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Chase Leader
February 10th, 2006, 11:44 AM
Falling From Below

And now I'm here, lost in my life, living like everyone else. I ask, can it be real, its gone so fast but the memories are endless. That night I never looked back, that night I ran away. I left behind my shattered heart...it mean everything to me. Now I'm here with a heart that not mine, she gave me some of hers, she too left, but she made it grow... My heart isn't finished yet its all I know. So here I am falling from below, searching with my heart.

Don't mind any of my poor grammer or if I spelled anything wrong...I wrote this late last night early this morning.

February 10th, 2006, 12:39 PM
The writing itself was fine, letting the readers think to themselves what's provoking about it. I wouldn't really consider this an official prose; perhaps a concrete poem or a drabble? Either way, not bad at all. There's definitely potential if you added on to it a bit more. ^_^