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Lady of the Shadows
April 18th, 2006, 11:53 PM
Any way here are a few poems.


Pain

Whay i am here?
All i feel is pain when i come here.
I have been lost but yet i find my place here.
World of pain where i left is here agian when i feel lost.
Feels like it has been years but i know only been one.
Why can't i just be lost?!
Why to the pain?!
Why?!

Feeling

Tears are down my face as i read thoughs words.
Why am i crying like this?
The words should mean nothing..
You should mean nothing to me.
I left wanting to be free of the feeling.
Fear of how i felt for you and what that ment.
I ran in to the world..to find my place with out you.
Now i read your words and cry becosue i feel agian.
Why have my feeling not changed as i have?

Thats all i have right now. I know i am not that good but my poems like my art helps me.

phantom_zangetsu
April 19th, 2006, 12:33 AM
hmm....nice poem...i used to feel like that before...^___^ keep it up!

MegaFuz
April 19th, 2006, 10:35 AM
Poetry helps me vent my feelings too. I tend to write more in metaphors than coming right out and expressing my feelings the way you have here. I like the second one better than the first, but they are both pretty good. XD

Lady of the Shadows
April 19th, 2006, 10:16 PM
Thank you both for your posts.
Better replys than i thought i get for them.
They were really just sper of the moment porems writen out of pure feeling.
So there not as good as fi i had thought it out. Though a good chunk of my poems are write like that.

Yeah the 2nd one now that read them after the fact i like better as well.

DarkFenris
April 19th, 2006, 10:41 PM
they are good....well done lady of the shadows....*keeps distance from LOTS*

Lady of the Shadows
April 19th, 2006, 11:31 PM
Thank you for the comment.

*looks at Midnight Shadow and walks away* Whatever...i give up....

DarkFenris
April 20th, 2006, 03:02 AM
im sorry cass....pease forgive me.....i dont want to annoy you, i knowi am

Lady of the Shadows
April 20th, 2006, 09:41 PM
It is ok really. Just confuse me sometimes. Any way not the place to talk about that.