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lighterhead2001
March 24th, 2004, 09:15 PM
Viscious
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With padded feet and bated breath
Like a cat in the dark
She slinks in
Eyes surveying the playing field
Which pawn is hers to check and mate?
Will that pawn feel those razor sharp teeth like needles in a syringe?
Slant of eyes , twist of head
You didn't move fast enough , you're dead


have a little more fun too

Emptiness In Mind

I sit with worry and emptiness in mind..
have you forgotten me when i need you most
or is this the reason why i need you so much
why does the darkness seem so cold
so empty
so far away is my soul
the part of me that makes me shine
makes me whole
keeps me alive
lost
hidden from me
i try and try to see
what's keeping me so empty inside
that part of me
that part that shines
i fear it's gone
lost again
gone again
so i mourn with sadness inside
to never ever really shine

Kayleigh
March 26th, 2004, 11:58 AM
Oh, those are really good poems! ^_^ I like the second one, though it seems sad...

Ryoutarou
March 27th, 2004, 11:41 AM
ya real good bring on some more!