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Persona
March 25th, 2006, 08:53 AM
just some poem i wanted to write about angels

It is said there are Angels
In Heaven above
And they shine with the light
Of an inner love

Of these things
I had not a clue
But that was
Before I found you

For in you I’ve found
A love that is so right
It shines all around
With the brightest of light

It comes from somewhere
So deep within
That it has no beginning
And knows no end

Your love is a light
That brightens each day
Of all of the people
You see on your way

Where ever you go
Or whatever you do
All see the love
That you have inside you

That God sent you here
To a place where you’d be
Sharing such love
With someone like me

Is proof for me
That angels exist
And are filled with a love
That no man could resist

I thank God each day
For finding the time
For looking down on me
And making you mine

So yes there are Angels
In heaven above
I know because God
Sent me one to love

fallen_angel
March 25th, 2006, 06:40 PM
That is the best poem! I can't see anything that you need to change. ^_^ That's so good. I hope I can make a poem like that someday.

Persona
March 25th, 2006, 06:56 PM
thank you for the comment and i'm not that good =P

fallen_angel
March 25th, 2006, 06:57 PM
in my opinion it is and way better than mine. :) haha I know i'm weird.