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Sheepnut
March 5th, 2006, 08:32 AM
Well it is the story of the other pirates in the anime one piece.
It hopefully will become increasing funny later.

Issue0 - Introduction
http://img477.imageshack.us/img477/1846/onepiecepirates09zf.png
Issue1 - King of the Pirates
http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/9651/onepiecepirates15pj.png
Issue2 - Madam Alvida
http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/6915/onepiecepirates23sl.png
Issue3 - Buggy Love
http://img48.imageshack.us/img48/3264/onepiecepirates31mq.png

More soon.

Jedite1000
March 5th, 2006, 08:52 AM
it is good so far but u should had more screens in a comic and also luffy should of said "gum, gum (somekind of an atack)" when he punched alvida
anyway its good comic so far

Sheepnut
March 5th, 2006, 09:38 AM
Thanks there will be anew comic tommorow.

Esupio
March 5th, 2006, 10:01 AM
Im guessing your lucifont?

nice comic anyway

Sheepnut
March 5th, 2006, 10:13 AM
Yes Lucifont is my forum name on bobandgeorge forums.

Ark Kuvis
March 5th, 2006, 03:25 PM
Yes Lucifont is my forum name on bobandgeorge forums.
AND PT.

I see nothin but a cheap remake of the One Peice anime. BORING.

kimi_catdemon
March 5th, 2006, 10:03 PM
You should add a bit more...but....the story line is great!! You should give it some more orginalilty though..(did I spell that right?)

Croconaw
March 6th, 2006, 12:57 AM
Daviku, that was jus plane out mean. If ya dont hav anything nice to say, dont say nothin. Anyways, that was good. I cant wait fer the next one!

Kurosaki Ichigo
March 6th, 2006, 01:06 AM
Its good i guess, should try changing the story a bit would make one piece even better :P, also use possibly 6 frames, thats what i do.

Alpham-A-Epsilons
March 6th, 2006, 01:23 AM
Good comic it's funny at the end

Goatman56
March 6th, 2006, 01:28 AM
Lil Totodile how is that mean? He is just following the story of the anime and he is not very good with facial expressions. This isn't funny, it is pretty boring. Any person with the right sprites and backgrounds can re-create it. Davis is aloud to say that, it's not mean he's giving his honest oppinion. I would say this comic is below average.

Kurosaki Ichigo
March 6th, 2006, 01:51 AM
To an extent i agree with you but even still...give the guy some credit..hes new to making comics i guess.

Sheepnut
March 6th, 2006, 04:40 AM
Guys it is not the story of one piece its the story of the other pirates (im starting with alvida and how she eats the slip slip fruit (expect a date movie parody)

kimi_catdemon
March 7th, 2006, 12:16 AM
Woah...i can't wait to see it!! I'm looking forward to it!!

Dragon-Chan
March 7th, 2006, 12:24 AM
Hmm...I don't like this comic much. The facial expressions aren't that good, and there's bad grammar everywhere. :\

Overlord Syrou
March 7th, 2006, 01:54 AM
I think they're good for a One Piece Comic. Though, I'll have to see much more to give a real opinion.

Sheepnut
March 8th, 2006, 09:22 AM
Updated. Trust me im going somewhere with this.

Jedite1000
March 8th, 2006, 11:04 PM
u said u will have one by 2 morrow and that was days ago

Kurosaki Ichigo
March 8th, 2006, 11:08 PM
Rofl that was funny man, you need to speed up though, do you have Alvida in her slimmer form?

Sheepnut
March 9th, 2006, 04:36 AM
Yes expect her transformation in the next 2 eps.

Jedite1000
March 9th, 2006, 09:47 AM
cool ep but u shouldnt have the title called buggly love, cause buggy didint appear..hmm maybe u could call it the legendary cursed fruit or truth about the slip slip fruit or spin da bottle LOL anyway its up 2 u i just gave u ideas :P

hope 2 c more

Sheepnut
March 9th, 2006, 10:00 AM
New ep tommorrow. Hitch will appear.

Kurosaki Ichigo
March 9th, 2006, 10:18 AM
When i said speed up i ment more episodes in 1 day......

Esupio
March 10th, 2006, 07:24 PM
its his choice when he updates, maybe he has other things to do then make comics

Sheepnut
March 10th, 2006, 08:14 PM
Yes I do lately ive been getting alot of homework.