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Shijuukara
February 18th, 2006, 11:22 PM
This is NOT a Pokémon Comic!

http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d113/XiaolinDraginis/Sprite%20Comic/Cyber%20Sky/TheReignOfCySky.png
The Plot:
The Reign Of CySky
The year is 2998 and the world is basically a living hell. CySky is a company that basically owns everything in the world. People kidnap other humans and experiment on them. They turn into freaks in people's eyes. CySky is thought to be behind all the violence. Everyone is split into groups or parties. Each party is different from the next and have different ideas and thoughts. There is also a orginization called the Rebellion. The Rebellion fights against CySky for justice and freedom. The whole story revolves on different characters, One of them is Ace Aquilo. Ace never thought he could have been part of a giant war, but now he must use his abilities to help the world.

Rating: PG - PG-14
Class: Fiction / Science Fiction

Maps:
Tara (http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d113/XiaolinDraginis/Sprite%20Comic/Cyber%20Sky/Maps/Tara.png)
Park (http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d113/XiaolinDraginis/Sprite%20Comic/Cyber%20Sky/Maps/Park.png)
CySky Main Building (http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d113/XiaolinDraginis/Sprite%20Comic/Cyber%20Sky/Maps/CySky.png)

http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d113/XiaolinDraginis/Sprite%20Comic/Cyber%20Sky/Trainers/TrainerList.png
Bio's: (From Left To Right)

Ace Aquilo:
Age: 13
Ace is a misunderstood 13 year-old boy who lives on the streets. His parents died when he was about 4 years old and he was raised by a stranger but he disappeared when he was 9 years old. He seems to have these strange abilities that nobody else he knows has. Many people where he lives know a little bit of his past. He seemed to put the pices together and said that he was kidnapped when he was with his parents. They seemed to take him to a lab and experimented on him but after that the police caught the scientists and returned him to his parents. He has also met a lot of new people during his early life as in Daniel and Michelle.

Michelle Garcia:
Age: 13
Michelle is a girl who was kicked out of her home because she was hiding from a crime. She had stolen food for the poor when CySky Police caught her but when she was released her parents did not allow her to return to her home. Michelle met up with Ace when they were sleeping in the park.

Daniel Alvarez:
Age: 13
Daniel is a boy who was raised in a foster home. They let him start his own life when he turned 13. Everytime they let him go out and play he would sneak off with Ace and Michelle to play. his life logn dream was to be part of the Tara Police Department (T.P.D.) which is owned by CySky. He always thought if he did well in T.P.D. they would promote him to the Special Service of CySky.

Zack Copeland:
Age: 15
People rarely see Zack, he is rumored to stay underground most of the time. Rumor has it that he is in charge of the Rebellion. He comes from a family that was killed by CySky and wants revenge.

Violet:
Age: ???
All that is known about Violet is that she is pure energy.

Mr. Xeon:
Age: 40
Mr. Xeon is the owner of CySky. He controls everythign that happens to it. Every city a CySky Factory is in he controls the city or area. The main building of CySky is in Tara.

Erika Ramirez:
Age: 15
erika seems to be the second-in-command for CySky. She is Mr. Xeon's second wherever they go. She manages and overlooks all productions. She goes undercover everywhere.

Secret Service:
Age: 20-35
The Secret Service is the Police for CySky. They make sure nothing bad happens to the Company.

Rei:
Age: 13
Rei is an undercover agent but seems to switch sides every so often. Nobody is really sure which side she is on. She has special abilities that she can use on missions.

Darien Willow
Age: 13
Darien is the average teen living in ____. He spends his time watching the news, reading about CySky.. and all the 'horrible' stuff they've done. At age seven, his parents were killed while working with CySky. Since then, he's been living with his grandparents since his next closest relative, his aunt, is working in a lab in a different country.

Oscar Lopez:
Age: 14
Oscar: Born just before CySky became a huge industry and the kidnapping happened. His family lived in a town jut outside of Tara City. They were lucky not to be one of the first ones taken....sadly his parents were taken. The day came when a group of mysterious men found their house. Oscar knew that it was a grim day, so he tried to lighten up the mood with jokes.The family smiled but did not laugh. Fifteen minutes before the men came Oscar left out the back with his elder brother. He and his brother, Ricky, traveled for days escaping the men. One day Oscar awoke to his brother being taken away. Now he wanders around getting food from people and living where he can, he searches for a place to stay where the men will not find him.

