JMH
February 18th, 2006, 06:24 PM
The Chronicles of Zare is where the JMH Series takes off.
Please R&R.
The Chronicles of Zare:
The Last Hope For Zare
BOOK 1 OF 4
By Seng, Brock
BASED ON THE CHRONICLES OF NARNIA
Focus thinking about a killer animal. A dragon let us say in this time. Okay the dragon lives in a land named Zare. Now you live in London, England and you move to a new house. It is awesome, but there is this one door that the owners before you can’t open. Think about when that door opens it brings you to that land I mentioned called Zare and that dragon is right in your face. And that door disappears. So, we meet with three kids who finally think up the ultimate plan. To open that door.
“Hurry and open the bloody door, Macy, it is getting boring” Harold spoke to Macy busy using a pick to get it open.
“It isn’t going to work.” Jim said to Macy. Jim, the intelligent one and noble one (one day becoming the Last Knight of Zare), knew that the door wasn’t locked. But password decoded. Macy, the adventurous one (one day becoming Queen of Zare), tried more and more with the pick, ignoring everything Jim was saying. Harold, the impatient one (one day would be King of Zare), waited and wanting even more to get inside. Five minutes passed by and Macy still tried working on the lock.
“Like I said, it isn’t going to work” Jim repeated to his friend. Jim sat with his arms crossed and his left leg thumping. Thump-thump-thump-thump.
“Hurry up and open the door!” Harold yelled getting more anxious than ever.
“Shut up! Jim, quit thumping, and Harold be patient!” Macy screamed standing up at once.
“Once more, it won’t work that way.” Jim said, trying his best to get on Macy’s nerves.
“Okay then Mr. Brainiac, what will? Magic beans? A password?” Macy snapped back.
“Actually, a password is exactly what we ne” Jim was cut off
“You have got to be bloody kidding me?”
“No, I am not kidding you, and your tone is not helping.”
“How will we come across this password?”
“Research.”
“No, I am not doing any research about a possible password for a door.”
“Okay, earn a thousand American dollars and buy a decoder.”
“Or.”
“Research.”
“Ugh.”
“Wait. Come to think of it, all we need is a twenty dollar toy kit from America. A CSI: kit. We need to look for the fingerprints on the doorknob and see what insignias were touched. The order we will find by how dark to light the fingerprint is.”
“Okay, so let’s work on that instead.”
“This is all so bloody boring, I’m going to watch Football, the USA plays France this afternoon at 4, so bye-bye” Harold said walking away. As he turned the corner Jim and Macy ran into the office and went online. As the computer loaded up, Macy got them both some water bottles. Once the computer loaded, Jim went on the Internet and typed in walmart; he then went to toys and under search typed CSI kits. Up popped the fingerprint finder kit and it was on its way.
Two days passed, America beat France 2-0, and the package arrived. Jim spent three minutes trying to set it up. This is exactly what came up.
Letters on Lock: AERZ
Order of Letters (Most recent to oldest): ERAZ
Decoded: ZARE
Jim rubbed Z, then A, then R, and finally E. The lock “clicked” open. Macy ran out and interrupted Harold from USA and Britain game, USA leads 1-0. If USA wins they go to the World Championship against Belgium.
“It is opened” Macy screamed and Harold ran in there. Only the door was locked and Jim was gone.
Jim closed the door behind him as he walked inside this land. It was snowing, and as Jim walked out farther he saw a beautiful woman, she had long blonde hair, pretty eyes, but she wasn’t human, she was a Heat. A Heyt is something that seems to be pretty but is actually an ugly warthog like rhino that walks on two legs. Heyts work for the Dark Queen, who thinks she rules Zare. But this Heyt is wanted dead for being a traitor.
Anyways Jim saw this Heyt, and he fell in love. Only what he didn’t know is that is isn’t human.
“Hi, I am Jim, I am from London” Jim said to the Heyt.
“Lawn Doon? Where is Lawn Doon?” The Heyt answered back to Jim.
“London, England” Jim said to the Heyt, thinking it was weird because it didn’t know where London is.
“Egg Land? Okay welcome Jim from Lawn Doon in the beautiful place of Egg Land.” The Heyt bowed down to Jim.
“Thank you” Jim answered. And bowed back.
“Please come with me. I must get away from here, I’m wanted dead by the Dark Queen”
“The Dark Queen? Queen Elizabeth is not a dark queen.”
“Queen who? Fero is the queen here”
“Where is here?”
“Zare”
“I thought I was in my house in England”
“I’m sorry Jim but you are not in Egg Land anymore. This is the land of Zare. But we must go now. Come with me.”
Macy and Harold stood outside the door staring at it. They picked up the kit and used it. Now they thought the letters in order were AZRE, which yes the door opened, but it opened into a cellar. They left the door open, and walked down; it was like a basement, nothing special, but no Jim.
Jim was walking with the Heyt into the Zare Forest. The Heyt walked in the forest first as Jim tried to walk in but was thrown onto his back.
“You know Gerleta that human blood is not allowed inside the Forest of Zare.” One of the trees screamed out as Jim stood up, only to be swiped by another branch.
“Wait a minute, if humans are not allowed inside the forest, how come Gerleta is allowed in?” Jim said not standing back up. At this time Gerleta transformed into the real look of a Heyt. The warthog like rhino looking thing was standing over Jim.
“Like I said, humans are not allowed in the Forest of Zare.” The tree screamed out again.
In the cellar sat Macy and Harold, knowing they lost one of their friends, headed back up the stairs and into the hallway.
