech bubbles

sarah241847
February 4th, 2006, 08:07 PM
theyr all about pc and have the front page in it...sry but thats a li borning....find screenshots or something...

Flaming Quilava
February 4th, 2006, 10:16 PM
God. Boring. Nothing happening. Screen shots, buable, and stuff like that.

Karasu
February 4th, 2006, 10:19 PM
I agree with DM... It's boring, pointless, and sloppy. And that Team Rocket thing's been used so many times, making it even more un-interesting... >.>

Silon
February 4th, 2006, 10:32 PM
Try using a user-friendly text box.
Please credit me. :)
http://img394.imageshack.us/img394/2637/userfriendly6zq.gif

Karasuma
February 4th, 2006, 10:50 PM
Try using a user-friendly text box.
Please credit me. :)
http://img394.imageshack.us/img394/2637/userfriendly6zq.gif

You sure you made those? I've seen plenty of those speech bubbles in the sprites resources section and in other comics that are in SPPF and like Poke-Chow.

sarah241847
February 5th, 2006, 03:43 AM
just er surf under yahoo/google search image screenshots....