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Overlord IX
February 17th, 2006, 4:02 PM
If Im not too busy working on my Febuary entry or school work,I'll be busting out some home-made comics. Very quick for that matter. Anyway its the first ones im doing so tell me what u think of them. If its good,I may do more. ^^

Safe Part 1 (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v396/IXIAN/Barracks/fcefasd.jpg)
Safe Part 2 (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v396/IXIAN/Barracks/3bsfds.jpg)
Surf's up! (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v396/IXIAN/Barracks/dvffe.jpg) NEW! 19/2/06

February 17th, 2006, 4:15 PM
hahahahahah really funny and cool dude XD i liked how the story ended xd

February 17th, 2006, 5:35 PM
Ooh, I like it! You can draw very well, too. I can't draw if my life depended on it. >_>

February 17th, 2006, 5:52 PM
it looks so cool but shoud it be in comics?

February 17th, 2006, 6:50 PM

Aaw, cute. It’s like Tom and Jerry only with your own original characters.


Overlord IX
February 17th, 2006, 9:33 PM
Thx guys! I've finished the related but slightly unrelated Safe part 2 (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v396/IXIAN/Barracks/3bsfds.jpg)!

Not as good as the first one. You can spot some very obvious flaws in the comic,but still,enjoy! =)

February 17th, 2006, 10:34 PM
dude thats funny lol. I enjoy the uses of leetspeak, or stuff like "PWNT", or "OMGWTF", ect.

Cookie luvs Green
February 18th, 2006, 12:53 PM
These are so cute!! XDD I agree with aragornbird that these are like Tom and Jerry cartoons x3

I can't believe you chose mushroom-picking for something Leafeon to do XD I dunno why that really suprised me, but I loved that a lot XD

You produce really neat lines, without the use of too much varied line thickness. Which fits here very well since it gives a simple clean look in my opinion. :3

I love the comical expressions on Overload on the first comic x3 and the mushroom falling off the basket is too adorable |D I dunno why.

There are some anatomical errors in the comics, a noticable one is in the second comic on the first panel, Overload's arm looks a bit curvy in a way. Try looking yourself in the mirror facing sideways with that pose :3 There are few other mistakes I found but you said these are quickly done, so I will not really complain x3 These look pretty good anyways so you don't have a problem with me.

Adorable work so far and make some more if you have the time x3

Overlord IX
February 19th, 2006, 6:18 AM
Please,do tell me if there are anymore mistakes i didnt notice. This way i can improve my comics further. Anyway thx for the comments guys! u guys are the best!

This just in,the new episode called Surf's up! (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v396/IXIAN/Barracks/dvffe.jpg) Do enjoy,and pls comment! ^^

February 19th, 2006, 7:54 AM
XD Those are beyond funny. I love "Safe Part 2". The coin was the perfect touch to a classic gag.

I can't wait to see more comics. Keep up the great work.

Overlord IX
February 19th, 2006, 6:52 PM
Thx man! ^^ As long as i still have enough brain juice in me,I may continue making more. But currently Im getting inspiration from other artist far more greater than me.
*takes a can of extra large pepsi*

Forest Grovyle
February 22nd, 2006, 8:32 AM
Hehe, Overlord, these are awesome! :D I love the last one, and Leafeon is just so adorable ^_^ Great job! :) I really like these, and you have a great sense of humour! They would look great in colour!