Pokemon toxic

[pokeman1000]

ok me and jedite1000 has teamed up to create a comic so here it is

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Rise of team toxic saga

Chapter 1 - The better pokemon (http://img47.imageshack.us/img47/6035/ch11ox.png)
Chapter 2 - Sibling rivalry (http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/7535/ch28im.png)
Chapter 3 - The electric trainer (http://img404.imageshack.us/img404/970/ch32vd.png)
Chapter 4 - The powerfull thunder attack (http://img126.imageshack.us/img126/3346/ch41pp.png)

and here is the characters so far
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Name:Jaden
age:10
Description: Jaden is a 10 year old boy who wants to be a pokemon master but during his journey team toxic is there to make sure he fails

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Name:jade
Age:10
Description: Jane is Jaden's sister, she always gets on his nerves but Jane also has a dream, she want's to becomea member of the elite 4

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Name: Jade & pearl
Age:8
Description: Jade & pearl are twins sisters, but also sisters to jaden & jane they do not care for adventures so they stay at home with the family pokemon

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Name: Watson
Age: old
Description: Watson became a pokemon professor now he gives out pokemon as starters he resigned his gym duties now watt is the new gym leader

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Name: Mace
Age: unknown
Description:Mace is a Trainer with a strange likeing for Electric Pokemon. He lives in Saffron and in Mauville. Mace won't let anyone getin his way of becoming the best Electric Trainer!

Team toxic
team toxix is a new evil organisation their plan is to turn all the pokemon into evil pokemon using a new pokeball called toxicball it has the power to transform any pokemon to pure evil,also they want to take out the top pokemon trainers so their will be no one to stop them

so enjoy the comic

made by
pokeman1000
jedite1000

also if u like 2 join the comic fill out this form
name:
age:
description:
sprites:
pokemon:
position: (trainer, gym leader, team toxic)

if u want to be a gym leader fill out this extra part
gym town:
you can only be in one gym once all gyms are filled out no one else can become a gym leader
(Watt is already the mauville city gym leader)

if you want to be a toxic member fill out this extra part
position (grunt,leader)
also u need the sprites clothes to be purple
(note: all toxic member pokemon are evil:

[The Dash]

Well its ok but
1.The start is a bit overused
2. The boxes are VERY big. You dont need that much black space.

But its off to a good start atleast. I'll join if youll allow me to?

name: Dash
age: 14
description: Dash used to own a electric mouse ranch on Route 8 untill it was barraged by Rockets. He has been seeking them out for ages ow for his revenge.
sprites: http://dasheo.com/images/dashss.PNGhttp://dasheo.com/images/Dash.PNG
pokemon: Pikachu, Pichu, Plusle , Minun (and if im allowed a leg) Jirachi
position: Trainer
Credit:
Avatar for the Falanker base sprites that Dash is made from.
??? for the Backsprite (If the person who made it is reading this PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE pm me.)

If you want any help with sprites and such I have plenty of time over half term (This week) and would be happy to help. Just PM me :)

[pokeman1000]

ok cool u r in ill think about it if u can have a jirachi, i have 2 ask jedite1000

[The Dash]

lol ok man XD
Cheers for putting me in.

[pokexproduction]

The boxes are a bit big,but can I join??

name: Danielle
age: 14
description: Danielle lived in Littleroot,but got bored of her same,and boring life.She ran away and stole a started pokemon(her eevee)from Prof. Oak,from the lab,and started her journey.She dreams to become the greatest pokemon trainer.
Personality: determined,nice,mean(sometimes,confident,hard worker,Outgoing,fun,adventurous,clumbsy,anxious sometimes
sprites: http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f35/rocafellaxshawty/6e50e7bd.png
pokemon: eevee, vulpix, flygon , dragonair
position: trainer

[Jedite1000]

yep we r working 2gether
ok u r in and as for the other guy u can have jirachi

[Houndoom1]

I'll join!
name: Mace
age: (I don't even know lol!)
description: Mace is a Trainer with a strange likeing for Electric Pokemon. He lives in Saffron and in Mauville. Mace won't let anyone getin his way of becoming the best Electric Trainer!
sprites:http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d35/houndoom1/ElectricLance1.png
pokemon: Manetric, Ampharos, and Electabuzz
position: Trainer or Gymleader (you choose)

[pokeman1000]

i have chapter 2 up and u r in houndoom, cause u have electrick pokemon and there is already a electric gym leader u can be a trainer.. is that ok?

[Micans]

You might want to improve the grammar in your comic. Aside from that, it's okay so far.

[pokeman1000]

ok chapter 3 is up....enjoy

[Jedite1000]

we have chapter 4 up take a look