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KeeperEUSC
February 27th, 2006, 03:05 PM
So my cousin is basically like the smartiest kid I know, he writes lots and lots of good stuff. I found this poem on my his desk, and its just like the acrosterics that we do in school, so I thought I'd post it. I bolded letters to make it easier to read, but I don't know what it's supposed to mean, so please help me.


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musamusa
February 27th, 2006, 03:07 PM
D00d, that's a mean thing to say. If he wrote that he's probibly retarded.

It means something so bad I can't say it.

Black Guy
February 27th, 2006, 03:07 PM
I love this. good write, comrade.
Disturbing and scary.

KeeperEUSC
February 27th, 2006, 03:08 PM
It means somethign bad? But how, its got good writing?

Black Guy
February 27th, 2006, 03:09 PM
What, seriously?!?!?!?
Bad like what? Sex and ***s and stuff? :(

Persona
February 27th, 2006, 03:12 PM
omg ppl....wat is up with this swearing!? O.o neways....the word after burn is bad...and don't ever say it, i'm warning u O_O.....ur cousin is good at writing poems but NOT choosing the right ones........

Black Guy
February 27th, 2006, 03:13 PM
omg ppl....wat is up with this swearing!? O.o neways....the word after burn is bad...and don't ever say it, i'm warning u O_O.....ur cousin is good at writing poems but NOT choosing the right ones........
Wait, I don't see it, wut're you talking about? :(

Persona
February 27th, 2006, 03:14 PM
the word that starts with N and goes all the way down...don't ever say it

Black Guy
February 27th, 2006, 03:15 PM
the word that starts with N and goes all the way down...don't ever say it
wut? where?

Blacks rise from the masses
Upon my field they run
Run, Run, Run
Nightfall their body's cast

Now I sit below the gallows
Igniting their remains
Gruesome is the smell
Green is the ground before the blood
Each limp body screaming
Run, Run, Run
Set upon them the penalty for their crime



Nightfall? :\

musamusa
February 27th, 2006, 03:15 PM
Wait, wut? I'm confused?

Black Guy
February 27th, 2006, 03:17 PM
Wait, wut? I'm confused?
I think that guy hates nightfall. He must be a ***. :(

Persona
February 27th, 2006, 03:18 PM
no!! omg u ppl want me 2 say it! no way -_- it starts with N and then I, keep going down until it reaches s with the letters.....just don't say it cuz its a bad word, k?

king of thuh arachnics
February 27th, 2006, 03:19 PM
I don't see it, what word do you mean?

Kylie-chan
February 27th, 2006, 03:20 PM
Yes, the last verse of the acrostic reads as an offensive word. Also, you did not write the poem, so you have no right to post it on the Internet. [Personally, from my own interpretation, it's racist, as well.]

Lastly, don't call other people retarded. It usually offends them, and people who are, actually, by medical definition, retarded.

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