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Kaeru_ike
April 15th, 2006, 03:02 AM
The day is over here comes afternoon
The sun goes lower
It will happen soon

When the sun is gone
The clowds start shine
I'm the one
The sky is mine

The clowds turn to gold
The world turns red
The day is old
The sun is dead

The gold dissapears
Light gets black
The stars looks like tears
The moon is back

Emma
April 15th, 2006, 06:37 AM
That's a really nice poem, lots of Rhyming and it makes perfect sense :P Really good.

Kaeru_ike
April 15th, 2006, 08:46 AM
Thanks alot for thatXP I get so happy and get more interest in poetry when people say things like thatXDXDXD