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.: Kira Yamato :.
April 2nd, 2006, 08:02 AM
~ Forever Yours ~

Love, I had always thought it would not happen to me

That it was a fairy tale. about the bird and bee

But like lightning, your love struck me straight trough the heart

Suddenly my life came down on me like a house of cards

It has taken over my body and soul and put them into your soft hands

And now, every night when I close my eyes, I am taken to far away lands

To a place where our heart and soul are together as one

Never to wake up, and dream forever, I wish I can.

If only these dreams that I have can become reality

Forever with you my life would regain its vitality

The feelings I have for you are like nothing I know off

But all I can do is proclaim to you my undying love

Although your heart belongs to another

I will always, forever, in eternity, be your lover.

~ Blind Truth ~
I loved you alot.
And I really cared.
But when I needed you,
you were not there.

I thought we were like family,
and best friends
I also thought we vowed,
that we will be friends till the end.

Every day I asked,
If I was friends with you.
You said you loved me,
and actually do.

You actually did not care,
You actually did not love me.
I keep trying to show you,
But you just could not see.

You really did not like me,
And wanted me dead.
I never knew that,
Because I have an empty head.

I know it was not worth it,
And you keep calling me lame.
I got so upset,
with your stupid little game.

I am gonna die so watch me,
Nothing from you I have gain,
Making me so mad
that I finally got insane.

I really did love you,
and thought of no other.
Come and watch me,
I am gonna sleep forever.

And when I am really dead,
and my existence seize,
Please come to my grave
and tell me to Rest In Peace

~ Iam not Gone ~
As the memories of old days disappear,
As should all your losses and fears.
I shall always be there for you,
Even though you start anew.
The days we spent so lost and worried,
Will always be there never buried.
You were always the bravest of us both,
And we had both taken the oath.
So as you stand there so brave,
While you weep upon my grave.
And while the days pass you by,
Just remember…I did not die.

well tell me what you guys think?

Midori Chi
April 9th, 2006, 04:42 PM
*tear*

WOW.

Those 2 were incredibly good!
(especially the 2nd one)

I could really feel the emotion. Plus, your rhyming and rhythm seem just fine;problemless.

I hope you'll make more poems. These 2 are great. ^^

.: Kira Yamato :.
April 9th, 2006, 05:00 PM
Thank you Midori ^^ finally someone looked at my poems ^^
Let me tell you what each means...well to me anyways:
~Forever yours~ this is the vow I made to my gf
~ Blind Truth ~ My thoughts about my ex-gf....who used me
~ Iam not gone ~ this poem was dedicated to my best friend that died....

Midori Chi
April 9th, 2006, 05:03 PM
Yikes. I'm sorry about your friend.
:surprised:

.: Kira Yamato :.
April 9th, 2006, 05:06 PM
*weak smile* It's ok....he may be gone, but not forgoten....

Midori Chi
April 9th, 2006, 05:09 PM
Yup, yup. ^^

Will you post other poems here? I'd like to read others. Everyone on this site are good poets. XD

.: Kira Yamato :.
April 9th, 2006, 05:12 PM
Iam working on some right now, when I get the time I will put them up.
^-^ Iam very happy you enjoy my poems, makes me happy to know that.

Midori Chi
April 9th, 2006, 05:13 PM
Yay! ^___^

You're welcome. XD

.: Kira Yamato :.
April 9th, 2006, 05:31 PM
Here is my new one:
~ The Pain of Love ~
Love is cruel,

Because the only thing I have on my mind is you

However all you seem to think of is him

So I wonder, is my love for you a sin

I wish to be with you and never alone

but my love for you makes me feel so lonesome

Lonesome knowing you are not with me

Oh why am I the only one to see

that you and I are ment to be togheter

ment to hold eachother in our arms forever

Yet you do not seem to feel the same

With all my heart and soul I wish a day came

In which you would declare to me your love

Because living a life without you is very tough…