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code zerro the deluge
April 13th, 2006, 04:06 PM
People people settle down now and listen to the latest
Now turn you heads to the greatest
I am money powered
Like you have it I doubt it
I am back with a hit
But you are stuck with a stick
Causing anger almost to be
All you ever say is you hate me
To bad sucker
I got more than she wanna give
Take a vacation I am back for a bit

The greatest
It's my latest
The greatest
You the fakest

I am a freestyler
Or rapper r&b singer to
Pull out a was and give you a dollar
Tell your girl stop calling me boo
Shoot shoot shoot you
Sike no killing
Homey just listen I am the greatest one living
I am the king coming back on my thrown
You is my servent call out to the bone

The greatest
It's my latest
The greatest
You the fakest

The greatest
It's my latest
The greatest
You the fakest

Best rapper alive
Best rapper alive
best rapper alive

The greatist

~Ozy~
April 13th, 2006, 04:20 PM
Eh. It lacks compared to some of your other work. Both reading and rapping it aloud, the rhythm is far more broken and it has little to no emotional impact.

phantom_zangetsu
April 13th, 2006, 04:23 PM
hmm...you know? you should be a rapper someday....(heh, waddup dawg? lol!) i think its much more of a rap than a song...am i right?

code zerro the deluge
April 13th, 2006, 04:36 PM
heheheh yeah i know what you mean. I might be a writer. thanx for you comments.

pink-tiger
April 14th, 2006, 05:41 AM
I like it...Its good you share what you like to do..

code zerro the deluge
April 14th, 2006, 05:47 AM
thank you. i just thought maybe I could be a writer.