“So, Jim is gone and the great place behind the door is a bloody cellar?” Harold asked Macy even though he knew the answer. “I’m going to watch Football some more.”
Macy watched Harold walk away shaking his head, Macy turned to the door and worked some more. The possible outcomes of getting ZARE are many. But for some odd reason, Macy had a feeling that it was ZARE. Macy rubbed the Z, then A, then R, then E and the door “clicked” unlock. Macy walked inside, closing the door behind her, she saw snow pouring down everywhere, And Jim ahead with a very beautiful girl, but Jim was on the ground, scared.
“Oh, let him in.” Gerleta spoke to the tree. Macy ran up to Jim and the tree used a branch to knock her over.
“Oh, and who is that?” The tree asked Macy.
“I am Macy, and how are you talking?” Macy asked the tree.
“Someone is new to Zare.” The tree told them as he moved and let them inside. So they walked inside the forest, Macy still wondering what is going on.
“Okay, Jim what is this place and what is going on?” Macy asked Jima s they followed the Heyt.
“Macy, this is Zare, ZARE, but you should know since you opened the door.” Jim answered her.
“Csar is spelled CSAR, not ZARE.” Macy snapped back to Jim.
“But not here.” The Heyt named Gerleta snapped at her.
“Oops! So why were you allowed inside here?” Macy asked the Heyt and Jim was shaking his hands like no no no! The Heyt transformed into its real form. So be prepared for a horror part of this story.
“Aghhhhhhhhhh! What in God’s bloody name are you?” Macy asked her, sorry it.
“I am Gerletta the Heyt.” Gerletta answered’
“A what?” Macy asked hiding behind Jim. The Heyt led them deeper into the forest until they were halfway inside it when the Heyt brought out a sword. The snow was a steady downfall and the Heyt stared at them.
“Now, I, Gerletta the Heyt will stand here and let you know who the boss of Zare is.” Gerletta looked at them, took the sword and sliced down a tree. Then stared at Jim right in the eyes. The Heyt got on all fours and charged right at Jim, but before it got there an arrow flew threw the Heyt’s body, and it fell dead. Out walks a centaur, bow in hand, arrows on its back.
“I am Gladius, a Knight of Zare, I can tell you are new to Zare, since you are a human for one, but Heyts are royal servants to the Dark Queen. Never ever, ever trust a Heyt. But centaurs are decedents of King Juh and Queen Rew. But Queen Fero is trying t take over and she calls herself Queen. So would you rather be with the Dark Queen, who wants you dead, or me, a centaur, only here to get humans away from Dark Queen servants?”
The centaur asked Macy and Jim
“I, Jim of London, England, here by renounce my life to the King and Queen of Zare.” Jim said bowing down to the centaur. Macy said the same and bowed also.
“You do not have to bow. But thank you. Now hop onto my back and I will take you to the Queen and King.” The centaur bent down and they hopped on. The centaur galloped west out of the forest. “So there is this war going on right now, and since you are here, you can help us. There wouldn’t happen to be another human to be brought here, could there?”
They looked at each other and just remembered about Harold, who was at home watching football.
“There is, can you take us back east and then north and into the open plains.” Jim said to Gladius.
“Okay, hold on” Gladius said as he stopped and flew back into the other direction.
“So why do you need another human?” Macy asked Gladius.
“There is a prophecy if three humans step on soil in the land of Zare at one time a war will break out and the Dark Queen will fail. So by bringing the other human” Gladius said before being interrupted.
“That bringing my friend Harold is Zare’s last hope of getting rid of the Dark Queen?” Jim interrupted
“Yes.” Gladius answered.
Harold was lying on his sofa for about eight hours dozing on and off as USA beat London 4-2, and Harold jumped up when he heard aloud bang.
“Harold, come with us.” Macy said grabbing him off the sofa. Jim was rubbing the letters again, but nothing happened. He tried again, and nothing. They were locked out of Zare, and they couldn’t go back. They can’t help Gladius who saved their lives. “This can’t be happening!
Yet it was.
Have you ever heard of a thing called “hope”? Hope is a strange word, sometimes hope is used as someone’s name, sometimes in a sentence like “I have hope of making it big” but the hope of getting back to Zare is even smaller. But Jim worked harder at it then ever. He tried every possibility there was to open that door. Yet he never tried turning the doorknob. That is when Harold turned the knob and walked into Zare.
“You wanted to get in, but never tried the doorknob?” Harold asked Jim as they were walking over to Gladius. The ground started to shake uncontrollably and that was the last hope of Zare. Completed. Let the war,
Begin!
The Chronicles of Zare:
The War in Zare
BOOK 2 OF 4
By Seng, Brock
BASED ON THE CHRONICLES OF NARNIA
As the ground shook uncontrollably, a griffin flew to the ground.
“The snow has stopped falling in the north; we have set up a base there.” The griffin said and flew back off into the north. Jim, Macy, and Harold were all in the south meeting with the King and Queen. Thousands of the King and Queen’s followers were suiting up for battle, but the long journey is what they were all worried about. A war is nothing for the people of Zare, since they are known to have tried a war before against the Dark Queen. But now the prophecy is full filled. So will they defeat the Dark Queen?
“Move out men!” Gladius screamed and thousands of men ran fast across the land towards the north. “Humans. You stay though. I got something for you.”
The centaur walked into the building and brought out some weapons and armor.
“Jim, this is your sword. Keep it with care; use it to slay the Dark Queen.” The centaur handed Jim his sword. “Macy, this is your own bow and arrows, use these to defeat the Dark Queen’s army.” The centaur handed Macy her bow and arrow “And finally, Harold here is your dual wield swords, use these when, I am sorry to be so brutal, slice there heads off.” Gladius handed the swords to Harold. He then gave them armor and they hopped on Gladius’ back and they bounded off north to base.
