Pokemon Misadventures.

[Darkdata]

In the wold of pokemon everything always goes good and nice and nothing weird ever happens, that ends now.

Pokemon Misadventures

One Shot Comics
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Story Comics
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Credit
-Me
-Adam of Space Guard OG
-Glitch King
-RM2K3 Kid
-Darkdragon
-Webmaster Tyler
-And Anyone else


Its only my fist sprite comic... go easy on me.
Note: This list is anyones sprites I may use. I might not have used some of them..... yet.

[Matt Silver]

ummm... I dont see it. WHen it loads, it comes up with and error.

[Darkdata]

Fixed now. I had to update it.
Its in PNG format so IE might have trouble with it.

[Silon]

It doesn't come up with an error, Matt.
It loaded Windows Vista. (Which I might buy when it releases)

Can't really judge it right now.. not enough episodes.

[Signomi]

Nice start for a first sprite comic, though because it may be your first, it shouldn't be used as an excuse for people to go easy on you, every comic deserves to be commented on fairly, regardless if it may be your first comic or your fifth, etc.

Now as for this comic itself, there are a few things that bother me a bit:


Not too fond of how the panels seem blurry, but I can understand if you wish for it to be like that; though it can be a little hard on the eyes for certain viewers.

The text in the second strip can be, again; a little hard on the eyes for some people to read, so I'd recommend using speech bubbles rather than black text on its own, or perhaps a font colour that doesn't blend in too much with the panel image.


Otherwise, nice start. Keep it up.

[Roy-Kun]

The comic is very nice-made, still it looks very bright in all the aspects.

Try copying the part that you are going to rip from the map, then paste it and give it more size, because if you choose the entire pic (you made it first with the original size then you made it bigger right?, Well that's the problem) it will show like that.

Same goes to OW, do the same that i had told you.

That's all.

[Darkdata]

You like it you really like it -Crys-
Anyway, I'm going to update the comic tommorow and fix the text bubbles in the second one. The blurryness (is that how you spell that?)
I will also fix next update.... I still cant find any real good sprint resources....without having to rip all the sprits from VBA...

All well to make a good comic you must try harder. A update will be soon...

-Darkdata.

(It went on longer but I closed firefox -.- and had to retype it all...)

[The Dash]

Im sorry it dosent look good atall. NEVER make sprites that big unless its necesarry (E.G. a close up) And if you have to use Paint to do it not Photoshop or whatever. Photoshop blurs things then it expands them.
Try adding boxes around the speech aswell, finally its not Credits its Yen :p lol

[Jedite1000]

u dont need 2 rip from VBA go to yahoo and type in the spriters resource :)

[The Dash]

Spriters recource is down T.T

[Karmillina]

I've got no experience in Sprite Comics, but I agree with Signomi... buuuuut...

OMG, how nice!! I want some gum, too XD both of your one-shots are really funny! *w* I wanna see more!

[Darkdata]

Working on one right now.
Remember, To sharp and people complain. To blurry and people complain. To piss both groups off I made it half blury half sharp, so both can say how much they hate it ^.~

(Third comic up... 99% less blur!)

[The Dash]

New eppy is ok..but PLEASE PLEASE stop making the frams that big. It makes them look very ugly.

[Silon]

How are they ugly, Dash? o_o

[Darkdata]

How are they ugly, Dash? o_o
I have to ask also. X_x

How is it ulgy.. Its black and simple...

[The Dash]

The fact that its all blurry and big. I just don't like it.

[Darkdata]

Sorry Guys cant make any sprite comics for a while.
3 Exams... This week. X_x

HAve a new one friday... Hopefully better than my other ones.

[Overlord Syrou]

I like your sense of humor, but work on the actual comics in general. Get rid of the blurred JPEGishness and better face expressions, plus good grammar, and you'll be good to go.