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Cherrion
March 24th, 2006, 02:17 PM
Hi

I am planning to do a pokemon fanfic. So far I have resonable experience. I have written a two part series which was lost when my flash disk broke. I have also written an Animorphs one which is currently not finished. I have now decided to try a pokemon fanfic. I have a very good idea of the plot. It will involve the main characters from the hoenn episodes(ash, may and so on). I also tend not to write in chapters and it ends up a big clock of tect so excuse me if I screw up.

I am not sure however of how to start it off. This is what I have got so far.

We join out heros on the way back to the kanto region. The sun is shining down as the ferry sliently glides through the water. Ash continues to look out to the north west waiting for the first glimpse of land.
"well Pikachu were heading home. I wonder what mum has in store for us this time. Remember what happened last time with Mr. Mime" Ash laughs
"Pika-pi" pikachu replies
Max runs up excitedly. "What other Pokemon do you have?" He asks.


that is all I have got so far. what do you think,

Lily
March 24th, 2006, 02:28 PM
It's understandable you're new at Pokemon fanfictions; however, spending a lot of effort would be advised. For one thing, many Pokemon fanfic authors would excuse this as unoriginal and trite, as there are no new concepts introduced within the usual group of Ash & co. If you have spell checker or a beta reader (someone who edits things for you before you post them), it'd be a benefit in your case. Try to incorporate creativity in your writing and definitely make it longer, or else your story [as of right now] is rather bland and unfinished. ^_^;

Cherrion
March 25th, 2006, 12:33 AM
Thanks. But that is an opening paragraph and there is never anything exciting in opening paragraphs. However I do have a few new conceps up my sleeve that will unfold later on. One of which people may find very interesting.

Drifblim
March 25th, 2006, 03:37 AM
What things in particular do you have in mind?

ash_rocks
March 25th, 2006, 03:54 AM
i dont think he will tell us his ideas crystal walrein

Cherrion
March 25th, 2006, 04:40 AM
you got that right. I am going to start on it now anyway. i will post it later on. Lets just say that Asm meets someone very special and has the battle of a lifetime.

Lily
March 25th, 2006, 07:46 AM
Thanks. But that is an opening paragraph and there is never anything exciting in opening paragraphs. However I do have a few new conceps up my sleeve that will unfold later on. One of which people may find very interesting.

...If the introductory paragraph is boring, do you think people will be interested? I'm not telling you to make it exciting, but there are stories that start out with such paragraphs. Crystal's intentions weren't to steal your ideas or anything, just help. XP

Good luck! ^_^