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conmad
February 6th, 2006, 04:56 PM
Here are all my sprite comics:
Season 1 The Beginning
Comic 1 - http://www.amnesiahacker.500megs.info/Croc055/Sprite1.bmp
Comic 2 - http://www.amnesiahacker.500megs.info/Croc055/Sprite2.bmp
Comic 3 - http://www.amnesiahacker.500megs.info/Croc055/Sprite3.bmp
Comic 4 - http://www.amnesiahacker.500megs.info/Croc055/Sprite4.bmp
Comic 5 - http://www.amnesiahacker.500megs.info/Croc055/Sprite5.bmp
Comic 6 - http://www.amnesiahacker.500megs.info/Croc055/Sprite6.bmp
Comic 7 - http://www.amnesiahacker.500megs.info/Croc055/Sprite7.bmp
Comic 8 - http://www.amnesiahacker.500megs.info/Croc055/Sprite8.bmp
Comic 9 - http://www.amnesiahacker.500megs.info/Croc055/Sprite9.bmp
Comic 10 - http://www.amnesiahacker.500megs.info/Croc055/Sprite10.bmp
Comic 11 - http://www.amnesiahacker.500megs.info/Croc055/Sprite11.bmp
Comic 12 - http://www.amnesiahacker.500megs.info/Croc055/Sprite12.bmp
Season 2 Pewter City
Comic 13 - http://www.freewebs.com/croc055/Sprite%20Comic%2013.bmp
Comic 14 - http://www.freewebs.com/croc055/Sprite%20Comic%2014.bmp
Comic 15 - http://www.freewebs.com/croc055/Sprite%20Comic%2015.bmp
Comic 16 - http://www.freewebs.com/croc055/Sprite%20Comic%2016.bmp
Comic 17 - http://www.freewebs.com/croc055/Sprite%20Comic%2017.bmp
Comic 18 - http://www.freewebs.com/croc055/Sprite%20Comic%2018.bmp



All comments are welcome.If anyone wants to offer sprites I will use them and I'll put them on my avatar.

Credits:
The Spriters Resourse
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Adam_148
Sunflorazumarill
Pokesho.com
adwajr
February 6th, 2006, 06:28 PM
You might want to draw lines to the person who says it... or give a character there own text colour.
conmad
February 6th, 2006, 09:12 PM
Yeah I think I will do that
ZephyrPlusle
February 6th, 2006, 10:55 PM
Seems okay for a start, but... um... Punctuation? Hello? The grammar seems a little off. Plus, I'd reccommend using panels instead of the whole town, especially when you only use one speech bubble. You could probably put a lot more story in if you broke it up into smaller bits.

If you understood a word of that, congrats!
conmad
February 9th, 2006, 03:29 PM
I can do what I like ZephryPlusle
Phoenixx
February 11th, 2006, 05:52 PM
I odn't like the thickness of the text.
conmad
February 11th, 2006, 11:32 PM
episodes 6-12 now added!!!
Omega Latios
February 12th, 2006, 08:18 AM
Hmm... Pretty Good For Beginner... But There Is Some Problems. What Is The Plot? And Text Is Too Big. Make It Smaller. And In Comic 10 There Is Some Black Stuff Around The Speech Bubbles. You Also Used Default Paint Colors To Make Effects. Make Your Own Colors.

4/10
Shijuukara
February 12th, 2006, 08:22 AM
Umm...Croc, please actually try listenign to the advice of others. You are using the whole town for a comic, try making them to panel. Also get better font and speech bubbles. Make mroe screens other than one.

6/10

http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d113/XiaolinDraginis/Animations/Angel-Of-Darkness.gif
conmad
February 12th, 2006, 08:51 AM
I've been wondering about how to get panels, can someone tell me how to make them.
Shijuukara
February 12th, 2006, 08:53 AM
You don't get them you make them.

http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d113/XiaolinDraginis/Animations/Angel-Of-Darkness.gif
conmad
February 14th, 2006, 03:35 PM
I'm not going to make panels it takes to long
mutten641
February 15th, 2006, 12:21 PM
well it's alright i guess but you really shoud do pannels it shows a bit of lazyness if you don't. Oh and just so ou know the fie you save in (BMP) takes quite a long time to load so maybe save in PNG
Matt Silver
February 16th, 2006, 10:39 PM
I cant say that i hate this because its ok.
But im annoying at the following:
The button in your sig- Did u ask Shadowburn to use that? Cause it looks like mine alot.
tnt974
February 17th, 2006, 11:59 PM
lol they are graet but you need some rondom stuff
conmad
February 19th, 2006, 10:45 AM
Does anyone want to be in this
Sunflorazumarill
February 19th, 2006, 02:13 PM
I got a character you can put in the comic!

http://img24.exs.cx/img24/1504/sunflora_azumarill_fusion01.gif

Her name is Sunflorazumarill. She can use any attack that either Sunflora or Azumarill can know. She also has the power to split into a regular Sunflora and Azumarill; like this:

http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/pkrs337.gifhttp://www.pokemonelite2000.com/pkrs056.gif

You should have a comic where she does that.

http://tinypic.com/bhzhwp.png

And here's her overworld and backsprites.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v236/dragonzlair2/Sunflorazumarill.png

Here's a set of Sunflorazumarill overworlds amydamuffinlady did.

http://tinypic.com/b8l0i

Here's an alternate Sunkarill (Sunflorazumarill's prevolution) sprite.
conmad
February 21st, 2006, 05:53 PM
It's in and Comics 13-18 are added
Signomi
February 21st, 2006, 06:35 PM
I can do what I like ZephryPlusle

People do actually give you criticism to help you look back on the flaws stated and help you improve on them. So I'd suggest you take ZephyrPlusle's critic on your work to consideration and use it to help you in anyway possible.