“Get working. We need to get moving!” The Dark Queen screamed at millions of Heyts and other evil animals. Three giants were walking with her huge army. “We will move north, our spy has let us know that base is set up north. We will give them a sneak attack.”
At base, The Army of Zare was setting up camp for the long night that awaits them. “We need people for night shift!” Gladius screamed standing on top of King’s Mountain. “Our archers will be up here during the day, and at night we need our duelers. Your leader will be Harold. If something is coming up at you be sure to check if it is okay to charge at them or it. If you disobey you will be beheaded! Are we going to beat the so-called Almighty Queen of Zare or are we going to sit here and let them destroy us?”
“Destroy them sir!” Everyone screamed and they were ready for the night. Three hours passed and a glowing light came from a ways downhill.
“Duelers, a light is glowing downhill, back down the hill and wait until they closen up, stay down so they can not see us. If they see us they won’t come near and we will not have a battle. Hear me?” Harold screamed out, they nodded and got into position. At that exact moment Jim woke up and walked outside, he saw everyone down, and the glowing light that came closer with every heartbeat. Harold was in front of Jim and stood up as the light was visible and thousands of the Dark Queen’s army was charging towards them. Harold pulled out the trumpet used at night shift. Everyone around camp woke up and got their weapons ready. The first battle was about to start at 234 days into a Zare year, at midnight. The advantage was on The Army of Zare’s side because of the higher ground. The archers and the griffins were on top of the hill as all the others charged down the hill at the Dark Queen’s Army. A huge rumbling sound started very loud as millions of people attacked each other.
“For Zare!” The archers sent billions of arrows into the sky as over a thousand of the Queen’s men died.
“For Zare!” As the griffins flew up from behind camp with boulders and dropped them onto a lot of the men. Four archers of Zare fell of the hill from the Dark Queen’s archers. Harold was down on the ground slicing men and destroying chariots. Jim was still on his way down the mountain to kill the Dark Queen, but was stopped by a Heyt. Macy was aiming for the Dark Queen’s head when she fell off the hill.
“Where do you think your going?” The Heyt asked, and what was so confusing is, it was Gerletta.
“You’re dead!” Jim said drawing his sword.
“Ah, you underestimate the Dark Queen. She brought me back to life. Something you can’t due because you don’t have black magic ability.” Gerletta said and brought out an ax. “Put your sword away, it won’t help you any. See, I am trained to use an ax.”
“And I am a black belt!” Jim screamed charging at Gerletta, she stabbed up with her ax, but Jim jumped and stabbed her in the heart, she fell to the ground dead. Jim thinking smart he chopped of its head as well and chugged it over the hill. Jim started to run farther on around the hill and saw the Dark Queen holding a head. The head of Gladius.
“Retreat up the hill!” Harold screamed and they all ran up the hill, Macy lay on the ground but Harold picked her up and ran up the hill. As they ran up the hill arrows flew and hit some more men. “Now once we are far enough up push down some boulders down the hill and crush them!”
Boulders flew down the hill and crushed the Queen’s men. The Dark Queen ran away from the battle as her men kept dying.
“Archers send those arrows into the air!” Jim screamed as arrows flew down along with boulders. He turned to Macy and Harold. “Gladius is dead. The Dark Queen chopped his head off. So now I am in charge until the King and Queen arrive.”
“He…he…is dead?” Macy made sure as she was just waking up. Dead bodies covered the ground everywhere where you can not see who is alive or dead. The griffins flew out from behind the hill with hundreds more boulders.
“Drop the rest of the boulders! And then The Battle of King’s Mountain will be won by The Real Army of Zare!” Jim screamed out and the griffins flew dropping boulders everywhere. About 345 men were left on the field. “Now, we will head in the direction of our Queen and King. I need all my fellow knights to meet me around back.”
Jim and the knights were in the back of the camp working on a plan. Counting Jim only 5 knights were present.
“Only five of us survived?” A knight asked in a shocked expression. “Two hundred of us were knights, and six survived the war. But only five made back on the retreat. Who are we missing?”
“Gladius. Our leader and fellow Knight of Zare. The Queen caught up to him and beheaded him.” Jim explained and then they got to work. “We will work with our King as our Queen will help out on healing our people. The Dark Queen will probably be here in the morning to heal her killed men. Two of us will stay here and watch for her. I will be one of them. Then two will lead the archers down the backside of the hill and to the Gerfod Hill to set up camp. The last one will follow Harold to the Queen and King’s Castle. We head out at sunset.”
“Yes sir!” Everyone said and they got in their tents and slept. Morning arrived very soon and everyone left where they were supposed to go. Harold led troops to the castle. Two knights led troops to set up base Gerfod Hill, and Jim stayed still, waiting for the Queen.
“Lets get moving now!” Harold screamed when everyone was dragging behind. “We have three hours to get to the Queen, if we are not there in three hours they will leave without us and then we do not know where to go!”
“Quit bossing me around. Your not in charge, Jim is. And he told us to follow you, not take orders!” The knight screamed, and Harold drew one of his swords. “Put your sword away before you get your head severed!”
“You can’t severe my head!” Harold screamed, in the blink of a second the knight drew his sword and put it back, only something changed, Harold’s hand lay on the ground. “You bloody idiot!”
“Next time it will be your head!” The knight screamed and he poured salture, a solution that fixes wounds in three minutes, onto his cut and his hand was back on like nothing happened. “Now, griffins please soar down and carry as many of us as you can. We do need to speed it up. We are over halfway there!”
