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Kaeru_ike
April 14th, 2006, 11:36 AM
I watch the leaves float around me in circles.
It's like the time has stopped around me.
As the leaves dances before me, i get sleepy.
The world turns into a circus, the wind is music, the leaves is dancers.
Suddently the leaves falls on the ground.
The wind turns into a breeze, from an orchestra to a solo.
The time starts and everything's like it were before.
It's like the circus of wind never were and won't ever be.

phantom_zangetsu
April 15th, 2006, 2:37 AM
wind...heh, my fave element...i like your poem as uch as i like wind...heh, emotions a little bit..err...tiny...but still a very nice poem.

Kaeru_ike
April 15th, 2006, 2:49 AM
Even if it's positive or negative, thanx^.^

MegaFuz
April 15th, 2006, 9:04 PM
Pretty good work from a 12 year old. There are a few mistakes in there, but I like the descriptiveness. Nice job. XD