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yuuka
March 25th, 2006, 09:50 AM
with eyes so bright
that shimer in the moon light
roaming across the grassy fields
with water that heals
the beautiful howls
that echoe with no bounds
icy winds are strong attacks
you surly can't beat that
all of these are things you should see
that lies with in n' will always be:pokeball:

Lily
March 25th, 2006, 11:08 AM
Suicune poetry? Still related to Pokemon, so I'll move this to Pokemon fanfiction. ^_^;

Madow
March 26th, 2006, 03:01 AM
Pretty good! I liked it!
10/10

~*!*~Tatsujin Gosuto~*!*~
April 1st, 2006, 11:02 AM
tHATS SO GREat

:t003:dark venusaur

emoBill™
April 1st, 2006, 01:04 PM
Aw, that was so cute! I loved it.

yuuka
April 6th, 2006, 05:07 AM
thanks but i still think it could use some work

Mouse
April 8th, 2006, 06:43 AM
Pretty ^_^ It flows so softly, which is a break from typical poetry. I'd rate it a 10/10, except you made some spelling errors:

Shimer = shimmer.
Moon light = moonlight.
Echoe = echo.
Surly = surely. (Surly is another word)

Other than the spelling errors, this is a lovely poem. I look forward to more of your poetry! Overall: 8/10.

Razer302
April 8th, 2006, 06:47 AM
thats great 10/10 if only i could do things as good as that