A huge chant started and five hundred griffins soared down trying to carry the thousands that were walking. In no time at all, all five hundred griffins had men on their back and they were off. In a distance the Dark Queen’s camp was seen, empty. Then the griffins saw the Dark Queen’s army moving towards the Queen and King’s castle.
“Below us, the Dark Queen is on the move, two griffins transfer men, and head to warn Jim, and stay low everyone” The knight screamed, but it was to late, seven griffins soared to the ground with arrows in them. “Hurry!”
The knight knew that many of them were heading to Gerfod Hill for the next battle, but why were so many men heading towards the Queen and King? The griffins doubled back and headed towards Jim.
“Jim, they are after the Queen and King, get our men out of Gerfod Hill and to the castle.” The knight said
“Pouter, you have thousands of men, how many are there?” Jim asked Pouter
“Millions” Jim’s face was in shock, yes there were millions at the castle but why are they not going to Gerfod Hill, unless this is just a distraction.
“We have them in the palms of our hands. They can’t escape!” The Dark Queen screamed as her men were getting closer to the castle. Some were still hurt and wounded from the war that happened the night before, even though they were bleeding eternally they still kept going to please their Queen. This time her whole army was with her. She lost a good hundred thousand lat night. Her plan failed then, she hoped not now. She knew that the Queen and King had millions, but they were at Gerfod Hill, she hoped. They got up to the castle a little after noon, A few Heyts busted open the door, but the millions of people were no where to be seen. The Dark Queen, mad a furious that there was no one to destroy, or not even the Queen and King for that matter. “Burn this place!”
The Dark Queen had lit her staff on fire as to burn down the whole castle. Shooting fireballs everywhere she walked outside. Only to see that million, and the Queen and King of Zare.
“Well, here is a battle! Men, destroy them.” The Dark Queen was looking around; she didn’t see the humans anywhere. But high in the sky were five hundred or so griffins, dropping people off. The Dark Queen, getting nervous looked around some more. “Where are the humans?”
“Why should we tell you, your majesty?” The king answered stepping forward at her. Raising her wand the Dark Queen screamed out.
“Don’t give me sarcasm!” The Dark Queen screamed. And every warrior of the King and Queen’s army stood ready to attack.
“Put your weapons down and stand in attention!” The Queen screamed out at her men. “If she wishes to use magic to defeat us, let her!”
“Give me the humans. And no one will get hurt!” The Dark Queen screamed as she walked up to the Queen. She whispered “don’t forget, once this war is over, your done. Or if I get killed, you’re finished.”
“Back off!” The Queen screamed as many more men came from another area, Jim in the lead, along with Harold, and Macy.
“Yes, the humans!” The Dark Queen screamed and the King galloped off towards Jim.
“Head back to Gerfod Hill.” The King said as he arrived. Jim looked at him shocked. “The Dark Queen has my castle on fire and she wants you dead. So head back, leave your knights though.”
The knights with Jim and the others walked out towards the King.
“If we do not come back, Jim you are in charge.” The King said to Jim as Jim bowed down. “Where is…Gladius?”
“The Dark Queen beheaded him.” Jim said his head bowed down. Jim looking towards the castle saw nothing going on, which made it very suspicious. “Why are they not fighting?”
“I do not know.” The King turned his head, and the Dark Queen’s men were starting to walk towards them, weapons raised as if to attack. “Okay, Jim head back now, and hurry!”
They started to run back and the griffins met them halfway with a fast pick up and they were heading to Gerfod Hill.
The Queen was heading to the back of her castle which was burning to pieces. All of the white horses were crying and wanted to escape. She let them all go and her men and her galloped around the other way. She didn’t know why she let the Dark Queen go. But in front of a burning castle is no place to have a war. Even if it is with your worst enemy.
Setting up at Gerfod Hill, Jim sent the archers upon the hill, but hidden from plain view. He made the duelers and him go at the back base of the hill, half on one side, and half on the other. Soon after the Queen and her men showed up. Now the whole hill was ready for an attack. The Queen’s duelers were set up in the front, like a long colored line. The Dark Queen was seen galloping on her horse many miles away, just exiting the forest, but her men covered every green blade of grass. Jim stood to every dueler.
“This battle will be bloody, as you see, our King has not arrived. Over one thousand years ago, Zare had a bigger war than this is so far. And our King and Queen survived. Our knights and King are not here so it is up to us to defeat the Dark Queen!” Jim screamed out and the duelers ran around the hill to win this war. The Dark Queen’s duelers met them halfway, except the King and Queen’s men were not as powerful this time. They were getting defeated, bad. The Army of Zare was falling, the griffins, tired of flying, could not drop the rocks. Jim, tired from not sleeping, could not try to go after the Dark Queen. And he ended up watching the King get hit with an arrow. Jim heard three words.
“Jim please retreat” The King screamed as he fell dead. Jim knew what needed to be done.
“RETREAT!!!!!!” Jim screamed as he ran back to Gerfod Hill. Once there archers still fired arrows, and the men pushed boulders down the hill. Still, the boulders never hit any of the Dark Queen’s men because of all the Army of Zare’s dead bodies. “How could this happen to us? We are the greater army!”
“It is okay. We tried.” Macy said to Jim walking up. Many archers fell dead, arrows from The Army of Zare were killing very few of the Dark Queen’s Army but at least it was some. “Our archers can not hold up much longer. But I know who can. The Queen. She said herself a little while ago that she one day used her staff and created a barrier, only The Sword of Zare could puncture it. And that sword is only a myth. But only that sword could bring down the Dark Queen. And her army.”
