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The Dash
April 10th, 2006, 11:14 AM
Ok so this is Poetry of sorts but I can't finish it. Little help?

Ive got one last chance to end this test,
One last feeling I can't caress.

One last chance to end this fight,
One last chance to do whats right.

One last chance to see this through,
One last chance to

One last chance to make you mine,
One last chance to

2 words i need to fill in those blanks...

Kaeru_ike
April 10th, 2006, 11:25 AM
This whas very........i hope you get some help to finish this.........
I tried to find a........that fits but i couldn't think of any...
^ o^ -(LOL)

The Dash
April 10th, 2006, 11:30 AM
Yeah its bad I know but i cant think of any words to finish it :p

Kalylia
April 11th, 2006, 02:40 PM
"To make this fine"?

It's hard to end a poem with the end rhymes "ine"

If I was you, I'd change it to something like...

"One more chance to get to you,
One more chance to just get through."

I dunno, whatever. Hope I could help a little.