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code zerro the deluge
February 17th, 2006, 07:02 AM
I gotta stand out
above the crowd
even if I gotta shout out loud
so that I'm the only thing you see
I'm gonna stand out so you notice me

I am gonna freeze time
read your mind
do all the things I am gonna try
All my life
i saw you for who you are
beutifull,talented,and smart
But did you notice me
i doub't highly but maybe
well if not I am gonna

I gotta stand out
above the crowd
even if I gotta shout out loud
so that I'm the only thing you see
I'm gonna stand out so you notice me

You see you blow my mind
all the time
wondering why
make poetry and love songs
knowing the diffrence bewtween right and rong
and all along
I should have said somthing
well i am gonna shout from here to school
make shour you know that you are my world
And I want you to be my only girl
so


I gotta stand out
above the crowd
even if I gotta shout out loud
so that I'm the only thing you see
I'm gonna stand out so you notice me

moody_cow_
February 18th, 2006, 09:19 PM
*giggle* I don't care how much of a loser it makes me for saying this, but the chorus or refrain or wahtever sounds like the song Stand Out from the Goofy Movie!!! Lol!! I swear I would never have noticed this if I hadn't been forced to watch that movie by my sister the other day! :P

Anyways, it's a great poem!!! Excellent work!! :D

code zerro the deluge
February 19th, 2006, 05:00 AM
heheeheheheh. I kinda like redid the chorus.

OOC I love that movie though.

pink-tiger
February 19th, 2006, 08:34 AM
Oh thats a good poem...I like love poems and poems that talk about feelings...
Tell me....did u make this poem 2 show ur feelings....

moody_cow_
February 19th, 2006, 09:04 AM
Heh heh, I kind of thought that you had! :) And I like the movie too, but I like the sequel so much more!!! Probably because I'm a sucker for anything to do with skateboarding... :)

code zerro the deluge
February 20th, 2006, 06:41 AM
yey kinda for a girl at school.

OOC first was best