Contuniued In Next Post
Please R&R.
The Chronicles of Zare:
The Last Hope For Zare
BOOK 1 OF 4
By Seng, Brock
BASED ON THE CHRONICLES OF NARNIA
Focus thinking about a killer animal. A dragon let us say in this time. Okay the dragon lives in a land named Zare. Now you live in London, England and you move to a new house. It is awesome, but there is this one door that the owners before you can’t open. Think about when that door opens it brings you to that land I mentioned called Zare and that dragon is right in your face. And that door disappears. So, we meet with three kids who finally think up the ultimate plan. To open that door.
“Hurry and open the bloody door, Macy, it is getting boring” Harold spoke to Macy busy using a pick to get it open.
“It isn’t going to work.” Jim said to Macy. Jim, the intelligent one and noble one (one day becoming the Last Knight of Zare), knew that the door wasn’t locked. But password decoded. Macy, the adventurous one (one day becoming Queen of Zare), tried more and more with the pick, ignoring everything Jim was saying. Harold, the impatient one (one day would be King of Zare), waited and wanting even more to get inside. Five minutes passed by and Macy still tried working on the lock.
“Like I said, it isn’t going to work” Jim repeated to his friend. Jim sat with his arms crossed and his left leg thumping. Thump-thump-thump-thump.
“Hurry up and open the door!” Harold yelled getting more anxious than ever.
“Shut up! Jim, quit thumping, and Harold be patient!” Macy screamed standing up at once.
“Once more, it won’t work that way.” Jim said, trying his best to get on Macy’s nerves.
“Okay then Mr. Brainiac, what will? Magic beans? A password?” Macy snapped back.
“Actually, a password is exactly what we ne” Jim was cut off
“You have got to be bloody kidding me?”
“No, I am not kidding you, and your tone is not helping.”
“How will we come across this password?”
“Research.”
“No, I am not doing any research about a possible password for a door.”
“Okay, earn a thousand American dollars and buy a decoder.”
“Or.”
“Research.”
“Ugh.”
“Wait. Come to think of it, all we need is a twenty dollar toy kit from America. A CSI: kit. We need to look for the fingerprints on the doorknob and see what insignias were touched. The order we will find by how dark to light the fingerprint is.”
“Okay, so let’s work on that instead.”
“This is all so bloody boring, I’m going to watch Football, the USA plays France this afternoon at 4, so bye-bye” Harold said walking away. As he turned the corner Jim and Macy ran into the office and went online. As the computer loaded up, Macy got them both some water bottles. Once the computer loaded, Jim went on the Internet and typed in walmart; he then went to toys and under search typed CSI kits. Up popped the fingerprint finder kit and it was on its way.
Two days passed, America beat France 2-0, and the package arrived. Jim spent three minutes trying to set it up. This is exactly what came up.
Letters on Lock: AERZ
Order of Letters (Most recent to oldest): ERAZ
Decoded: ZARE
Jim rubbed Z, then A, then R, and finally E. The lock “clicked” open. Macy ran out and interrupted Harold from USA and Britain game, USA leads 1-0. If USA wins they go to the World Championship against Belgium.
“It is opened” Macy screamed and Harold ran in there. Only the door was locked and Jim was gone.
Jim closed the door behind him as he walked inside this land. It was snowing, and as Jim walked out farther he saw a beautiful woman, she had long blonde hair, pretty eyes, but she wasn’t human, she was a Heat. A Heyt is something that seems to be pretty but is actually an ugly warthog like rhino that walks on two legs. Heyts work for the Dark Queen, who thinks she rules Zare. But this Heyt is wanted dead for being a traitor.
Anyways Jim saw this Heyt, and he fell in love. Only what he didn’t know is that is isn’t human.
“Hi, I am Jim, I am from London” Jim said to the Heyt.
“Lawn Doon? Where is Lawn Doon?” The Heyt answered back to Jim.
“London, England” Jim said to the Heyt, thinking it was weird because it didn’t know where London is.
“Egg Land? Okay welcome Jim from Lawn Doon in the beautiful place of Egg Land.” The Heyt bowed down to Jim.
“Thank you” Jim answered. And bowed back.
“Please come with me. I must get away from here, I’m wanted dead by the Dark Queen”
“The Dark Queen? Queen Elizabeth is not a dark queen.”
“Queen who? Fero is the queen here”
“Where is here?”
“Zare”
“I thought I was in my house in England”
“I’m sorry Jim but you are not in Egg Land anymore. This is the land of Zare. But we must go now. Come with me.”
Macy and Harold stood outside the door staring at it. They picked up the kit and used it. Now they thought the letters in order were AZRE, which yes the door opened, but it opened into a cellar. They left the door open, and walked down; it was like a basement, nothing special, but no Jim.
Jim was walking with the Heyt into the Zare Forest. The Heyt walked in the forest first as Jim tried to walk in but was thrown onto his back.
“You know Gerleta that human blood is not allowed inside the Forest of Zare.” One of the trees screamed out as Jim stood up, only to be swiped by another branch.
“Wait a minute, if humans are not allowed inside the forest, how come Gerleta is allowed in?” Jim said not standing back up. At this time Gerleta transformed into the real look of a Heyt. The warthog like rhino looking thing was standing over Jim.
“Like I said, humans are not allowed in the Forest of Zare.” The tree screamed out again.
In the cellar sat Macy and Harold, knowing they lost one of their friends, headed back up the stairs and into the hallway.
“So, Jim is gone and the great place behind the door is a bloody cellar?” Harold asked Macy even though he knew the answer. “I’m going to watch Football some more.”
