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Sumomo & Kotoko
April 13th, 2006, 11:10 AM
A part of this is the theam song to my "comic" Raven Hood.

Three Shades of Gray

Do you know what its like
To see the world in black & white.
Two lefts don't make a right
Two wrongs don't make it right.

When the world has left your side
Standing on the road waiting for a ride
Every one else has past you by
But I've pulled over to see why

Lost, lonely, scared
Hidden, & feared.
How do you escape?
How do you see the color?
Why do you feel this way?
When all you are is
Three shades of gray

Your the wrong image of a hope
The reason that you've locked the gate
You won't let any one ever see
Cause its your own little twist of fate

Running won't do you any good
Face whats infront of you
But only if you could

Lost, lonely, scared
Hidden, & feared.
How do you escape?
How do you see the color?
Why do you feel this way?
When all you are is
Three shades of gray

Lost, lonely, scared
Hidden, & feared.
How do you escape?
How do you see the color?
Why do you feel this way?
When all you are is
Three shades of gray

One more thing you forgot to do
One last thing you pland
Try to stand alone
But only if you can

Lost, lonely, scared
Hidden, & feared.
How do you escape?
How do you see the color?
Why do you feel this way?
When all you are is
Three shades of gray

Do you know what its like
To see the world in black & white.

Midori Chi
April 13th, 2006, 02:14 PM
Wow.

*reads again*

This is really good.
The rhythm is really nice.
You have a few typos, but that's all I see wrong with it.

Keep up da good work. XD

Kalylia
April 13th, 2006, 02:45 PM
A few typo's/spelling errors (eg, "past" vs "passed"), but in general, and AMAZING poem. Thank you very much for sharing this with us, and I do hope to be seeing more of your work around here!

MegaFuz
April 14th, 2006, 07:01 AM
Pretty good. Like already mentioned you have a few typos, but overall, I like it.

phantom_zangetsu
April 14th, 2006, 07:04 AM
hmm....nice one there...another magnificent sad poem...i just love looking and making them...

Sumomo & Kotoko
April 14th, 2006, 06:04 PM
Thank you all :)

And it is a song, not a poem. ;)