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code zerro the deluge
February 17th, 2006, 07:12 AM
if you listen to each others heart
you'll find your self in a better part
and maybe love is the reason why
if this happens you will have a better life

Love is preacouis and small
I love a girl not to thin and not to tall
just right for me
we see about each others harmony
we were ment for each other
as if we were sister and brother
One day i will be the father she the mother
but however it wasn't always right
because are love wan't alwasy so tight

if you listen to each others heart
you'll find your self in a better part
and maybe love is the reason why
if this happens you will have a better life

We were kinda broken
i started smokin
we were fighting
my life was cracked and so
i started over
i told her i love her
She smiled but sayed get another
i was so sad
deep down I was mad
at myself telling me what a waste
So then I started the chace
She gave me one more chance
as I look back and glance
i remmber our dance

if you listen to each others heart
you'll find your self in a better part
and maybe love is the reason why
if this happens you will have a better life

This goes out to my friend Bria Bennet
Died on a bridge in a car accident in 2004
At 12 We were friends
i din't know her life would just end

Rai
February 17th, 2006, 03:20 PM
That was a very nice poem ^^

Amy-chan
February 17th, 2006, 03:36 PM
Yes. Though, it did have a few grammatical and spelling errors...

code zerro the deluge
February 18th, 2006, 11:14 AM
thanx Rai you to thorns. i type to fast that is why.

Amy-chan
February 18th, 2006, 11:21 AM
Yeah, but you could perhaps try to proofread what you have typed and make edits before posting. *shrugs* It's just a suggestion.

Oh, and do you still need that verse for the other poem? o-o;

code zerro the deluge
February 18th, 2006, 11:31 AM
what that song yeah I do. why?

Amy-chan
February 18th, 2006, 11:57 AM
Just wondering...maybe I still could help you. What's the boy's name?

Yuka
February 18th, 2006, 02:59 PM
This is a really great poem.^^

code zerro the deluge
February 18th, 2006, 03:36 PM
heheeheh thnx alot. the boy is me and his name is jay