Macy watched Harold walk away shaking his head, Macy turned to the door and worked some more. The possible outcomes of getting ZARE are many. But for some odd reason, Macy had a feeling that it was ZARE. Macy rubbed the Z, then A, then R, then E and the door “clicked” unlock. Macy walked inside, closing the door behind her, she saw snow pouring down everywhere, And Jim ahead with a very beautiful girl, but Jim was on the ground, scared.
“Oh, let him in.” Gerleta spoke to the tree. Macy ran up to Jim and the tree used a branch to knock her over.
“Oh, and who is that?” The tree asked Macy.
“I am Macy, and how are you talking?” Macy asked the tree.
“Someone is new to Zare.” The tree told them as he moved and let them inside. So they walked inside the forest, Macy still wondering what is going on.
“Okay, Jim what is this place and what is going on?” Macy asked Jima s they followed the Heyt.
“Macy, this is Zare, ZARE, but you should know since you opened the door.” Jim answered her.
“Csar is spelled CSAR, not ZARE.” Macy snapped back to Jim.
“But not here.” The Heyt named Gerleta snapped at her.
“Oops! So why were you allowed inside here?” Macy asked the Heyt and Jim was shaking his hands like no no no! The Heyt transformed into its real form. So be prepared for a horror part of this story.
“Aghhhhhhhhhh! What in God’s bloody name are you?” Macy asked her, sorry it.
“I am Gerletta the Heyt.” Gerletta answered’
“A what?” Macy asked hiding behind Jim. The Heyt led them deeper into the forest until they were halfway inside it when the Heyt brought out a sword. The snow was a steady downfall and the Heyt stared at them.
“Now, I, Gerletta the Heyt will stand here and let you know who the boss of Zare is.” Gerletta looked at them, took the sword and sliced down a tree. Then stared at Jim right in the eyes. The Heyt got on all fours and charged right at Jim, but before it got there an arrow flew threw the Heyt’s body, and it fell dead. Out walks a centaur, bow in hand, arrows on its back.
“I am Gladius, a Knight of Zare, I can tell you are new to Zare, since you are a human for one, but Heyts are royal servants to the Dark Queen. Never ever, ever trust a Heyt. But centaurs are decedents of King Juh and Queen Rew. But Queen Fero is trying t take over and she calls herself Queen. So would you rather be with the Dark Queen, who wants you dead, or me, a centaur, only here to get humans away from Dark Queen servants?”
The centaur asked Macy and Jim
“I, Jim of London, England, here by renounce my life to the King and Queen of Zare.” Jim said bowing down to the centaur. Macy said the same and bowed also.
“You do not have to bow. But thank you. Now hop onto my back and I will take you to the Queen and King.” The centaur bent down and they hopped on. The centaur galloped west out of the forest. “So there is this war going on right now, and since you are here, you can help us. There wouldn’t happen to be another human to be brought here, could there?”
They looked at each other and just remembered about Harold, who was at home watching football.
“There is, can you take us back east and then north and into the open plains.” Jim said to Gladius.
“Okay, hold on” Gladius said as he stopped and flew back into the other direction.
“So why do you need another human?” Macy asked Gladius.
“There is a prophecy if three humans step on soil in the land of Zare at one time a war will break out and the Dark Queen will fail. So by bringing the other human” Gladius said before being interrupted.
“That bringing my friend Harold is Zare’s last hope of getting rid of the Dark Queen?” Jim interrupted
“Yes.” Gladius answered.
Harold was lying on his sofa for about eight hours dozing on and off as USA beat London 4-2, and Harold jumped up when he heard aloud bang.
“Harold, come with us.” Macy said grabbing him off the sofa. Jim was rubbing the letters again, but nothing happened. He tried again, and nothing. They were locked out of Zare, and they couldn’t go back. They can’t help Gladius who saved their lives. “This can’t be happening!
Yet it was.
Have you ever heard of a thing called “hope”? Hope is a strange word, sometimes hope is used as someone’s name, sometimes in a sentence like “I have hope of making it big” but the hope of getting back to Zare is even smaller. But Jim worked harder at it then ever. He tried every possibility there was to open that door. Yet he never tried turning the doorknob. That is when Harold turned the knob and walked into Zare.
“You wanted to get in, but never tried the doorknob?” Harold asked Jim as they were walking over to Gladius. The ground started to shake uncontrollably and that was the last hope of Zare. Completed. Let the war,
Begin!
The Chronicles of Zare:
The War in Zare
BOOK 2 OF 4
By Seng, Brock
BASED ON THE CHRONICLES OF NARNIA
As the ground shook uncontrollably, a griffin flew to the ground.
“The snow has stopped falling in the north; we have set up a base there.” The griffin said and flew back off into the north. Jim, Macy, and Harold were all in the south meeting with the King and Queen. Thousands of the King and Queen’s followers were suiting up for battle, but the long journey is what they were all worried about. A war is nothing for the people of Zare, since they are known to have tried a war before against the Dark Queen. But now the prophecy is full filled. So will they defeat the Dark Queen?
“Move out men!” Gladius screamed and thousands of men ran fast across the land towards the north. “Humans. You stay though. I got something for you.”
The centaur walked into the building and brought out some weapons and armor.
“Jim, this is your sword. Keep it with care; use it to slay the Dark Queen.” The centaur handed Jim his sword. “Macy, this is your own bow and arrows, use these to defeat the Dark Queen’s army.” The centaur handed Macy her bow and arrow “And finally, Harold here is your dual wield swords, use these when, I am sorry to be so brutal, slice there heads off.” Gladius handed the swords to Harold. He then gave them armor and they hopped on Gladius’ back and they bounded off north to base.
