rate my first link battle team

[Rukario_Fighter]

Hey, i was wanting some input on this team, you know, rate on scale of 1 to 10, send some suggestive movesets, anything u think would help. This is my first team :D.

Slowbro@leftovers
Modest: 252 HP, 252 Def, 6 Sp Att
Calm Mind
Surf
Psychic
Ice Beam

Omastar@Salac Berry
Modest: 252 Sp Att, 129 Spd, 129 Sp Def
Rain Dance
Hydro Pump
Spikes
Ice Beam

Machamp@leftovers
Adamant: 252 Att, 129 Def, 129 Sp Def
Cross Chop
Rock Slide
Bulk Up
Earthquake

Torkoal@leftovers
Bold: 252 HP, 129 Sp Def, 129 Def
Toxic
Amnesia
Flamethrower
Rest

Miltank@leftovers
Jolly: 252 HP, 129 Def, 129 Sp Def
Heal Bell
Milk Drink
Thunder Wave
Body Slam

Dusclops@leftovers
Careful: 252 HP, 129 Def, 129 Sp Def
Mean Look
Will-o-Wisp
Night Shade
Confuse Ray

Hopefully its not too shabby, thanks for all your input to all of you who reply.

[Synchronize]

looks pretty good for an in-game competitve battling team. Give Omastar Petaya Berry since it SHOULD have Swift Swim. Dusclops would benefit more with Rest or Pain Split over Mean Look IMO. But juding by the fact that you might be the only one in your neighborhood EV training, Dusclops might not die anyway =/. But still consider Rest over Mean Look or c.Ray. Miltank doesn't really need Body Slam AND T-Wave, so I'd suggest Shadow Ball over T-Wave or Seismic Toss over Body Slam just in case anyone you know knows what a MCGar is.

7/10

[aragornbird]

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I don’t like your EV sets, stuff like 252/129/129 are way too simplistic.

Omastar doesn’t need Sp. Def EVs. It’s not like its going to survive Electric or Grass attacks anyways (and you should be able to kill off most Electrics with your STAB+Rain Dance+Hydro Pump). I’d add more into Speed because even an Omastar with perfect speed needs around 168 to outrun the likes of Timid Jolteon and Jolly Aerodactyl. Then put the leftovers into HP.

For Machamp, concentrate on HP, since HP increase both defenses at the same time.

Torkoal overall is meh as a tank and Toxic just isn’t very useful in the competitive realm. Replace it with Yawn to better force switches.

Miltank is good, but you should have given it a Bold nature. Anyways, like Synchronize said, give it Shadow Ball over T-Wave since Miltank, unlike Blissey, can actually attack, And you’ll want some EVs in Attack.

Give Dusclops a lot more Defense since you already have a Careful Nature .

Overall this is pretty good for in-game. The minor changes will help, but it’s already solid. 8/10

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[Rukario_Fighter]

allright this helps alot thanks alot you guys! :):) By the way AragornBird what do you suggest as a better tank then?

[Rukario_Fighter]

Yeah, I revised my team taking into account your suggestions, but i'm a little unsure about the Ev's. Heres my revised team

Slowbro@leftovers
Modest: 252 HP, 252 Def, 6 Sp Att
Calm Mind
Ice Beam
Surf
Psychic
Nothin new here :)

Omastar@Petaya Berry
Modest: 252 Sp Att, 235 Spd, 23 hp
Rain Dance
Hydro Pump
Ice Beam
Spikes
Changed Ev's around, i'm not too skilled in Ev's yet so i'm looking for some input on 'em :)

Machamp@leftovers
Adamant: 255 Att, 255 HP
Rock Slide
Cross Chop
Earthquake
Bulk Up
Some Ev's revised

Torkoal@leftovers (better tank? Anyone? Open For Suggestions!)
Bold: 252 HP, 129 Sp Def, 129 Def
Yawn
Rest
Amnesia
Flamethrower
changed toxic to yawn, really looking for a better tank, torkoals cool an all, but really.

Miltank@leftovers
Bold: 252 HP, 129 Def, 129 Sp Def
Milk Drink
Heal Bell
Shadow Ball
Seismic Toss
Changed some moves around and gave a different nature. Thanks Aragornbird, bold is actually way better lol.

Dusclops@leftovers
Careful: 200 HP, 181 Def, 129 Sp. Def
Mean Look
Will-O-Wisp
Night Shade
Rest
I changed some Ev's and a move. I thought this guy was to be a trapper who then let his opponents status conditions eat away at his life while Dusclops just sits around.

[aragornbird]

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Wait, I meant to say Impish on Miltank lol. That way, you aren’t decreasing your attack.

Hmmm, for physical walls, the most popular is Skarmory. Forretress is another one. Cloyster too, but you already have 2 Waters so it’s not needed. Weezing and Donphan are also good choices.

I’d say Donphan. You need another physical attacker on your team and Donphan can fit both jobs. A good moveset would be Earthquake/Rock Slide/Rapid Spin/Roar, but you can replace Rapid Spin with Rest if you’re not afraid of Spikes.
Whatever Pokemon you choose, make all their natures are Impish and give them plenty of Defense and HP.

Also for EVs, make sure they are all divisible by 4. You’ll have two points leftover in the end but those are useless so don’t worry about them.

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[Rukario_Fighter]

Thanks for all your help Aragornbird :)

[aragornbird]

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You’re welcome! :D

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[Synchronize]

O yea, forget about me right?

[Rukario_Fighter]

lol sorry about that synchronize, you're awesome too! :) (i'm sure it doesn't sound so great, but i really appreciate your help!)