Ricky Medina:
Age: 16
One night while sleeping next to his brother he was taken away by three mysterious men. He dreaded this because this was how his parents were taken away. While he got up to cook breakfast for his sleeping brother he was fused with DNA of a strange monster. Thus now he has a wing and arm of the strange creature. After one night of training with his new parts he fled when the guards went to the bathroom. He escaped and started to live in the Park outside of Tara.

Malastare:
Age: 15
She grew up in a part of town outside of Tara that is worse than most other parts, so she is very good at fending for herself. She is quiet, quick to anger and very moody. Her current condition resulted when she strayed too far from home and was captured by a gang. They experimented on her and twisted her DNA until she was a half-dragon (dragons were recently bio-engineered into existence).As a result, she has many draconic powers, and is constantly tormented by old memories.

The Reign Of CySky:
Introduction (http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d113/XiaolinDraginis/Sprite%20Comic/Cyber%20Sky/Introduction.png)
August 9th, 2998 (http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d113/XiaolinDraginis/Sprite%20Comic/Cyber%20Sky/August9th2998.png)
August 9th, 2998 2 (http://www.fileshack.us/files/533/August%209th%202998%202.png)

Credit To:
Avatar: Psychic Overworld's and Darien Chart
Rock Lee: Finding Zack Chart
TDM: Mr. Xeon OW's and CIA Chart
Draginis: Violet, Michelle, Daniel, and Erika Chart
Epona4: Darien Chart
podexproductions: Oscar Chart
coreystranick: Ricky Chart
Dragon-Chan: Malastare Chart
The_Pokemon_Hossier: Agent TK Chart
PokemonElite2000: Psychic Sprite

Silon
February 18th, 2006, 11:46 PM
Well.. I'll Join.

Name: Darien Willow
Age: 13
Sprites: http://img49.imageshack.us/img49/111/spritesheet2en.png
Bio: Darien is a Pokemon trainer who has a dream to become the worlds best Pokemon breeder and coordinator. (Pokemon Contests)
Pokemon: Milotic, Dragonair, Lapras, Gyarados, Onix, Togepi

Shijuukara
February 18th, 2006, 11:48 PM
Umm....I should have said this isn't a Pokemon Comic. Just a story from my head I put up on fanfiction.

Fusions Welcome!!!! It cuold involve Pokemon parts but nothing further than that!

Silon
February 19th, 2006, 12:10 AM
Better?
http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/8742/cyberskyspritesheet6pp.png

Domin-8
February 19th, 2006, 12:11 AM
this is awsome, i'll join when i can get some more sprites

Shijuukara
February 19th, 2006, 12:12 AM
Yeah thanks, can I have a biography though? You can PM it to me. Oh and of those who don't understand what I mean by fusions, it means humans fused with pokemon

Goatman56
February 19th, 2006, 12:13 AM
Nothing much to say, but where it says "whether". I believe that is supposed to be "weather".

Shijuukara
February 19th, 2006, 12:14 AM
Excuse me but where? I did not talk about the weather at all.

Goatman56
February 19th, 2006, 12:16 AM
In introduction, it says "I can get trough any whether." So it would be "through and "weather".

Silon
February 19th, 2006, 12:16 AM
"I can have stronger weapokns when I.."
Yea.. sure you can. XD

Shijuukara
February 19th, 2006, 12:22 AM
I fixed Silon's pointout, I'll get the Intro right later. Anyways next chapter should come out by the end of tonight Pacific Time. If not tomorrow (Sunday)

Silon
February 19th, 2006, 12:32 AM
Okies. Can't wait for it. :)

:: What happened to Life on the Frontier?

Shijuukara
February 19th, 2006, 01:03 AM
Well, I'm putting it on hiatus for a while. I have all my ideas typed up and I have the script, all I need is to put them with pictures but I just didn't want to work on it for a while. I wanted to do something else, thus Cyber Sky. I'll work on Life On The Frontier in about a month and a couple of weeks, but I want to focus all my attention on Cyber Sky at the moment.

Dragon-Chan
February 19th, 2006, 01:33 AM
Sprite http://www.jhgghyu.com/images/spriteofme3sheet.PNG
Overworld's http://www.jhgghyu.com/images/spriteofmetinysheet.PNG
Biography
She grew up in a part of town that is worse than most other parts, so she is very good at fending for herself. She is quiet, quick to anger and very moody. Her current condition resulted when she strayed too far from home and was captured by a gang. They experimented on her and twisted her DNA until she was a half-dragon (dragons were recently bio-engineered into existence).
As a result, she has many draconic powers, and is constantly tormented by old memories.
Backshot if possible: none possible

Decepticon
February 19th, 2006, 01:37 AM
Nice! I like this so far. Kinda a bummer that no Pokemon can be in it though.
why did you post the maps? Are people allowed to use them?