“Get working. We need to get moving!” The Dark Queen screamed at millions of Heyts and other evil animals. Three giants were walking with her huge army. “We will move north, our spy has let us know that base is set up north. We will give them a sneak attack.”
At base, The Army of Zare was setting up camp for the long night that awaits them. “We need people for night shift!” Gladius screamed standing on top of King’s Mountain. “Our archers will be up here during the day, and at night we need our duelers. Your leader will be Harold. If something is coming up at you be sure to check if it is okay to charge at them or it. If you disobey you will be beheaded! Are we going to beat the so-called Almighty Queen of Zare or are we going to sit here and let them destroy us?”
“Destroy them sir!” Everyone screamed and they were ready for the night. Three hours passed and a glowing light came from a ways downhill.
“Duelers, a light is glowing downhill, back down the hill and wait until they closen up, stay down so they can not see us. If they see us they won’t come near and we will not have a battle. Hear me?” Harold screamed out, they nodded and got into position. At that exact moment Jim woke up and walked outside, he saw everyone down, and the glowing light that came closer with every heartbeat. Harold was in front of Jim and stood up as the light was visible and thousands of the Dark Queen’s army was charging towards them. Harold pulled out the trumpet used at night shift. Everyone around camp woke up and got their weapons ready. The first battle was about to start at 234 days into a Zare year, at midnight. The advantage was on The Army of Zare’s side because of the higher ground. The archers and the griffins were on top of the hill as all the others charged down the hill at the Dark Queen’s Army. A huge rumbling sound started very loud as millions of people attacked each other.
“For Zare!” The archers sent billions of arrows into the sky as over a thousand of the Queen’s men died.
“For Zare!” As the griffins flew up from behind camp with boulders and dropped them onto a lot of the men. Four archers of Zare fell of the hill from the Dark Queen’s archers. Harold was down on the ground slicing men and destroying chariots. Jim was still on his way down the mountain to kill the Dark Queen, but was stopped by a Heyt. Macy was aiming for the Dark Queen’s head when she fell off the hill.
“Where do you think your going?” The Heyt asked, and what was so confusing is, it was Gerletta.
“You’re dead!” Jim said drawing his sword.
“Ah, you underestimate the Dark Queen. She brought me back to life. Something you can’t due because you don’t have black magic ability.” Gerletta said and brought out an ax. “Put your sword away, it won’t help you any. See, I am trained to use an ax.”
“And I am a black belt!” Jim screamed charging at Gerletta, she stabbed up with her ax, but Jim jumped and stabbed her in the heart, she fell to the ground dead. Jim thinking smart he chopped of its head as well and chugged it over the hill. Jim started to run farther on around the hill and saw the Dark Queen holding a head. The head of Gladius.
“Retreat up the hill!” Harold screamed and they all ran up the hill, Macy lay on the ground but Harold picked her up and ran up the hill. As they ran up the hill arrows flew and hit some more men. “Now once we are far enough up push down some boulders down the hill and crush them!”
Boulders flew down the hill and crushed the Queen’s men. The Dark Queen ran away from the battle as her men kept dying.
“Archers send those arrows into the air!” Jim screamed as arrows flew down along with boulders. He turned to Macy and Harold. “Gladius is dead. The Dark Queen chopped his head off. So now I am in charge until the King and Queen arrive.”
“He…he…is dead?” Macy made sure as she was just waking up. Dead bodies covered the ground everywhere where you can not see who is alive or dead. The griffins flew out from behind the hill with hundreds more boulders.
“Drop the rest of the boulders! And then The Battle of King’s Mountain will be won by The Real Army of Zare!” Jim screamed out and the griffins flew dropping boulders everywhere. About 345 men were left on the field. “Now, we will head in the direction of our Queen and King. I need all my fellow knights to meet me around back.”
Jim and the knights were in the back of the camp working on a plan. Counting Jim only 5 knights were present.
“Only five of us survived?” A knight asked in a shocked expression. “Two hundred of us were knights, and six survived the war. But only five made back on the retreat. Who are we missing?”
“Gladius. Our leader and fellow Knight of Zare. The Queen caught up to him and beheaded him.” Jim explained and then they got to work. “We will work with our King as our Queen will help out on healing our people. The Dark Queen will probably be here in the morning to heal her killed men. Two of us will stay here and watch for her. I will be one of them. Then two will lead the archers down the backside of the hill and to the Gerfod Hill to set up camp. The last one will follow Harold to the Queen and King’s Castle. We head out at sunset.”
“Yes sir!” Everyone said and they got in their tents and slept. Morning arrived very soon and everyone left where they were supposed to go. Harold led troops to the castle. Two knights led troops to set up base Gerfod Hill, and Jim stayed still, waiting for the Queen.
“Lets get moving now!” Harold screamed when everyone was dragging behind. “We have three hours to get to the Queen, if we are not there in three hours they will leave without us and then we do not know where to go!”
“Quit bossing me around. Your not in charge, Jim is. And he told us to follow you, not take orders!” The knight screamed, and Harold drew one of his swords. “Put your sword away before you get your head severed!”
“You can’t severe my head!” Harold screamed, in the blink of a second the knight drew his sword and put it back, only something changed, Harold’s hand lay on the ground. “You bloody idiot!”
“Next time it will be your head!” The knight screamed and he poured salture, a solution that fixes wounds in three minutes, onto his cut and his hand was back on like nothing happened. “Now, griffins please soar down and carry as many of us as you can. We do need to speed it up. We are over halfway there!”
