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Chizzy
February 22nd, 2006, 12:54 PM
Aaron sat up in his bed, watching Television. He decided he would stay up tonight...as Tommorow he was going to see Proffeser Rose, who, lived in a small cottage near his village pits. She was an amazing scientist, and envited Aaron down to pick up something special from her.

He was asked earlier on the phone, and for the rest of the day sat wondering what she could possibly want with him, a short scruffy 14 year old, who did not know much about her profesion-Pokemon.

He knew that if she was to give him a Pokemon, he would of got one when he was 10, or maybe 12. Not 14. He had seen live battles on TV, and seen the team events league a few times. He couldn't understand how certain things happened, but dared not to question it. But as he sat there...there was only one thing on his mind...Tommorow

Lily
February 22nd, 2006, 02:25 PM
Short, overused ideas, underdeveloped chapter.

I advise you to go here (http://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=46646) and take a look.

Chizzy
February 24th, 2006, 11:20 AM
Please delete this thread as im no longer working on this Idea