Matt Silver
February 19th, 2006, 01:41 AM
Yeah this is good- but the no pokemon thing is a bit sucky. What are we gonna do about it?
The story seems a bit werid so far, but im sure it'll turn out fine. keep it up good work.

Shijuukara
February 19th, 2006, 01:49 AM
Thank you for joining Dragon-Chan!

Yeah, I know it doesn't have Pokemon but I wanted to make this because i wrote a whole story about this on Fanfiction and so IO wanted to turn it into a Sprite Comic. I'm so Science-Fiction, I'm almost done with the Fanfiction like a couple chapters left so I started making the Sprite Comic or is it a Sprite Fic. Anyways yeah thats the story behind it and thats why it doesn't have any Pokemon.

Thanks Matt, hopefully it does turn out good

Domin-8
February 19th, 2006, 01:50 AM
Trust m, i have talked to AoD and this should be a good story without pokemon. This is the only comic i know of that does not ahve pokemon

Shijuukara
February 19th, 2006, 01:53 AM
Thank you Corey! Ok I would like to announce 3 new characters!

Oscar Lopez: The Optimistic Guy of the story, can be a wise arse as well.

Ricky Medina: Kidnapped and made a hybrid by fusing DNA with a made up monster from a game.

Dragon-Chan: You all know who she is!

Domin-8
February 19th, 2006, 02:25 AM
I love the new chacaters AoD

Shijuukara
February 19th, 2006, 02:31 AM
Thank you, Oh I'm sorry Decepticon, you may not use the maps unless you PM me.

Sign-ups Are now Closed! PM me and I'll see if you make a good case to join no more posting sign-ups

Domin-8
February 19th, 2006, 02:35 AM
I liek the first part of the story, can't wait ti see more

Dragon-Chan
February 19th, 2006, 02:36 AM
Make more soon, please! I can't wait!

Haunted_Angel
February 19th, 2006, 02:43 AM
Hey! i would just like to say, this comic is well AWESOME
though i can't join it, (i am not good at sprites and stuff, though i can do biographies and stuff but yeah, need more than that =P)
but i will say this, i will keep my eye open for further episodes, it looks cool already ^.^

Shijuukara
February 19th, 2006, 02:55 AM
Thank you very much. I'll start on the new episode NOW!

Goatman56
February 19th, 2006, 03:27 AM
Well I was hoping you'd use word bubbles, but I guess you didn't want to. Anyways you shouldn't mix FR/LG with R/S style, it doesn't look to good.

Shijuukara
February 19th, 2006, 07:57 AM
Yes, I'm aware of the problems I already have. I just want people to read my story but it would hurt fixing it up but oh well. I'll remake all fo it when I'm done

EDIT:
Well I updated the comic!! It has a new episode be sure to check it out!

Matt Silver
February 19th, 2006, 08:36 AM
Good upadte there. Just a wuick question though: Why do u have bios of people not there yet?

Esupio
February 19th, 2006, 01:26 PM
... woo another TUP comic.

Also, way to make a non-pokemon comic look like a pokemon comic. Atleast try a different style of sprites, and if its a living hell, why does it look relatively pretty?

nice way to defy yourself.

Domin-8
February 19th, 2006, 02:49 PM
I love the new update, this story is starting to make alittle more since to me

Shijuukara
February 19th, 2006, 05:11 PM
@ Matt: I put bios of people not there yet since they're main characters.

@Esupio: Sure, I'll try but remember I didn't make some of these characters.

@coreystranick: Thank you...I guess.

Domin-8
February 19th, 2006, 07:09 PM
when is the next updat AoD?

Silon
February 19th, 2006, 07:12 PM
AoD, would you like the sprite of Darien to have a cape? :/
'Cause I have one..
http://img413.imageshack.us/img413/7592/siloncape5vq.gif

Popwar Bunny
February 19th, 2006, 08:20 PM
why'd you pick that name??
bleh....
i'll have to change DARREN's name then.
when's the next eppy AoD?

Shijuukara
February 19th, 2006, 08:59 PM
@ corey: The next update is by the end of tonight pACIFIC tIME

@ Silon: Umm...hmm....I might need it for later!

@ TPH: Silon's is Darien (De-ree-yun) and you'rs is Darren (De-ren).