A huge chant started and five hundred griffins soared down trying to carry the thousands that were walking. In no time at all, all five hundred griffins had men on their back and they were off. In a distance the Dark Queen’s camp was seen, empty. Then the griffins saw the Dark Queen’s army moving towards the Queen and King’s castle.
“Below us, the Dark Queen is on the move, two griffins transfer men, and head to warn Jim, and stay low everyone” The knight screamed, but it was to late, seven griffins soared to the ground with arrows in them. “Hurry!”
The knight knew that many of them were heading to Gerfod Hill for the next battle, but why were so many men heading towards the Queen and King? The griffins doubled back and headed towards Jim.
“Jim, they are after the Queen and King, get our men out of Gerfod Hill and to the castle.” The knight said
“Pouter, you have thousands of men, how many are there?” Jim asked Pouter
“Millions” Jim’s face was in shock, yes there were millions at the castle but why are they not going to Gerfod Hill, unless this is just a distraction.
“We have them in the palms of our hands. They can’t escape!” The Dark Queen screamed as her men were getting closer to the castle. Some were still hurt and wounded from the war that happened the night before, even though they were bleeding eternally they still kept going to please their Queen. This time her whole army was with her. She lost a good hundred thousand lat night. Her plan failed then, she hoped not now. She knew that the Queen and King had millions, but they were at Gerfod Hill, she hoped. They got up to the castle a little after noon, A few Heyts busted open the door, but the millions of people were no where to be seen. The Dark Queen, mad a furious that there was no one to destroy, or not even the Queen and King for that matter. “Burn this place!”
The Dark Queen had lit her staff on fire as to burn down the whole castle. Shooting fireballs everywhere she walked outside. Only to see that million, and the Queen and King of Zare.
“Well, here is a battle! Men, destroy them.” The Dark Queen was looking around; she didn’t see the humans anywhere. But high in the sky were five hundred or so griffins, dropping people off. The Dark Queen, getting nervous looked around some more. “Where are the humans?”
“Why should we tell you, your majesty?” The king answered stepping forward at her. Raising her wand the Dark Queen screamed out.
“Don’t give me sarcasm!” The Dark Queen screamed. And every warrior of the King and Queen’s army stood ready to attack.
“Put your weapons down and stand in attention!” The Queen screamed out at her men. “If she wishes to use magic to defeat us, let her!”
“Give me the humans. And no one will get hurt!” The Dark Queen screamed as she walked up to the Queen. She whispered “don’t forget, once this war is over, your done. Or if I get killed, you’re finished.”
“Back off!” The Queen screamed as many more men came from another area, Jim in the lead, along with Harold, and Macy.
“Yes, the humans!” The Dark Queen screamed and the King galloped off towards Jim.
“Head back to Gerfod Hill.” The King said as he arrived. Jim looked at him shocked. “The Dark Queen has my castle on fire and she wants you dead. So head back, leave your knights though.”
The knights with Jim and the others walked out towards the King.
“If we do not come back, Jim you are in charge.” The King said to Jim as Jim bowed down. “Where is…Gladius?”
“The Dark Queen beheaded him.” Jim said his head bowed down. Jim looking towards the castle saw nothing going on, which made it very suspicious. “Why are they not fighting?”
“I do not know.” The King turned his head, and the Dark Queen’s men were starting to walk towards them, weapons raised as if to attack. “Okay, Jim head back now, and hurry!”
They started to run back and the griffins met them halfway with a fast pick up and they were heading to Gerfod Hill.
The Queen was heading to the back of her castle which was burning to pieces. All of the white horses were crying and wanted to escape. She let them all go and her men and her galloped around the other way. She didn’t know why she let the Dark Queen go. But in front of a burning castle is no place to have a war. Even if it is with your worst enemy.
Setting up at Gerfod Hill, Jim sent the archers upon the hill, but hidden from plain view. He made the duelers and him go at the back base of the hill, half on one side, and half on the other. Soon after the Queen and her men showed up. Now the whole hill was ready for an attack. The Queen’s duelers were set up in the front, like a long colored line. The Dark Queen was seen galloping on her horse many miles away, just exiting the forest, but her men covered every green blade of grass. Jim stood to every dueler.
“This battle will be bloody, as you see, our King has not arrived. Over one thousand years ago, Zare had a bigger war than this is so far. And our King and Queen survived. Our knights and King are not here so it is up to us to defeat the Dark Queen!” Jim screamed out and the duelers ran around the hill to win this war. The Dark Queen’s duelers met them halfway, except the King and Queen’s men were not as powerful this time. They were getting defeated, bad. The Army of Zare was falling, the griffins, tired of flying, could not drop the rocks. Jim, tired from not sleeping, could not try to go after the Dark Queen. And he ended up watching the King get hit with an arrow. Jim heard three words.
“Jim please retreat” The King screamed as he fell dead. Jim knew what needed to be done.
“RETREAT!!!!!!” Jim screamed as he ran back to Gerfod Hill. Once there archers still fired arrows, and the men pushed boulders down the hill. Still, the boulders never hit any of the Dark Queen’s men because of all the Army of Zare’s dead bodies. “How could this happen to us? We are the greater army!”
“It is okay. We tried.” Macy said to Jim walking up. Many archers fell dead, arrows from The Army of Zare were killing very few of the Dark Queen’s Army but at least it was some. “Our archers can not hold up much longer. But I know who can. The Queen. She said herself a little while ago that she one day used her staff and created a barrier, only The Sword of Zare could puncture it. And that sword is only a myth. But only that sword could bring down the Dark Queen. And her army.”
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