Some new card I made, and some help needed

[Mail Jeevas]

Hi, For a reason, my old thread was deleted, but it doesn't matter because it was a month old. Here are some new cards I did recently. They are very detailed. I read the tutorial several time and I think you won't find any error in this one.

I need to know how can I make my cards look like normal cards when I print them. I already saw it on a thread made by Syosuke, but It was deleted. If anyone could bring me the info I would be really grateful.

MECHA CHARMANDER:
http://img397.imageshack.us/my.php?image=mechacharmandercopy6ie.png

Please review. Soon I'll post it's evolutions: Mecha Charmeleon and Mecha Charizard.

ELGONZO!!!

[Mini]

thats cool but it would be better if it had more detail

[Mail Jeevas]

Thanks for the advise, and the review, but what do you mean exactly by "More detail" please be mor specific, because that didn't counted as a review/suggestion.

ELGONZO!!!

PS: Also, I accidentaly posted the non credit version. I will try to fix that because the blank belongs to Fangkin omega.

[Syousuke]

Whoa, nice one there, Multeon.

There is still room for improvement though, try fixing up the art a little bit and you should be doing fine.

[Mail Jeevas]

Thanks Syosuke, I've managed to make the evo, but I don't think I'll post it today. It's 4 am here ;). Besides, A little intrigue is always good...


ELGONZO!!!

PS: Does anybody think that "ELGONZO" sounds stupid?

[butterFlyFree]

I think should you should apply more shading to the metal part so they fit
and seem to be part of chamander.

Good card and like the attacks

[Blennix]

very neat card,
i think Scratch and barrage need to be capital
flip a coin. if heads this attack does 20 damage for each ? enegry card attached to Mecha Charmander. If tails this dack does 20 damage. nice effect

also the all text body seems to be bold and the pkmn name and hp seem a bit high

[Mail Jeevas]

Lol, I knew someone would notice it sooner or later ^^U

It was my bad, I uploaded withouth adding the (F) energy in that space.

ELGONZO!!!

PS: Can any1 answer my question please?

[Kurosaki Ichigo]

And what question was that?

[QFred]

Nice card, correct fonts, good placement, but few thingies...

Too much HP, even for a Mecha thingie...
You should have got a better pic...
The illus. thingie is too bold...
The energy placement order is basic energies and then special...
The attack name must have all words capitalized
You forgot the fire energy in the place...

Nice card... 7,6/10

[Cascade Of The Sky]

to print cards, before you make them, you have edit something to the window of the card and make it clearer

unfortunately, i don't know how to do that!!! :P sorry...

nice card

[Archuleta Shuckle]

My turn! Most of the mistakes have been pointed out correctly. One thing is that the energy symbols are really choppy. They are jagged and you need the correct ones. The link in my sig should solve that problem. You have the basic placement and fonts down which is good, and no, ELGONZO doesn't sound stupid. Keep up the good work!

8/10.

[Blennix]

wat does Elgonzo mean, if it is a thanx or a yeah then it doesn't sound stopid

[~*!*~Queen Boo~*!*~]

Well you could of made one arm and leg mecha like.
Mech charmander-4/10

:t003:Dark Venusaur

[$H-GAGE$]

Hey cool card the pic i dont agree with so much caoz u had to make it more MECHA lyk...but he card looks superb...especially the writing of Mecha Charmander howd ya do it??
brilliant 9/10

[Charmander forever]

Wow How Did You Do That Thats Amazing You Gotta Tell Me How You Did That 10/10!

[Mail Jeevas]

Neva! It's quite simple, you use the pencil tool in photoshop to make the mecha parts, then, you make gradients with black and white. And there!

Here's a new card: Absol EX


Also for anyone who is interested, the other day I obtained a Camerupt EX from a booster!!!

ELGONZO!!

PS: Yes, it's like a thanks. "Gonzo" is my nickname in real life, so "El Gonzo"

[Blennix]

gonzo XD thanx fot that i may use it :P

[Mail Jeevas]

Sorry, the last time I didn't post the image...
I'm dumb :(

Here it is:
http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/1365/absolexcopy0yr.png

[Blennix]

very good the ex symbol is a bit jagged

[PokemonMaster2006]

Basic Card Design - 10/10 (Not even I could do that good and I edited the 2 trainer cards in my sig and animated them :O)

"Mecha Charmander" Design - 3/10 (As Strong Bad says "Is that supposed to be Charmander? It looks like it was drawn by a two years old boy.)

So subtract the scores and your total score is 7/10 Very nice!

However the Absol card gets a 10/10. eXcellent.

[Mail Jeevas]

Thanks, here's a new card:
Dark electabuzz:

http://img454.imageshack.us/img454/1411/darkelectabuzzcopy3be.png

ELGONZO!!!

[Blennix]

(Is that supposed to be Charmander? It looks like it was drawn by a two years old boy.) by Pokemon master 2006 lol, Strong Bad is the best
anyways back to topic

nice Electabuzz!!!
the Pokémon body effect must be justify
The hp shood be whte seeing as black and black don't go well

what happened to the 9 digit numbers and the set numbers?

[Mail Jeevas]

Yeah sorry, I forgot :D

BTW, I know that the HP should be white, but if the HP is white, then the Name has to be white too, so... It was baaaaad.

ELGONZO!!!

PS: Tell me, Do you think the attack "Static Current" is cool?

[theRazor]

Wow! I haven't been following this discussion, but that Absol is really cool. Perhaps a bit overpowered concidering, but I love the concept. I've lamented the fact that the Absols up until now haven't been good for much (to me anyhow).

[Mail Jeevas]

Hey! There's a very cool Absol in one set. I think it's the one from Unseen Forces, it let's you draw a pokemon EX from your deck. it's nice. I'll post a card later or tomorrow...


ELGONZO!!!

[mew2005]

These cards are cool about makeing a legdary pokemon

[Blennix]

BTW, I know that the HP should be white, but if the HP is white, then the Name has to be white too, so... It was baaaaad.

The Pokémon name shood be black and the Hp should be white

Hey! There's a very cool Absol in one set. I think it's the one from Unseen Forces, it let's you draw a pokemon EX from your deck. it's nice. I'll post a card later or tomorrow...
huh?!? u started the thread

These cards are cool about makeing a legdary pokemon...
i think u forgot somewords

[Mail Jeevas]

Can you help me make a set, Bleenix? Like a shared set?

PM aboot it.

ELGONZO!!!