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Persona
March 7th, 2006, 06:38 PM
If you stand upon the highest peak
of the highest place in the world.
Can you dare to hope
To grow wings like eagles
and soar above the earth.
To see the world as the clouds do
over the wonders of the earth
over places dear at heart
or of memories that cause you pain.
Things that make you cry and ache
or smile and laugh
Can you feel a surge of power
like an energy field all it's own.
As eyes turn upward
to see you in all your glory.
In life can we achieve such splendor
that through the struggles of our lives.
We can soar above our problems
and find a reason to live
because...
When we step down from our mountain
Things are not so clear.
In the mist.
So rise to your feet.
As the mountain looms
glowing in her majesty.
A light for all to see.

please, any comments? i don't care if they are good or bad ones.

pink-tiger
March 18th, 2006, 07:14 AM
Wow, really good poem...
I really like it..pm me if you want 2 be my friend..and tell me when you make another one.I would love to read the next and next...^^