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EmeraldSky
February 28th, 2006, 05:13 PM
This Pokepoem is dedicated to Brock...

"I Want to Love You"

You say there are two perfect girls for you,
But did you know that you also have a third?
I want to love you and hold you close in my arms
But you never seem to notice me....

What good is that officer and that nurse you adore
When I can offer much more than they?
I want to love you when those two put you down
You'll know I'm perfect girl number three

Why is it you love every girl that you see
When they don't want to love you in return?
I'm not like them, and my love for you proves
That I'm ready to share my heart with you.

So why don't you set aside those two other girls
And try out your passion on me?
I want to love you as much as you love me
So you can have that one woman you desire so.

dqle
March 1st, 2006, 05:16 AM
Huh. Makes you wonder who the third girl is? I'd like to guess, but then others pop in my head as well. I wonder if you had a girl for Brock in mind when you wrote this poem...

Nice job with both poems, EmeraldSky! (though the Pokémon 10th Anniversary's poem structure was a little wierd for me)

EmeraldSky
March 1st, 2006, 05:38 AM
I didn't have a particular girl in mind...(sorry, shippers) but I wanted the girl speaker to be a mystery--just like Brock's eventual lover.

Kyoko
March 1st, 2006, 01:58 PM
That was really good!! Brock deserves a girl who loves him and should just get over Jenny and Joy!!!!! Anyway as I said Great poem!!! :D

EmeraldSky
March 1st, 2006, 02:51 PM
Thanks...I'm planning to write more Pokepoems.

Agent9
March 1st, 2006, 04:49 PM
i know who the third girl is....

EmeraldSky! Or Angela. XD

Great thoguh.

EmeraldSky
March 1st, 2006, 06:15 PM
no, and no...you're not supposed to figure out the girl's identity...