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Asura Nirosuki
February 28th, 2006, 11:14 PM
I have a clouded view of you.
Who is this you are always playing with?
I have a feeling your thinking you are better.
You always say it like I have no feelings at all,
It hurts inside, It really damaged my pride.
I hate having to question deeply about you,
Feeling disgusted when i'm remembering about it too.
I wish to go back to acting like we use to,
Always Ingore eachother with nothing to improve.
I'm unsure what to do.
And No I'm not feeling mad, just very sad,
You made me let go of everything I had..
I have a negative view of you.

NiNGi
February 28th, 2006, 11:17 PM
lolpie

I could rap on that one... too bad I hate rap...! o__<

Not bad... but a little more hate wouldn't have hurt. D: