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Sumomo & Kotoko
April 14th, 2006, 06:52 PM
Here is another one of my songs. Please enjoy. :)

Just an Emotional Wound

I can walk out of here with out a scrach,
But I walk out with an emotional wound.
Theres a differance between lonely and alone,
I doubt you've felt either one.
(Just an emotional wound)

I've fell so many times,
Its not even worth getting up.
I know I'll be back down again,
So I might as well give up.

Not only do I take care of my self,
But every single one of you.
Maybe its time to go some where else,
Leave my home and start some where new.

I can walk out of here with out a scrach,
But I walk out with an emotional wound.
Theres a differance between lonely and alone,
I doubt you've felt either one.
(Just an emotional wound)

Remember what happend to the boy that cryed wolf?
Keep asking for help when you don't need it,
And I'll stop saving you.
If life were a game then fine,
I give up, I've finally quit.

If only what I felt on the inside was on the out side,
Then I'd be a walking corpse.
Try and count how many times I've cried,
Just give up every single time like I have.

I can walk out of here with out a scrach,
But I walk out with an emotional wound.
Theres a differance between lonely and alone,
I doubt you've felt either one.
(Just an emotional wound)

Not only do I take care of my self,
But every single one of you.
Maybe its time to go some where else,
Leave my home and start some where new.

Remember what happend to the boy that cryed wolf?
Keep asking for help when you don't need it,
And I'll stop saving you.
If life were a game then fine,
I give up, I've finally quit.

I can walk out of here with out a scrach,
But I walk out with an emotional wound.
Theres a differance between lonely and alone,
I doubt you've felt either one.
(Just an emotional wound)

Your just another emotional wound.

Midori Chi
April 20th, 2006, 03:29 PM
*tear*
It's very sad. Though, it was really good!
I liked the rhythm and the rhyming. I see nothing wrong with it.

Keep up the good work. ^________________________^

DarkFenris
April 20th, 2006, 07:06 PM
its sad, but most songs are sad and they are sad becuase they come from the heart. well done it great!!!!

Sumomo & Kotoko
April 21st, 2006, 11:23 AM
Thank you both very much!!

I thought no one was gonna reply after I saw it near the bottom of the page.http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y163/RavenMaster09/artstuff/SMILE3.jpg

But thank you both for reading!! http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y163/RavenMaster09/artstuff/SMILE16.jpg